MN/AR - O Re Piya.. DISCONTINUED :'( Note at Pg68 - Page 18

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Posted: 14 years ago
When are u updating?? .. i cant wait!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ..SaM-DeSiRe..

When are u updating?? .. i cant wait!!


Probably on Sep 1! Pakka! Till then, you finish reading 'You Are Mine'! 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww bidu I seriously don't like this emotional back mailing of armaan to mayank and ridi to nupur.
I was expecting some conversation of Mayur after engagement and then some understanding,and mayank realizing that nupur is the one for him

But anyways now as they agreed,I hope this would happen after marriage😳
But please shadi se pahle thoda milna milana jaroor Mayur ko😛
and ho sake to their cute fights and all😳

I hope u ll take care of this😳

Anyways nicely written.

Love
Ruchi❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank you for your wonderful responses. I truly feel blessed. Some of you have said that you didn't like the emotional blackmailing track. Well, thanks for being honest. I appreciate it. The only thing I'd say that it was a part of the story and hopefully you'll understand the reason of writing such thing after reading the promo at the end. Anyways, enough making you people bore. Enjoy the chapter. 😃

- Bidzy❤️



Chapter #4


Radhika was pacing in front of the main entrance. "Maa, aap plz baitho and relax. Don't get too impatient." Nupur said concernedly. "Waise, yeh Riddhima kaha hai? Main dekh kar aati hu." Saying that, she went to Riddhima's room.

There was a knock at the door. "Shayad woh log aa gaye honge.", Radhika said with a glowed face and opened the door. As she met with her friend Shilpa, she smiled and hugged her, and received an equal warming hug back. Mayank and Armaan pressed their palms together and formally smiled.

Radhika led the guests in and made them sit on the sofa. "Aane mein koi problem toh nahi hui?", she asked. "Koi problem nahi hui. Waise, tum aise formal hona bandh karo and relax.", Shilpa said friendly and Radhika smiled. "Accha friendly nahi hoti aur teri bahu ko bulaati hu.", she said and went to call Nupur.

Mayank looked around and sighed. "Nervousness ho rahi hai?", Armaan teasingly whispered in his ear. "Nahi!", replied Mayank giving him a glare.

"Yeh lo Nupur aa gayi.", Shilpa said delightfully. Following her sight, Mayank and Armaan looked at that direction. "Yeh yaha?", thought Armaan confusedly.

Nupur, in white suit with silver embroidery on it and a red dupatta around her neck, came out of her room keeping her eyes lowered. Holding her arms, Radhika and Riddhima were on her sides. Mayank couldn't take his eyes off from her. When he saw her the first time, he didn't expect at all to meet her again in this situation. A slight smile curved on his lips.

Riddhima left her grip from Nupur's arm with broken heart and stood aside. Radhika made Nupur sit.

"Kaisi ho Nupur beta?", asked Shilpa with motherly love. "Theek hu aunty.", Nupur slowly replied and raised her eyes to see Mayank, but lowered her eyes again in nervousness finding his gaze on her.

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Armaan stood beside Riddhima and said casually, "Hi!"

Hearing a manly voice which was indeed familiar to her, she made nervous expression. "Aap?", she asked in disbelief.

"Oh! So aapne mujhe pehechan liya, aur woh bhi ek hi mulaakat mein?", Armaan asked in surprise.

Riddhima pitifully smiled and said, "Aakho ki roshni nahi hai naa iss liye awaazein yaad karke logo ko pehechan leti hu. It's like upar waale ne ek power chin liya toh dusri power aur accha kar diya."

Armaan felt sad after hearing it, but to keep the environment lightened, he said in an appreciative tone, "Arey wah! Yeh toh aur bhi badiya baat hai. Tumhare pas woh hai jo hum logo ke pas bhi nahi hai."

This time, Riddhima genuinely smiled and said, "Thanks for the compliment!"

"Your welcome. Waise, I'm Armaan Malik, Mayank's best friend.", said Armaan friendly and extended his hand.

"I'm Riddhima, Nupur's younger sister.", said Riddhima sweetly.

Armaan smilingly gazed Riddhima and held her hand gently. Riddhima felt the rate of her heartbeats at the highest speed.

"Nice meeting you, Riddhima.", Armaan said tenderly and shook hands with her.

Riddhima felt a kind of strange happiness inside her. What and why it was, she couldn't understand. "Mujhe bhi!", she said in the same warm way and tried to behave normal.

Armaan scratched his forehead with his index finger and thinking of something to start talking on. "Kya baat karu? Uff!", he muttered under his breath. Suddenly something struck his mind and he said guiltily, "Uss din ke liye main tumse sorry kehena chahta hu."

"Kyun?", Riddhima asked, amazed.

"Bas mujhe laga ki tum bura maan gayi hogi humare pehele mulaakat ke baad. I don't know the reason but I just felt afterwards that something I did had hurt you that day.", answered Armaan in a low tone.

"Arey nahi! Aisi koi baat nahi hai, sacchi mein. Actually, to be honest, I don't like when people offer me help. I feel like being sympathized. But seriously, it's absolutely okay.", said Riddhima in a way to make Armaan feel better.

"Oh I'm really sorry. I didn't mean to hurt you.", said Armaan in a weak voice.

Riddhima took her hand upwards and said softly, "Apna haath dijiye."

Confused, Armaan placed his hand on hers. Riddhima entwined her fingers with his. "It's absolutely fine, Armaan!"

Armaan intensely stares at their entwined fingers and said unconsciously with a dreamy smile on his face, "Perfect!"

"Jee?", Riddhima asked in confusion.

Armaan fumbled, "I mean.. um.. tumne mujhe maaf kar diya iss liye perfect. Waise, ek baat poochu?"

"Kya?", asked Riddhima.

"Mujhse dosti karogi?", Armaan said in the most caring way, and Riddhima felt her heart filled with contentment.

"Iss puri dunia mein meri dost sirf meri behen aur maa hai, par I wouldn't mind having a new friend.", said Riddhima and gave a glittering smile. Armaan kept on admiring her angelic beauty and innocent smile.

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Mayank and Nupur were standing in the balcony and enjoying the fresh air.

"Mujhe aapse.."

"Mujhe kuch.."

They spoke up at a time and at last, broke in a giggle.

"Pehele please main kahu?", Nupur asked pleadingly yet cutely and Mayank couldn't help but nod smilingly.

"Aab jab ki humari shaadi hone jaa rahi hai, main kuch zaruri baatein, jo ki mere baade mein hai, aap ko bataana chahti hu.", said Nupur seriously.

Mayank keenly asked, "Kya?"

Nupur's eyes were filled with tears as she remembered something of her past. "Maa papa ke divorce ke baad mera shaadi par se vishwaas hi uth gaya. Zakhm abhi bhi itne taazein hai ki shaadi jaise rishte par believe karne ka maan hi nahi karta.", she said in a teary voice.

Mayank was amazed at her genuine confession and most importantly, her straight-forward attitude, and to tell the truth, somewhere he actually liked it.

"Yeh shaadi main sirf maa ki khushi ke liye kar rahi hu.", Nupur said and her voice was easily reflecting how much to an extent she loved her mother. Tears slowly rolled down from her eyes.

Mayank took out his handkerchief and giving it to Nupur, he said friendly, "Main bhi yeh shadi sirf maa ki khushi ke liye kar raha hu."

Nupur wiped off her tears and smiled knowing that they had agreed to get married for the same reason. After a while, she said, "Sorry!"

"Kyun?", Mayank asked, surprised.

"Aise ro diya, bas issi liye. Pata nahi jab bhi senti ho jati hu, tab rona aa jata hai.", Nupur said in an innocence-filled tone.

Mayank chuckled and said, "Senti hone par insaan rohta hi hai."

Nupur understood what a silly thing she said, and at last, she laughed, and with her, Mayank laughed, too.

"Waise, mujhe bhi aap ko kuch bataana hai apne baade mein.", said Mayank with an uneasiness in his voice.

"Kya?", Nupur asked.

"Mere zindagi mein sab se upar meri mom aur Gunjan hai, uske baad mera kaam hai. I love working, it's like my first love and I seriously can't live without it.", said Mayank and his expression turned from discomfort to excitement.

Nupur was in awe seeing his dedication for his work. She always liked such kind of personalities and he was obviously one of them for sure.

"That sounds really nice. I appreciate it.", Nupur said with a real smile and Mayank felt as if he had got a noble prize. Everyone considered him rather strange or unique but there was someone who appreciated him truly.

"Mayank", "Nupur,"

They heard their parents calling them inside, and exchanging smiles at each other for a final time, they went inside together.

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Promo:

"Shaadi ka shubh mohurat aaj se theek 1 hafte baad ki hai."

Mayank and Nupur nervously look each other. The mothers congratulate each other and their kids. Armaan smiles, but Riddhima seems happy as well as sad. Noticing that, Armaan placed his hand on her shoulder and said supportively, "Riddhima, don't feel heartbroken. Tumhara friend tumhare saath hai."

Samjhote se shuru huye Mayank-Nupur ki iss shaadi ke rishte mein kya pyaar apni jagah banaa paayega?

Riddhima se chut raha hai apni behen aur sabse pyaari saheli Nupur ka saath aur woh apne life mein ek khaalipan sa mehsus kar rahi hai. Kya woh khaalipan Armaan bhar paayega?

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I truly hope that everyone liked the chapter and the promo. Sorry as it was short. Seriously guys, my brain wasn't working that much as I was too exhausted because of school. Still, I managed to write up something according to what I planned. 😳

B/w I have decided to update this FF on Saturday so that I'll be able to write it with a relaxed mind, and in this way, I can think of some more ideas. 😉

Please feel free to criticize. Waiting for it. Don't forget to press the like button. 😊

Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
yay first! hehe awesome! wish it were longer! but soo cutee
loved AR

esp when armaan was like perfect
i was like hayeee

hehecont soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Really awesome update!!! love it...
MN moment n also AR !!! they're just amazing...
hmmm so friends now... great thing!!!
Marriage wil be really nice n the promo seems interesting with Nupur-Mayank n Riddhima's feelings ...Riddhima will fee that loneliness but then now Armaan is there...hope everything turns out fine...

Cont soon
Tc
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Posted: 14 years ago

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will edit soon! 😊
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That was an AMAZING PART! i love how Armaan is soo kind. I mean not that many people have the courage to apologize like that. and Riddhima is sweet. she forgave him sooo easily. I loved their scenes. I am really glad that they are friends now because the first step to love is friendship 😉
and Nupur and Mayank are really cute too. I was really surprised when Nupur talked about how she doesnt believe in marriages and stuff. They have soo much in common, if only they realize it soon. I hope that both the couples have a really nice connection and that they both fall in love soon!
Edited by kinshuklover95 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved the update
Continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
i loved it yar...
it was amazzing update...
armaan offered her friendship soo sweet of him...
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely updt
loved starting of AR friendship & mayur conv
nice promo..cont soon
thanks for the pm

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