New SS - MG - A VICIOUS LOVESTORY - Part 4 - Pg 34 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome concept..
loved the prologue very much..
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Nice strt
She saved the man than what trouble will she face
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gr8 start..
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update coming up!! Anyone waiting??
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Part 1

In the City Hospital, Andheri

On the count of 3 - 1, 2, and 3 they pumped his heart and slapped the oxygen mask on his face. They were successful in stabilizing his heart beats; he had nearly lost his life. Due to stress and shock his heart failed, the doctors were thankful to that young lady who didn't allow him to fall unconscious else situation would have been critical.

Meanwhile at the Handa House:

She opened her laptop entering the password she logged into the system. Clicking on the google chrome icon she typed www.facebook.com and put in her login details. 'Aahaa, teen notifications hai, let me see' it read as 'Aaron has tagged you in one of his photo'. 'Hmph bekaar hai, zaroor independence ka photo hoga, mujhe kya karna hai. Waise bhi dumb photos aur farmville ke alaawa usse aata kya hai'. She quickly scrolled through the next 2 notifications it said 'Sunaina and Divya like your profile picture'. 'Bas sirf do likes, kutto, kamino ko mera, matlab Geet Handa ka profile pic pasand nahi aaya. Chado jee dekha Babaji abhi agar meine apna status single se in a relationship dala hota toh khoob saare comments aate. Ghar mein bethe bethe bhi bore ho chuki ho, kya karu haan apna naya status daalti hu. Oye teri mein toh uss uncle ko bhool hi gayi, unka toh koi pata bhi nahi hai. Bas unki jaan bachaa lena Babaji! Haan uss uncle ke baare mein status daalti hu.'

Saying that she typed 'I saved a man who ended up having a heart attack today at the Planet Mall. See it's not necessary to be a doctor to save someone's life. After all only Geet Handa could do it.' With that she pressed the post button.

Back at the City Hospital - Reception

'How dare you, do you know whom you're speaking to?' he yelled. 'Maan beta aap please shaant hojaye' said an elderly lady. He raised his hand silencing her and hissed 'I am Maan Singh Khurana, if I want i can buy this hospital of yours like this' flicking his fingers in front of the receptionist. The lady seemed scared; fear was evident on her face. 'Now tell me where my Bauji is?' he barked. 'Sir he is in VVIP section ROOM # 3. Walk straight and then first right, second door to your left.' she replied shakingly. Giving her a final glare he walked off.

Back to Handa House:

'Dekha Babaji yeh log kitne kaminey hai, jaise status badla sab kuud pare jaane ke liye aur jab profile pic badla toh sab shyaane ban gaye. Bhaad mein jaaye sab ke sab, mein chali offline. Let them tarpofy.'

VVIP SECTION ROOM # 3:

'Doctor how is Bauji now?' Maan questioned him who was busy writing his Bauji's report. 'See Mr. Khurana as of now he is out of danger, we doubt if he will be able to walk for some time now. It was intense stroke chances of him being paralyzed are high but that would be temporary. He is lucky to have survived it. Just make sure to keep him out of any sort of stress.' 'Yes doctor'. 'Oh welcome back Mr. Khurana we are glad to see you. Don't stress yourself please I'll send a nurse in she will be here any moment now' he left saying that.

'Bauji yeh sab kaise hua, kisne kiya yeh sab, kiske wajah se hua yeh, tell me bauji mein usse nahi chodonga!' pleaded Maan. 'Sunil beta yeh sab itna achanak kaise hua?' pleaded Savitri.

Sunil's eyes kept wandering to find that girl who saved his life. Meanwhile the nurse entered 'Mr. Khurana and Mrs. Khurana will you please excuse, we need to make the patient comfortable.' Saying that she walked upto him and carefully removed the mask from his face, adjusting the bed little she walked off to call the doctor.

'Beta woh larki...' 'Kaun larki Bauji? 'Wahi larki jinhone humare saath...' 'Kaha Bauji aur kaunsi larki?' 'Wahi mall me mili thi aur usne hi hume...' 'Bas Bauji mein sab samajh gaya, ab aap yeh batayein agar aap usse dekheinge toh pehchaan lege' 'Haan beta kyun nahi usi ki wajah se hum aaj yaha hai...agar usne...'

'Mr. Sunil Singh Khurana' the doctor raised his voice 'Aap ko aaram ki sakht zaroorat hai naki baat karne ki. Aap please relax kijiye. Mr. Maan aap yeh dawai le aayein.' Maan nodded and left to bring those medicines. 'Mrs. Savitri Khurana kya aap bahar intezaar karengi?' 'Ji Doctor' replied Savitri and walked off to the waiting area.

The doctor did the basic test and advised him to relax as it was not good for his heart neither for his health. Sunil Khurana nodded his head and closed his eyes. Meanwhile, Maan ordered for the paramedics to meet him ASAP he wanted a sketch of that bloody girl because of whom his Bauji was in here. Both the paramedics and the sketcher arrived, according to their description a sketch was made and the girls face came out.

Maan rushed back to his Bauji's room to take a final confirmation on this face. He saw his Dadimaa waiting outside upon enquiring he came to know that the doctor was still inside. He didn't want the doctor to be present during the father - son confrontation, he waited, and time seemed to tick away slowly. Finally he was out, the doctor once again advised him to let him rest and not to give him any stress. Giving a curt nod he waited until the doctor disappeared into corridors of the hospital, asking his Dadimaa to wait outside he quietly went in, touched his Bauji's hand. 'Maan beta mein theek hu, chinta karni ki koi zaroorat nahi hai... kya tumne Madhuri ko bataya...' 'Bauji please aap kuch mat kahiye, doctor ne aapko aaram karne ko kaha hai. Aap please aaram kijiye, lekin usse pehle bas yeh tasveer dekhkar confirm karo ki yehi larki thi mall mein'. Sunil nodded his head and pointed him to show the photo, Maan slowly revealed the sketch; his Bauji nodded and affirmed the sketch. 'Yeh wahi larki hai Maan jinhone hume...' 'Bauji ab ek aur shabd nahi, theek hai aap aaram karo hum yehi aapke pass hai'. With that Maan left the room allowing his father to rest.

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Dekho ab toh meine 24 hours se pehle hi updates de diya hai.

Leave me with lots of, no I mean infinite number of comments, like bhi kardo, bechari bacchi neend mein bhi type kar rahi thi.

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Me signing off till then Shaba Khair, Goodnight, Adieu.

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Oye if anyone expert in making banners, collages reading this do let me know yaar. Mujhe contract dena hai is SS ke liye!!

Muwaah Senorita's - Asma

Edited by hansasma - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
Awesome part
maan mu about geet
she safe his life
poor geet what will happen next
loved it
pls cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
Maan ki prob kya hai
Why cant he let his father complete his sentence
I so hate that
Now all gadbad he will do
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
Oh No . . . . I get whats going to happen now . . . YIKES!

Liz
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Posted: 13 years ago
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welcomeback asma
when a yu going to update
other FF
dear
congrats new SS
interesting concept
lovely chacater
oh so maan thinks geet did something
to his dad to be in this condition
why do i feel maan going to take
revenge
awesome part
love it
cont soonnn
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