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Marvee Khan

@marvee-khan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#921

Joining you Hope😃 Marvee reporting in full action😆

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Fatima

@desigirl_18

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Posted: 14 years ago

#922

Yay more spamsters!! Hi Marvee!! i love reading ur ffs too...so far just read the hot parts of all of them 😉 i am a behoodi u see!!! now waiting for this behooda lip lady to come back!!!!

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Marvee Khan

@marvee-khan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#923

@desigirl, I totally understand what you mean!!! That's what I do a lot of the times too, just go and read the hot parts🤣

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Marvee Khan

@marvee-khan

Explorer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#924

I'M GOING TO REPOST MY SONG IN CASE YOU MISSED IT THERE NADIA🤣 REMEMBER I WROTE THIS WITH A KHARAB AC SO IT'S NOT THAT GREAT, BUT IT SHOULD MAKE YOU SMILE!!!

NAHIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sorry I haven't commented recently but it's just because university is starting and all but please update na😃. I am desperately waiting for a MAANEET scene in your hot writing😉

You know what I'm going to write you a song to make you feel better😆

Behoodi Nadia lights my day

Her writing's found a place in my heart

And it's here to stay

Behoodi Nadia is just so great

She makes me wanna love

and forget all the hate

Behoodi Nadia we're all waiting

For another wonderful update

that will leave us hyperventilating!!!

🤣Sorry I know it's not that my best piece of writing but my A.C has suddenly stopped working and the heat is eating me up so my brain's a bit dysfunctional right now. BUTTT i hope it made you smile and will make you want to update again!!!😃

Cheers, love you

-Marvee

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Fatima

@desigirl_18

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#925

Marvee good one!! and haha yup love reading hot parts being the besharam i am! Now i am inspired to write some poetry for Nadia:

Arz kiya hai😆

Behoodi Nadia hai upset😒

Isliye woh karnay gayi hai rest🥱

Chalo chalo jaldi se karo comment😳

Taakay humein milay ek hot Maneet moment!!☺️

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mandymore

@mandymore

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#926

Hey naddia dear,dont get dishearten,u r an amazing write n I luv ur wrk,its jst dat being in hstl I dont get time to cmmnt soon but I read n ammnt on every prt whenevr I get time,so plz update soon.chalo chalo be a behooda lady n smile 😛

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#927

someone has been on a roll!! 😃...which is good for me..i have three updates to read!! yay!! 😃..

Chapter 15

the picturization of Geet sitting in front of the fountain...her knees drawn up...and Maan just staring at her...its amazing...just...really beautiful scene!! 👏...the scene between Vicky and Maan was cute and funny...he is that obvious...and its not that Geet hasnt noticed...i think she's just in denial...pagal ladki!! 😆😆😆...Vicky talking about Dadi being on a mission...too funny!! 🤣 looks like full family and then some are all on board for Maneet's relationship to get a jumpstart!! he he 😉...i absolutley LOVED Rajji brushing off Vicky like that!!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣...

Chapter 16

😲 munda toh bohot bold hai..."main tumhe mrs MSK banake rahunga"...lage raho MSK...lage raho...best of luck to ya!! 👍🏼...i loved how Dadi bhi kuch kaam nahin...she just put the proposal out there all willy-nilly!! ha ha...aab Geet kahaan jayega...the entire house is after her to give Maan a chance...dadi, vicky and rajji...soon nakul too will say something!!! 😆😆

Chapter 17

khurana brothers are indeed a sight to behold!! ha ha 😆...the poor Handa women...they are SOOO GONE!!! 😉😉...Rajji bhi...😛...yeh Geet bhi naa...pata nahin kaise kaise ladkoon ke saath dance karne chali gayi!! uff!! ...of course...i knew Maan would rescue her...loved it!!

and oye!! you behoodi!! dont you are stop!! you have to continue...aaise kaise beech mein chod deti...at least you get 80 comments...i have just as many members on my PM list and i count my lucky stars when i get half those comments!!! tu jaldi vapas aa varna...main tujhse chodungi nahin...ill borrow my twinnies pink bulldozer and run you over...Babaji ki kasam!! 😛

JAZ