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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Aniee, & friends,

Firstly I m sorry for commenting late..

Now coming to the update'.By the time I finished reading this part 2 points popped up in my brain. They are''.. one to readers.

1. Readers/Friends,

Have u ever met this kind of devil in your life??????

My advise for you guys is''.pls stay away from this kind of devil because u don't want to see your friends (only male) with out fingers, hands, legs'etc' right??????

& yes'. I guaranty u that he will never harm u,,, instead' he will only harm your beloved ones to get back at u'

I know u guys may ask'. what about u???

Friends'. I have never met this kind of devil & will never in my future'.. now u may again ask how do u know about future'.

I m sure because this Aniee's devil would not go behind a happily married woman right??????😃😃😃

Hey Aniee u better send this question to all your readers by PM. whats say

(easy girl...I m just kidding)

& my 2nd point was to Aniee..

Girl'. U did awesome job 👏👏👍🏼with your title selection' when I saw the title for the first time..I felt it was normal but after reading this part'I felt the title did justice for the ff.This Maan is devil indeed. If a devil fall in love'.. This is what will happen'. God (or Aniee😉????) has to save poor Geet

(continued in next post... posted in page NO. 69)
Edited by harshdb - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hayeee baba ji. yeh kya ho gaya. maine itna badi baat kaise nahin padhi. hayee hayee annie. maan cuts rahul finger. nahinnn yaar. yeh nahin ho sakta. i re read it now with open eyes and got the big shock that how i din't see in morning.actually when i read the update i was just got up and my eyes were kind of closed.
annie. yeh kya. i like the devil but not brutal yaar. or hamara maan kabhi brutal nahin hooo sakta. pls pls don't make him insane. mera tooo dil ro raha hai. ab mujhe neend bhi nahin aayeeegeee. hayee baba ji mein kya karoon.😆😆😆😉😉.
kaise is devil to annie ke devil dimaag se bachooo. ab ye or kaun sa surprsie daine wali hooo.
dare u gave us surprise something like this😆😆😆😆😉😉😉. don't see the monitcons and feel happy. i am seriously gussa mein hoonnn.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jasraj123

hayeee baba ji. yeh kya ho gaya. maine itna badi baat kaise nahin padhi. hayee hayee annie. maan cuts rahul finger. nahinnn yaar. yeh nahin ho sakta. i re read it now with open eyes and got the big shock that how i din't see in morning.actually when i read the update i was just got up and my eyes were kind of closed.
annie. yeh kya. i like the devil but not brutal yaar. or hamara maan kabhi brutal nahin hooo sakta. pls pls don't make him insane. mera tooo dil ro raha hai. ab mujhe neend bhi nahin aayeeegeee. hayee baba ji mein kya karoon.😉.
kaise is devil to annie ke devil dimaag se bachooo. ab ye or kaun sa surprsie daine wali hooo.
dare u gave us surprise something like this😉. don't see the monitcons and feel happy. i am seriously gussa mein hoonnn.



🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
WELL SAID BUDDY...KEEP IT UP👍🏼IT WAS FUNNY
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Posted: 14 years ago

Seriously girl… it was scary…. Such violence??? Buddy I must say u did an awesome job with this scary update.… we indeed got scared..

in your previous update (in Irr.Kidn) u made us laugh with the Rishi's character and now u scared the hell out of us with this Maan.. its not easy… for that…….⭐️👏👍🏼


Now coming to the update…

Maan did under stand her problem with the first dress.. he gave hersari to ware ... to that's nice.

So sweet….. Geet has got such an adorable brother… (chalo at least one thing is good)

Wow that poem by "jasraj 123……." Was excellent. Well suited for the situation and was showing maan's feelings…

"Don't cry I have told you before these water drops means nothing to me.. nothing..! Just remember what I am telling you.."

If it means nothing to him….. then why was he asking her not to cry….? That means something to him…..well done girl… u wrote it well..

"No I wont kill you because I can never harm you.. but I will kill that person.. he answered in determined tone that made her shiver.."

See I told u guys in my previous post….Maan will never harm Geet but he will harm only her beloved ones.

The Shocked & terrified Geet….. u showed it well buddy… well done…

Keep it up good work……. U really scared me girl with this update…..👏👏👏

Now coming to your notes……

"And secondly I need suggestions from all of u..
I am planning to start a new FF.. title in my mind are"

Girl believe me I didn't even get time to think yesterday….. I went to my friends place who is just back from 2 months vacation

Yesterday all I did was talk & eat…..gosh.. I put on 1 kg. Weight in one day…… now I have to spend extra hours in garden for walk to loose the it…..

Pls give me some time to think on your title ….

"and @ranjeeta @pia @ harshbd @ arushi @speechless..
I had gala time yesterday talking to u guys.. totally loved it..
We should do it more often"

yaa dear me too loved it & I would love tooo do it more often……..


Edited by harshdb - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
👏awesome update👏
loved it❤️
rahul ki to band baj gayi
waiting for next part😊
continue soon😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey annie
that was super update
i liked it
but why maan is behaving like monster i know u have kept name for him in this ad devil then to yaar
hope u will continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update Annie Omg maan chopped the finger of Rahul... I m afraid how will geet love maan ...maan is so violent yaar
continue super soon
love-Piya
Edited by piya- - 14 years ago
harshdb thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

@sumusumu

"Am madly in love with this devil..."

R u sure? Pls think about your friends yaar..

@bansipatel

"Amazing update...!!
maan is really possessive regarding geet...
n he actually made her wear that dress...
cruel kahika...!!
but loved him..."

Ohh u too… girls pls think about your friends dear….

@lively-piia

"eally dis maan is a real devil...too possessive, too voilent...

hmm...i m seriously scared 4 geet...

but still let's see hw the story moves...

thanx 4 pm...

and yup its nice to goof around i mean chatted arnd...

though on my irr.kid thread...my first favi...lol

continue...

chao"

Hey pia,,,,, Its nice indeed. U r a lecturer? I didn't expect this…. I thought u to be a student… nice to here this… but I do have lecturers phobia 😉u know …… when I was in college… I never use to complete assessment on time due to this crazy habit of reading.

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Posted: 14 years ago
nice

pm me wen next update
SilentMelody thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

anii ye kesa sceary update tha...
BABA JI hmari sweet si anii devil bnti ja rahi ha...
kya karwa dia hmare maan se...
he cutted rahul's finger...uff
BABA JI hmari anii ko maha devil hone se bacha lo...pta nai aagay kya krwa de maan se...
v all have very weak hrts...v cant bear our anii like this...
yaar srsly even im thinking like @ piya...how will geet love this devil...
super interesting...
anii kya curosity bana di sb readers k liye...
u was ri8 we will love this maan bt we will also hate him...
u r jst making us confuse yaar...

well anii doing awsome job...

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