G/M SS: 24 hours.Thread 2.Chapter 8 The End, Pg 64

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madhu.pmlist

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Posted: 14 years ago

#271

Originally posted by: Newdime
Hi Madhu...howz it going.? I shall respond u later typing with one finger and other on the phone.😆

haha dont worry! me too shall come later 😉

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Krishna

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Posted: 14 years ago

#272

Di! I have a present for you! lol. Check your inbox :)

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Shaheda

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Posted: 14 years ago

#273

Originally posted by: Maaneet_09

aaww my poor baby... maine kaha na dont associate with her... see the result... u got headache too... 😆

JUST KIDDINGGG 😃

take care gurl... u need rest!

Bahi hum to sub miljulkar baatne walo mai se hai...Bara ber che ne krishna...Taru dukh ei maru dukh..maru sukh te taru sukh...😆

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Krishna

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Posted: 14 years ago

#274

Originally posted by: Newdime

Bahi hum to sub miljulkar baatne walo mai se hai...Bara ber che ne krishna...Taru dukh ei maru dukh..maru sukh te taru sukh...😆

Ek dum sachi vaat chhe! 😆

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Shaheda

@Newdime

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Posted: 14 years ago

#275

Originally posted by: Maaneet_09

sorry yaar... work called so couldnt check ur msg 😕

haha yes mrs. khurana hmm lets just say she hasnt warmed enough yet 😆

work is work... always there... but this week is my last week before i take a week off to start for skool ... sounds boring na? *sigh* the wonderfulness of being a student...

how about u?? what's happening up there? (wait u live above or below me?? 🤔)

Yes indeed work is always there and we need that or else who will pay the bills...
1 week off nice, you gotta prepare for the skool that comes 1st. What you will be returning to?
Nothing much I have some projects to assist and loads of meetings. Now i didn't understand what u meant with ur question in the brackets?

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Shaheda

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Posted: 14 years ago

#276

Originally posted by mystique_girl

oooh...i cant imagine we have one more update😆(So have been told I'm unpredictable.)

thanku thanku thanku😳 (You are welcome Ji. 😊)

loved it ... i just love the way you are taking the story forward. very unusual setting, unusual characters and fast pace...(Thank you'it's a SS so need the pace.)😊

Loved it that Maan stayed with her and honoured his commitment - i think it was more of him wanting to stay with her than the commitment part...(You got that right 😉 it was his motives and intentions of to get to know her more.) there was a lot of insight into Geet's character here - she was so polite while cancelling the restaurant reservation even in her personal hell, her commitment to her nieces and love for them, her strength for the sake of her sister , her attentiveness to Maan inspite of the emergency situation and finally - the girlie tears which every hardcore practical person would shed sometimes😃 (She is well balanced woman. 😃 Some one noticed.)

Maan's reaction has been amazingly portrayed - he felt everything that he is missing in life - the need of a partner, a houseful of love and children - that look like geet - wow, awesome😳 (Haina? I felt it too')

Your comment on Maan's look after cookie episode was very funny 😆 i repeat, you have an amazing sense of subtle humor..(I'm gald you found it amusing. My humour not understood by all'people find it funny when I'm screaming or getting mad'I say things that I have no clue where it comes at times' 😳)

geet's tears and breaking down were coming - she held up for the entire day after all - and Maan consoling her - all the actions and reactions thereafter were wonderful...love the way she said she lied and maan was amused - so this kiss is a reaction of the attraction he feels for her ..lets see how it gets deeper😃 (Yea that is correct, the attraction is just the attraction or more the realization.)

your writing is so blissful and comforting...and you know, your pace is just right - more like an SS than an FF 😊 (That's amazing praise not sure if I'm worth the credit. Thank you again. It is an SS')

hungry for more..i will never get bored of my one dialogue - "do update soon" !!😆 (I shall try my best)

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jenny

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Posted: 14 years ago

#277

Hi dear. I just found this FF.

Must say this is really beautiful story.

Loved they way u pen'd the story. Sweet n simple. No dramatic scene with boring flowery words.

Really love they way u portray Geet's character.

Such a sweet gal. She was well determine to win Maan over the bid. Willing to spend her entire saving to show him the real world. She wants to show Maan that she is not jst his ofis equipment but a woman that sincerely loves him. Loved the way she showed her love and affection for her sista n nieces.

I really like the way you presented Maan's character. He is not like the Maan in other stories. Thou Maan is business oriented guy, he was still at the soft spoken level. Maybe because of his background, he keep his leg on the ground. He showed his interest in his surrounding n also Geet, throughout their outing. Glad he confess what he feels for Geet. He poured out all his sorrows that kept him isolated from outside world.

Wonderful... Its simply beautiful story!!! I loved it. I've already sent a Buddy req to u. Plz accept me 😃

After this ill Keep stalking you.. BTW do you write any other stories apart from this...

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madhu.pmlist

@madhu.pmlist

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Posted: 14 years ago

#278

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94
Ek dum sachi vaat chhe! 😆

yeh sab kem che?? 😕

my knowledge of gujrati doesnt go beyond kem chu n majama che although i am majorly surrounded by them😳

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madhu.pmlist

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Posted: 14 years ago

#279

Originally posted by: Newdime

Yes indeed work is always there and we need that or else who will pay the bills...
1 week off nice, you gotta prepare for the skool that comes 1st. What you will be returning to?
Nothing much I have some projects to assist and loads of meetings. Now i didn't understand what u meant with ur question in the brackets?

hmm.. well very true 😊

i didnt get u.. returning to as in what i shall be continuing or what year i shall be going into 🤔

oo meetings sound intimidating i personally dont like them... they get boring the minute the start 😆

the question in the bracket was a cheesy question i meant what's happening up there meaning if u live further north of where i do then i would ask what's up there if not i would ask what's down there 😃 i know i know its really cheesy 😳

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Zahra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#280

heyyy...i loved it...they kissed...n even aknowledged their love...n ruby aunty...i just love her...i wonder where is my ruby aunty...hhaaha...continue soon ...

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