G/M SS: 24 hours.Thread 2.Chapter 8 The End, Pg 64 - Page 29

Originally posted by: Newdime

Cahlo dekhtai hai...meri kalam kahatak lejati hai 2 ghante mai...😆

Originally posted by: arabianpaki

😆

Madhu, ( everyone calls me Azi :D) .. abhi picture shoro hui hain ;)

Shaheda baji, jo hum chahte hai woh 2 ghante mein buhot araam se ho sakta hai 😛😉

Originally posted by: Water.

Spam ho raha hai!

Originally posted by: ajenn

Hi dear. I just found this FF. I'm Glad you did...welcome aboard 😊

Must say this is really beautiful story. Thanks a lot, please to read that.😊

Loved they way u pen'd the story. Sweet n simple. No dramatic scene with boring flowery words. Yes, my romantic at heart but not so dramatic...eye locking and eye popping...does it happen in real? Nope...its fiction understandable but we are real.😉

Really love they way u portray Geet's character. I'm feminist, hate softies, and girly girls...😆

Such a sweet gal. She was well determine to win Maan over the bid. Willing to spend her entire saving to show him the real world. She wants to show Maan that she is not jst his ofis equipment but a woman that sincerely loves him. Loved the way she showed her love and affection for her sista n nieces. complete well balanced today's woman. 😊

I really like the way you presented Maan's character. He is not like the Maan in other stories. Thou Maan is business oriented guy, he was still at the soft spoken level. Maybe because of his background, he keep his leg on the ground. He showed his interest in his surrounding n also Geet, throughout their outing. Glad he confess what he feels for Geet. He poured out all his sorrows that kept him isolated from outside world. He knows her for almost a year now so why hold it? And he accepted it, he knew, it was there but he held if for some silly reason and after all he is the boss...some professionalism need to portrait right? 😆

Wonderful... Its simply beautiful story!!! I loved it. I've already sent a Buddy req to u. Plz accept me 😃 I have added you on my buddy list...😃

After this ill Keep stalking you.. Sure you can join the team of my crazy stalker...😆 BTW do you write any other stories apart from this... This is my 3rd attempt of writing something, Sour Candy is OS and No Mangni But Shaadi-With All My Love & Heart Forever was the FF..you can try that...😃

Originally posted by: manashi

The best thing about this story is its simplicity...😊

Geet is one of the best characters created on this forum...no mixing up of words...straight to the point...most importantly she has her priorities right.👏👏

She did not think twice to abandon the date on which she spent a bomb the moment her family needed her.👏👏

Maan is a sweet heart...he was making cookies?...awww...☺️😳

They have already kissed?😲☺️😲

Such a fast guy...well done...😉😆

Waiting for the next update...🤗

Originally posted by: Newdime

🤣 THANK YOU...I DON;T LIKE TO PROLONG THINGS...WHY WAIST TIME MAN...JUST DO IT..LETS DO IT...😆

Originally posted by: manashi

Kaash koi aur bhi teri tarha sochti yaar?😉

sshhh...🤣🤣