G/M SS: 24 hours.Thread 2.Chapter 8 The End, Pg 64

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Water

@Water.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: arabianpaki

sorry had to go prepare food.. .

yeaa you still have time till school..mine is opening on the 6th..so a day before yours! I'm looking forward to it..and at the same time I'm not! :/

My mom was asking me start packing too... so I have to go do school shopping too!
I'm sure your excited abt NYC!! I hope you guys have a blast!

Yes, for sure we will have a blast.

Partayyy🥳

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arabianpaki

@arabianpaki

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Posted: 14 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: Newdime

😉

Its a short story so jaldi jaldi confess karo taki chat mangni pat biyah...😉

I' Can't bake..or does not have patience, I don't have patience bone in to be precise but how I do it with my clients I have no idea. You should bake some Eid is in 14 days...and do send my way plz..😊

There is not much in the story to give Lamba comments...per accha lagata hai...I know its my fault give you all back to back bonanza of the chapter.
Your welcome Azizza.

mangi and biyah...in 24hours :P
I remember we have a convo about baking ..I love to bake! I think I will bake some cookies for Eid.. but honestly we don't even do much on Eid! ..in fact we don't do anything! So its a perfect excuse to make cookies... and weirdly all my siblings even my brothers like to bake ..so we all do it together.. I know we sound so childish 😆 I will send some your way ... just check ur email :P ..hehehehe

can that bonanza turn into a triple bonanza?!?! ..lol! Jk.. I shouldn't push it now!

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Shaheda

@Newdime

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#193

You already got 3riple bonanza girl...3 updates...
You guys are lucky...we don't do such things..beside we are not together to begin with.😔..My bro just made rotis and he was so proud that he posted on FB to show me and my mom...

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arabianpaki

@arabianpaki

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Posted: 14 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: Newdime
You already got 3riple bonanza girl...3 updates...
You guys are lucky...we don't such things..beside we are not together to begin with.😔..My bro just made rotis and he was so proud that he posted on FB to show me and my mom...

oh yes it was a triple update.. ..my bad! Thanks!
yeaa well by the end it ..we're all fighting over the cookies.. and whose gonna clean up ..and whose gonna lick the bowl..and all that..and when I sya fighting I mean ..fighting like .." Go to hell..I don't wonna talk to you any more"... and then one is would probably reply " Great.. I have the same feelings for you!"..lol ..as I said childish..
awww your brother made rotis?!?! .. I can't make rotis.. how they turn out round .. I still dont know! 😆

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Shaheda

@Newdime

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: arabianpaki

oh yes it was a triple update.. ..my bad! Thanks!
yeaa well by the end it ..we're all fighting over the cookies.. and whose gonna clean up ..and whose gonna lick the bowl..and all that..and when I sya fighting I mean ..fighting like .." Go to hell..I don't wonna talk to you any more"... and then one is would probably reply " Great.. I have the same feelings for you!"..lol ..as I said childish..
awww your brother made rotis?!?! .. I can't make rotis.. how they turn out round .. I still dont know! 😆

You can check out on my page on FB...
The fights are bad..i fight with my bro badly that I don't speak to him for long...I have very bad temper..but my silence treatment are worse...
chalo namaz ka waqt ho giya...hum chalte hai...fir kab milo ge?

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arabianpaki

@arabianpaki

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#196

ok I gotta go ...
Its really been some time since we have talked.. so this was good :D...at least we got 5 mins :D
take care..
And good night/morning Rachana and Shaheda baji..lol.. shaba khair

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anshu

@nisha_hc_bs_dd

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#197

some things happen the most unexpected way but nothing seems more right than the situation we were put as such... I really loved the update.. they came close in the most unexpected way.. but what matters is they are feeling for each other even in the mundane and earthly environment.. and that is what life is simple, ordinary but beautiful!!!!!!

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#198

oooh...i cant imagine we have one more update😆

thanku thanku thanku😳

loved it ... i just love the way you are taking the story forward. very unusual setting, unusual characters and fast pace...

Loved it that Maan stayed with her and honoured his commitment - i think it was more of him wanting to stay with her than the commitment part... there was a lot of insight into Geet's character here - she was so polite while cancelling the restaurant reservation even in her personal hell, her commitment to her nieces and love for them, her strength for the sake of her sister , her attentiveness to Maan inspite of the emergency situation and finally - the girlie tears which every hardcore practical person would shed sometimes😃

Maan's reaction has been amazingly portrayed - he felt everything that he is missing in life - the need of a partner, a houseful of love and children - that look like geet - wow, awesome😳

Your comment on Maan's look after cookie episode was very funny 😆 i repeat, you have an amazing sense of subtle humor..

geet's tears and breaking down were coming - she held up for the entire day after all - and Maan consoling her - all the actions and reactions thereafter were wonderful...love the way she said she lied and maan was amused - so this kiss is a reaction of the attraction he feels for her ..lets see how it gets deeper😃

your writing is so blissful and comforting...and you know, your pace is just right - more like an SS than an FF 😊

hungry for more..i will never get bored of my one dialogue - "do update soon" !!😆