G/M SS: 24 hours.Thread 2.Chapter 8 The End, Pg 64 - Page 18

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Posted: 14 years ago
See you girls later!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Take care darling
42 more posts to go
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Posted: 14 years ago
Pretty lightning.

Ugh, at this rate, I'm never getting off IF. *rolls eyes*
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Maaneet_09

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OMG me likey likeyyy the last part the kiss šŸ˜.. more detailed comment to come later šŸ˜‰

double EDIT: šŸ˜†
balle balle another update is truly unbelievable 😲... thnx sooo much shahedaaa šŸ¤—
k now update commenting time 😃
awww geet has twin nieces n that too girls that is shooo cutey putey 😳 n loved their names Shania and Sofia šŸ‘šŸ¼ they were sooo adorable when they were talking abt cookies... aww reminds me of my own nieces although they can be outta control at times... šŸ˜• but kids are kinds only when they do shaitani stuff šŸ˜‰

maan stayed... yayyy! he would hv def missed something very imp if he didnt stay...
the cookie making was homey feelzz. i can see the future family *wink wink* maan was so natural with the kids n he needs to know he shall be a family man soon he only needs to grab the right opportunity šŸ˜‰

n finally the cute scene with maan n geet šŸ˜ chooo chweett... her breaking down n maan calming her... natural instincts i must say... 😳 well my man i mean maan u were abs right on the severe punishment part... how bout another date ahem i mean a romantic date with her another day šŸ˜‰. the kiss was cherry on the cake ā˜ŗļø

Overall verdict: lovely, dreamy, beautiful update




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You are welcome Madhuuu...

It was all mushy mushy part...

I'm glad you like it...

Thanks for the lovely comments.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Newdime




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You are welcome Madhuuu...

It was all mushy mushy part...

I'm glad you like it...

Thanks for the lovely comments.

ahem when is the next update 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: krati5

oh tht ws so cute... lovely update... didn't thought tht geet will confess so early...


happy independence day...



Thank you...emotions make you thinks that you wonder later...

Happy Independence day to you too.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome...i just loved it...

geet indirectly confessed why she bought him at the aution...n they kissed by the end...this was amazing...

continue soon n thnxxx...

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Posted: 14 years ago
good heaven!!!in b/w 24hours,deir love story has started...infact 2 b precise,has started to run! :D :D :D
thnxxx swthrt 4 dis damn gd updt...: )
n thnx for da pms too!
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he kissed her?!!??! How can you stop here Shaheda baji!!? You always stop at worst possible place ever šŸ˜› ..always keeping us on the edge!
Now I'm wondering if the kiss will be returned by Geet šŸ˜.. or will she back awayšŸ˜’

Did I mention I really like how you have portrayed Geet's character? She spilled the beans in the spur of the moment.. but if result was a kiss, then its all good! šŸ˜‰

Speaking of baking cookies.. I havn't done that in sooo long! If I only had time! I think I'll have to find time and make some... Maybe I should some your way ...you know maska toh lagana hai šŸ˜›

Super glad Maan is noticing whats amiss in his life! He has Geet in his life.. but not in her right place ;)

I tired my best to give you a long comment! Will this work? Yaa aur lamba? šŸ˜†
Please continue soon!! I know with work and all, its gonna hard to update very soon, but I'll try my luck begging anyways.. so please oh please! .. Plus its all your fault..with such updates woh bhi back to back ..lol
Thanks habouba ;)

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Originally posted by: arabianpaki

he kissed her?!!??! How can you stop here Shaheda baji!!? You always stop at worst possible place ever šŸ˜› ..always keeping us on the edge!
Now I'm wondering if the kiss will be returned by Geet šŸ˜.. or will she back awayšŸ˜’

Did I mention I really like how you have portrayed Geet's character? She spilled the beans in the spur of the moment.. but if result was a kiss, then its all good! šŸ˜‰

Speaking of baking cookies.. I havn't done that in sooo long! If I only had time! I think I'll have to find time and make some... Maybe I should some your way ...you know maska toh lagana hai šŸ˜›

Super glad Maan is noticing whats amiss in his life! He has Geet in his life.. but not in her right place ;)

I tired my best to give you a long comment! Will this work? Yaa aur lamba? šŸ˜†
Please continue soon!! I know with work and all, its gonna hard to update very soon, but I'll try my luck begging anyways.. so please oh please! .. Plus its all your fault..with such updates woh bhi back to back ..lol
Thanks habouba ;)

Aziz, you are awake..

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