G/M SS: 24 hours.Thread 2.Chapter 8 The End, Pg 64

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Shaheda

@Newdime

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Thanks Azi you are the only one noticed that it was a looonnnggg Update.

Thank you I'm glad you liked it.

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Shaheda

@Newdime

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94
:) congrats to all of us for the new thread! 😆

I'm first! Hehe.

Loved the update! Finally, Maan is seeing Geet as a woman. Does he want to be part of Geet's seducton. Loved Geet's plan, not too romantic and not too formal. Maan thought Geet was going to make him do manual labour? Ha. This is definitely not what Maam expected!

Can't wait for more! :)

We've barely started the 24 hours and a new thread already?! Hehe, may we have many more!

Lets see if he wants to be part of Geet's seduction...
We girls are always unpredictable...we didn't just get the label for now reason...did we?😉

Tost to many more...

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Shaheda

@Newdime

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Maaneet_09
ahhh i cant wait to read moreee lovely update!!!
please forgive my crazy reactions... when its about maan n geet my emotions are simply uncontrolleddd 😳

Emotions?😲 which, what?😆

only 2 lines and you are talking abt the emotions...thats not fair...

I'll try to post the next part early as possible before I go for hibernation😛...

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madhu.pmlist

@madhu.pmlist

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Newdime

Emotions?😲 which, what?😆

only 2 lines and you are talking abt the emotions...thats not fair...

I'll try to post the next part early as possible before I go for hibernation😛...

lol i actually meant in general but on second thoughts if i do talk about emotions in more than two lines can we get an update faster 😳

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Shaheda

@Newdime

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Maaneet_09

lol i actually meant in general but on second thoughts if i do talk about emotions in more than two lines can we get an update faster 😳

Humm let see...you have to prove me...may be we can start a new FF on it...😉

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Zahra

@-Zahra15-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

it was awesome...i loved it...

congratulations...already thread 2 with part 4...now this is amazing...

i loved the update...so geet seems to be loving maan...n dadi...she is too good...i just love her...she also had the same thing as geet in mind...

n then maan being surprised by geet...i wonder what else she has planned now...

continue soon n thnxxx...

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Water

@Water.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Chapter 4:

Haha, Maan bit his tongue as soon as he said Geet's name'..bechara'.abhi se hi asar shuru ho gaya hai'..kudi ka'.😆

Chalo something hit him atleast 'in his chest'.he knows how much Geet does for him'.

Again..listening to word auction... he had to almost splutter the water out of his mouth'

So Daadi knows all that Geet has planned? Did tell Dadi..that she is going to spend the 24 hours with Maan😲

Dadima ' Hitler?? No way.😕

Maan- Cruel Boss?? Hell ya!!!😡

Shaheda the 'Sporty Yellow Jeep Wrangler ' that was/is our dream'haiii and that too with a Munda'..👏

Who is Aunt Ruby?

Maan sees her as office furniture how dare he? He better change!!😡

The following two lines'

How many times had she wanted to lean close and push that wayward strand back into place? How many times had they worked late, pouring over schedules, planning meetings, all the while sitting shoulder to shoulder, his masculine scent invading her mind and making it nearly impossible to stay rational?

I think..will I ever get the guts to do that...off course!!! Once I know the guy'hehe😆

As soon as I read wax I thought legs hehe😲

Than I was like oh ok wax the car!! PHEW!

Maan frowned on his comment? What did he think..that Geet would really plan something that would require him to do labour? Duh! Men na'!!

Long curly hair '..Fitted jeans with crisp cotton white shirt..reaching to her thighs'.reminds me of someone I know really well'.

Did she have her sun glasses on btw?😎

Geet's style was not seduction? Maan don judge so quickly'u mite know even know how and when the land beneath ur legs will slip away' 🤣

Geet is def a surprise!!!

Lovely update

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pushpi

@pushpi

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Aa shu Di...aatlu saras chaltu tu ane you ended it so soon!!

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pushpi

@pushpi

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Shaheda Di, where are you?

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madhu.pmlist

@madhu.pmlist

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Newdime

Humm let see...you have to prove me...may be we can start a new FF on it...😉

well i think u wouldnt know what all i would do for an update 😉 n if its as simple as writing abt emotions well u got that right 😆 well let me first start with emotions before i even touch on maaneet part 😳

emotions... hmm well emotions define a person yet we all keep them in check. they are the basic instincts that respond and reveal what the person is thinking and going through yet ironically they could be completely different from what a person intends to do. in every step of life it plays a major part to be precise.

now let's see how emotion affects decision-making, the basic characteristic of a man. when a person has to decide about some thing or try to plan his future, be it long term as in life or short term as in what he has to eat, he would go through a step-by-step process of deciding. and in the very first step his emotions come to play a huge and important part. it first gives insight about what kind of reaction and decision the person would make just by knowing the kind of emotions he is going through. in fact it plays a very significant role in even determining whether the person can even face the problem at hand to make the decision. for instance, if a person is emotionally high about the issue at hand, he/she can totally refuse to even glimpse at the issue, totally shoving it away from his/her thought process. thus, emotions are what can be called as the initial sneak peek trailer of the issue at hand and also determine the end credits of it. (does this nonsense even make sense? 😕)

now we shall look at maan n geet. well in ur current story the role of emotions would be too early to be determined for maan. so let's assume that maan is forcefully restraining himself from falling for geet 😉. before he even restrains himself he would have to go through one or more than one type of emotion before he makes the decision to restrain himself from her. i dont know about him but if it was geet i am sure she would experience a rush of emotions when she is around him but i dont think that would be the case for him, for he is the MSK 😆.

just like u explained, her wanting to straighten the strand, getting lost in his masculine scent, even his mere presence seemed to affect her and the direct cause/effect of it is her emotions. a new rush of emotions, butterflies in her stomach would be something she would experience. a desire to do the things she wants to do while she is in his company is a downright example of her going through various emotions such as awe, shyness, weakness, and ecstasy. that's what made her decide that take or leave it she would have maan all for herself for the next 24 hours. if she plays her cards right (i know it kind of sounds evil but i cannot find another word for it 🤔) she will be rewarded with maan's love (love?? *madhu scratching her head* isnt that too early to say hehe...) if not she would be back to square one but the difference would be her emotions would have been played hard and shattered to pieces.

well coming to MSK i need to succinct just like him 😉 although he seems to refrain from even the E of emotions i think he is downright emotional man at heart. if the right cords are struck u can see him as emotional as geet. he does seem to do things or think things unintentionally, well the point is he does seem to think along the lines of emotion. he does see the change in her wardrobe, the very fact that she rotates his world for him, even the mere acceptance of her importance in his life and his fascination for her are the beginnings of display of emotions in his words but in my words it shows his deep involvement of emotions in his orderly life. it has totally affected in the decisions he makes towards her. instead of brushing away her offer of spending the time with her, he didnt deny it and now he is even accompanying her... well well well i see the emotions playing in his heart (that is unknown to him) has totally affected decisions...

so here ends my blabbing of emotions sorry to have bored u but it does count for a faster update right i mean i did talk i mean i did write more than two lines about emotions whether it made sense or not 😃

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