New FF: Till the End of Time(Book1 DONE)note pg149 - Page 77

Originally posted by: heena_mehta

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u did this to me, how could u tanz😲😲😲- u ended this chapter at d moment, frm where actually my love returned!!😭!! 😛 Aryan-deewani..hold your breathe...its your janemaan's bday next update so u will get him plenty 😆

i don't knw y i m starting my comments frm here, look i told u, dat i cn't trust on this matter, dat pia wl b d one who hepl aryan, coz i knw u very well hun, u never do, wat is simple to think or imagine😆😆😆, my guess was right!! So , alina has started getting something for aryan...hmmm, confused to comment at present on this track😕😕, bt she saved aryan, dats enough for me to like her😉😉😉 Lolzz.. there might be a triangle between them but Alina is falling for Aryan thats for sure... and your guess abt me is usually right... cant help it 😛 😆

omg abhiya, i m totally speechless, u r doing marvellous job wid their track in ur this ff!!

every single thing abt them, has gt something in it, u knw wat , i want to b at pia's place , seriously, she is reli lucky😳😳😳 glad you liked it huny

i m happt dat finally he has realised dat her feeling for him r so strong, dat there is no point to behaving recklessly wid her on this point, bt i knw u r going to give us big heart attack soon, even he has accepted for once, bt futur is totally uncertain, specially when it comes to abhay raichand feelings😆 Exactly...u cant say anything when to comes to the feelings of Sadu Raichand 😆 he is admitting his feelings and accepting it are two different things...

awww, dat scene where pia kissed abhay, was super cute😳

gosh dat dream actually killed me😆, bt wat made u turn into a dream😡, ek baar sachi me ye nahi dekha sakti thi, haan😆, d moment scene started, i was like omg omg omg n then my jaw totally dropped when she woke, i was like wat?????, tanzzz i m gonna kill u😆😆, bt then aage ki story kaise padh paungi, isliye no killing😆 Isi reaction ke liye I wrote that sequence as a dream 🤣 I knew you wud say u r gonna kill me 🤣 abhi tak dream rehne do... later u will get lot of real ones 😉

ok, i m totally in love wid this whole thing " d way abhay felt her touch on his lips, wowww this whole concept is something totally magical!!!

there all scenes were damn cute!! aww...thanks a lot 😳

so pia has taken her first step towards d truth, bt of,course abhay won't let this happen so easily!! so true

n u , listen to me, nw i want nxt part asap, n nw nxt part aryan's b'day , so for me, its an xtra special thing for me!! yes... u know how busy i'm but will try to make it soon

luv u hun🤗 Luv u tooo 🤗

Originally posted by: strawberryrashu

Tanzie next morning wala whole part a dream pia kissing abhay ek dream tha me kitne dhyan se vo scene padh rahi thi 😡bad girl 😭😆 hahaha...sorry Rashu...asli bhi milegi itni jaldi nehi... btw tere ff me pia is very naughty 😉she always imagines abhay kissing her and she herself takes the step and kisses him 😆 She is very sweet and innocent in my FF... just like Piya Jaiswal but for Abhay she will become a bad girl 😆 😳 well asli kiss kab padne milega 😛pata nehi...wait 😛a nd ur planning alina and aryan track pls yaar meri peehu ka kya hoga she loves aryan so much 😭 thr will be a triangle and i will satisfy both of the girls... no tension 🤣 and aryan was drunk aww poor guy 😭peehu ko kitna miss karta hai she broke his heart unwillingly 😭 ab yeh Aryan ko thodi na pata hai nice update tanzie thanks for pm thanks juu 😛

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

wow tanzie wht an update.Abhiya r finally getting close.Me so excited yaar.Tht dream of Pia was hot.Poor gal dont evn know tht Abhay know each & everything abt her wild dreams😆.Oh I guess Alina is already in luv wid aryan.May b Alina will lessen Aryan's pain.So Aryan's b'day is nxt.Ab Abhiya romance kam ho jayega as Aryan aa gya hai so now Abhay can afford 2 avoid Pia.Nice update😳

LUV U🤗