New FF: Till the End of Time(Book1 DONE)note pg149

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#731

Originally posted by: missglam

awesome tanzie..
could really feel aryan's pain.. I can totally understand peehu too..
God, they stayed away from eachother for 50 years.. haila.. that long! But still he was looking for her! glad you liked it dear 😳
Awww. . Peehu also returned , but i think she is scared of mohini ! Who is this mohini? & wat does she wants? Mohini is peehu's cousin sister the one she was talking in the phone and mohini is evil.. 😉
Aryan n peehu convo was very touchy & the kiss scene was superb!
I really feel bad 4 them. . Do unite them. . Lets see but not so soon

Coming to abhiya ! I just love them!
loved the way abhay gets scared from pia's questions...hehe! She is really a threat to his existence! Wow, abhay cooked.. That was a shocker! truly awesome..also loved how he was always hesitant to touch her .. but at last his love overcame all that and now he is kissing her cheeks & is in full DOCTOR mode . . Hehe . . shweet! i love when Abhay's resistant crumbles and he gives in... 😃 😳

u write so well. U r pro gal. . thanks soo much 😳

The next chap (run in ur veins) look damn exciting. . Plz , continue soon!
thanks for the PM and hope to read the next part soon which seems to be jhakaas! Tc im so sorry for the delay.. will post next part tom for sure 😃

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#732

Originally posted by: abhayfan_dishu
fabulous tanzie. loved abhay caring and cooking for pia
and aryan-peehu tale touched me. hope they find out a way and why do I think Pia will play an important role in uniting them.

thanks a lot Dishu 😳 Piya will help Aryan letting go of Peehu and but she will come back with time

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#733

Originally posted by: pratiksha2009
god i feel bad for both peehu and aryan, she love him but istill cant go back to him, and abhiya i love them so much yaar, they are so perfect together, abhay is cooking for her , thats so sweet yaar, awesome update

Thanks Prati... Peehu has no road left for going back... lets see who finds a way for her 😊

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#734

Originally posted by: lost_in_love
Wonderful update tanzie👏dear u beautifuly depictd abhiya's feeling fr eachother.abhay cookng fr pia ws too good.d dear must say the way u wrote abhiya and aryhu bth tracks one aftr anthr ws amazing👍🏼lovd arxanpeehu part.it ws so touchy yet painful.aww they bth love eachothr so much.so peehu is doing all these bcoz of mohini? she must hav thretened peehu! hope aryan and peehu willb togethr again. d thx tanzie fr hntroducing aryan and peehu track in dis ff😊it has made d story mre interestng. continue soon d tc.😳

Thanks Indu... aree u made a name for Aryan and Peehu.. Arhu woud be good... thanks 😃 Mohini doesn't need to threat anyone... she is doesn't want something no one would dare to do that..now how dangerous she can u imagine 😉 everyone loves Aryan so much that I decided to make his own track...im really glad you liked it 😳

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#735

Originally posted by: Eowyn
That was simply heart breaking...
Peehu and Aryan overrode AbhIya in this update...
Their pain, their longing, their feelings, their agony...
Everything just stood out I love writing abour Aryan and I have seen more or less every1 loves Aryan so decided to make his own track.. he holds a diff importance in my story 😳
I can't begin to say words to describe how brilliant it was...thanks a lot Nidha 😳
Loved it Tanzie...
Hats off to you im soo glad and honored with your comments 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

#736

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heena mehta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#737

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u did this to me, how could u tanz😲😲😲- u ended this chapter at d moment, frm where actually my love returned!!😭😭😭😭!!

i don't knw y i m starting my comments frm here, look i told u, dat i cn't trust on this matter, dat pia wl b d one who hepl aryan, coz i knw u very well hun, u never do, wat is simple to think or imagine😆😆😆, my guess was right!! So , alina has started getting something for aryan...hmmm, confused to comment at present on this track😕😕, bt she saved aryan, dats enough for me to like her😉😉😉

omg abhiya, i m totally speechless, u r doing marvellous job wid their track in ur this ff!!

every single thing abt them, has gt something in it, u knw wat , i want to b at pia's place , seriously, she is reli lucky😳😳😳

i m happt dat finally he has realised dat her feeling for him r so strong, dat there is no point to behaving recklessly wid her on this point, bt i knw u r going to give us big heart attack soon, even he has accepted for once, bt futur is totally uncertain, specially when it comes to abhay raichand feelings😆😆😆😆

awww, dat scene where pia kissed abhay, was super cute😳😳😳😳

gosh dat dream actually killed me😆😆😆😆😆, bt wat made u turn into a dream😡, ek baar sachi me ye nahi dekha sakti thi, haan😆, d moment scene started, i was like omg omg omg n then my jaw totally dropped when she woke, i was like wat?????, tanzzz i m gonna kill u😆😆, bt then aage ki story kaise padh paungi, isliye no killing😆

ok, i m totally in love wid this whole thing " d way abhay felt her touch on his lips, wowww this whole concept is something totally magical!!!

there all scenes were damn cute!!

so pia has taken her first step towards d truth, bt of,course abhay won't let this happen so easily!!

n u , listen to me, nw i want nxt part asap, n nw nxt part aryan's b'day , so for me, its an xtra special thing for me!!

luv u hun🤗

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#738

o jeez i cnt believe its stil res!so sory tanz..my head is in a muddle as xams r nearing..bt absolutely lovely update!!that kiss is so out of the world..u described it beautifuly..aw alina was so sweet here..loved her!!so piya is starting to get clues..gud..

Edited by abhiora - 13 years ago

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Rashmi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#739

Tanzie next morning wala whole part a dream pia kissing abhay ek dream tha me kitne dhyan se vo scene padh rahi thi 😡bad girl 😭😆btw tere ff me pia is very naughty 😉she always imagines abhay kissing her and she herself takes the step and kisses him 😆well asli kiss kab padne milega 😛and ur planning alina and aryan track pls yaar meri peehu ka kya hoga she loves aryan so much 😭and aryan was drunk aww poor guy 😭peehu ko kitna miss karta hai she broke his heart unwillingly 😭nice update tanzie thanks for pm 😛

Edited by strawberryrashu - 13 years ago

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Resh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#740

wow tanzie wht an update.Abhiya r finally getting close.Me so excited yaar.Tht dream of Pia was hot.Poor gal dont evn know tht Abhay know each & everything abt her wild dreams😆.Oh I guess Alina is already in luv wid aryan.May b Alina will lessen Aryan's pain.So Aryan's b'day is nxt.Ab Abhiya romance kam ho jayega as Aryan aa gya hai so now Abhay can afford 2 avoid Pia.Nice update😳

LUV U🤗

Edited by cuteshrishti - 13 years ago

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