New FF: Till the End of Time(Book1 DONE)note pg149 - Page 71

Originally posted by: heena_mehta

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dat was a fab update tanz!!! Thank you 😃

starting frm very start, i loved d way u av defined peehu's royal life!!

description of her character was so trong, dat it became easy to imagine hows she is as a person nw!! mind it nw, coz u aven't described her past life yet!!! yes... her past life is even more royal. meaning her family was very posh. i will describe about her life in detail but not now. on the right now 😆

u knw till nw i was just in love wid aryan, bt after knwing his decision towards abhay n his own family, i av grown respect for him!! althoough abt peehu's decision i m still confused, dat wat made her took dat decision?😕😕 you will know at the right time. I was eager to knw about take on aryan's love life since I knw how much u lve him. so jealous of peehu yet? 🤣

n wat abt aryan's sis, i mean, she is d same gal, abhay's sis!!??

n after dat aryan's-peehu, meeting was so damn intense n powerful, well described...i loved every single dialouge of dat particular part n after dat , their kiss scene, dat was again a power n painful display of emotions!!!👏👏👏👏 yes, same girl. she will come later as well. its time to develop the relationship of abhay and piya s concentrating on that only. thanku.. i worked on that meeting for a while. it was supposed to be short but power packed cnvo u know...

bring aryan back to AR villa, i cn't see him in so much pain😭😭😭

perfect choice of song!!👏👏👏 i ❤️ this song Heenu...have u concentrated on the lyrics? they are soo powerful, touches my heart. aryan will be back but he will be in a trouble and guess whos gonan save him? 😛 😉

nw coming to abhiya's part, dat was so dam cute, for d first i found abhiya's part cute in ur this ff, it was so delight change seeing abhay like dat, cooking, awww😳😳😳😳😳, so some one is changing n i would love to mention dat particular scene where abhay found his shirt in pia;s room😳😳😳 awww...don u worry abhay will return to his sadu mood after a particular incident soon...wait for tht 😛 i know im cruel..sorry 😆

abhiya scenes were beautiful n again they were giving gosebumps to me while reading!! thankuuu 😳

precaps title...wowwwiii glad you liked it 😃

n ur most welcome hun🤗

luv u loadsss luv u tooo 🤗

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

wow tanzie awesome update.I felt so bad 4 Aryan & peehu.I guess someone has blackmailed peehu 2 stay away frm Aryan thts y she left him.Oh if they luv each other so badly thn they shuld end up 2gether.And the song u chose was wow.I loved it.And I m luving the budding romance b/w Abhiya.😳

LUV U🤗

Originally posted by: abhiora

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U r brilliant tanzie..ooh i luvd peehu n aryan!poor souls!peehu seems interesting..lukng 4ward to knowing her..n abhiya were WOW!u r an amazing writer tanzie..thumbs up!!cntnu asap..

Originally posted by: prerna26

Awesome update!!!⭐️ thanks Prerna 😳

Abhay cooked food for her...So sweet! Pyaar mein bechare ne kya kya nahi kiya..Pehle khana khaya aur ab banaya.😃 Yeh to sirf suruat hai...age age dekho hota hai kya 😆 This profession suits Pia actually...she always asks him lot of questions..Poor Abhay!😆 Pia is a threat to a vampire!!😆 Loved this update!! Feeling bad for both Aryan and Peehu. Mohini is forcing Peehu. Mohini is not really forcing Peehu but she is pretty dangerous and Peehy knws mohini will do something. she is evil and Peehu's cousin. Peehu's entire family is crazy..more then K famly 😛 But why? And who's Mohini? You have expressed their emotions brilliantly.👍🏼 Continue soon and thanks a lot for Pm.😊 will do surely 😳

Originally posted by: -srija-

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piya a threat 2 a vampire he he he.
Aryan:karwate badal rahe saari raat hum.aapki kasam.
Abhay is going to cook.thoda mere liye vi plz...
waiting update soon.


Tanzie really its too difficult to wait 4 the completion of ur update.no patience yar.jaldi karo. sorry sweetz... i rewrite the peehu-aryan convo twice so late ho gayi 😳


Ok here goes my bakwash. i will love it... trust me big comments are encouraging 😃

So peehu is staying 4 a month,

haye mera abhay sleeping beauty se najare nahi hata paraha.
Gud he is nt going 2 behave rudely nw onwards. atleast for now 😉

Abhay smiled...aww...😃

Kash mein maria aur cook ke expression dekh pati.
Abhay ne toh unhe statue bandadiya...he he he
pyar ne abhay ko cook vi banadiya. pyaar me aur kya kya karta hai dekho 😉


Aryan called his sis??bechara daant sehena pada bt c supported him.after all c is his behena na...wil understand his feelings n love. she does.. she is very sweet

Aww...aryan yeh kya thha.couldnt wait to meet peehu hun,informer ka phone ek ring me uthadiya.

Lo suru hogayi miss question ki dukaan.
"Abhay my wounds!!where are they?"
arey abhay jaisa doctor ho toh wound rahega kya?? yeh piya thodi hi na janti hai...she thinks abhay is a human na 😆


"u are not going anywhere.Don't move because doctor not me real one said last night that to heal these wounds you need rest,medicine etc.You were unconscious then.I talked to him in the morning as well.any more questions I will answer when I come back."

wah wah abhay kya chup kara diya miss question ko.gud shot...sangat ka ashar.haha.. he answered everything she could have asked 😆

"what are you doing here Aryan?"
wow peehu kya act karti ho yar.muuhha...

Peehu u broke the heart of my darling aryan yar. i know

completed reading it 5th time.now here goes my remaining comments. 5th times?? 😲 awww 😳

Issues,responsibilities ,rules tearing them apart bt love,desire,years of longing n yearning drawing them closer.
Tanzie u portrayed their emotions too well.
Missed aryan's humour yar.
I hate seeing aryan in so much pain.mujhe rona aaraha hai. trust me i hate to write aryan like this.. but it has to and thanks.. glad you liked it 😊

Loved the song tanzie.a bear hug to u 4 that song.
*sobbing*let me hold myself n wil comment then.dnt be shocked.still i hav lots 2 say... i loveee this song as well. it heard in in vampire diaries, episode 1, season 3. it was on stelena and i feel like crying at that sequence as well

I m back.

"she will kill me...kill you and everyone round us.."

who is this 'she' now?r u talking abt mohini?
Suspense hun... Mohini yes...why that you will know later 😉

Overall it was fantastic,fabulous,awesome,great,superb..wow..wow..wow. thanku thanku 🤗

Tanzie do update soon na plz...its really hard 2 wait 4 ur ffs yar.continue real soon.
I know u r bg bt tumhare ffs ke fans ko itna intezar vi mat karwawo. im so sorry dear.. i wish I could. but i only get time on weekends

Remaining comments 4 next update.till then take care.
Love u thanks a lot huny for the wonderful comments 🤗
srija.

Originally posted by: peehu24

awesome update tanzie..i loved it...u wrote so well.. thanks Peehu 😳

abhiya were as usual..super cute..just loved them...they both are falling for each other..infact piya already in love..poor abhay..will do anything to keep her away..and her KBC started here also...abhay..poor soul has to answer...but i loved it..and abhay cooking for piya...aww loved it thanks a lot.. im really glad you liked it all... now you will see lots of cute moments of Abhiya until Abhay will realize that its not safe for her...then something bad will happen 😕

aryan and peehu were so sweet...but felt bad for aryan and peehu..both love each other...aryan is ready to acept her..but peehu cant come back due to mohini... yes and why mohini is like that is another history... will know on right time. aryan really loves peehu but now he will give up on her since she married someone else

update soon..thanks for pm...

Originally posted by: princess_xeelan