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D.O_Xing

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Posted: 14 years ago

#61

Tanzy Tanzy Tanzy...😊

Damn awesome job yaar...👏 I loved your first update of this new FF... Well oops Sorry I forgot to Congratulate on your new FF so CONGRATULATIONS..🥳

Now coming to the update... Fabulous and mind blowing..👍🏼

I loved Piya yaar... 😊Abhay is well... ABHAY... 😳Always makes me speechless...😍

That girl was Piya right?? Who was drowning in the river... But I thought she was attending the Party as her words were telling me... 😕Ekdum se Suicide?? Well I guess i can understand her situation...😕

Mind blowing update..👏

Continue Soon😊

Thanks for the PM...😃

Lots of Love❤️

Sweta🤗

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shivanirajput

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Posted: 14 years ago

#62

its just a gr8 start perfect was pia attacked by her mama?
continue soon

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Ume Salma Kakal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#63

Nice start of the FF. Please PM me also when you update👏

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Peehu24

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Posted: 14 years ago

#64

tanzie...i loved it...ausum and too good update...if m not wrong..that girl is pia na...m waiting for next part...update soon...

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Disha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#65

great start tanzie. wht happened tht made pia take this step?

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rashika aggarwal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#66

wow...awesome update

i'm 100% sure tht this gir is piya!!!!
thnx for the pm

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: Artemis678
Chapter 1 Was Great. I Like Your FF The Most. (:

Thanks a lot dear...really humbled by your appreciation 😳 I hope you will enjoy this one too 🤗

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: purple_shadoz
hey tanzie...beautifl wrk ...asm i mst say...tho i m nw hr i av rd ur ff d beautiful strangr bfr...😛..so abhay savs pia??...its pia rite...??lvd d intro n lukng 4wrd as 2 hw d story of our epic jodi unfolds...lv ur gftd writng skils...findng aryans char also ntrstng...so pia gtng married 2 jai bt nt cnvncd...hmmm...lovng it thoroly...hope abhiya lv story starts soon...waitng eagrly 4 ur updates...cn u plz pm me??...lov u loadsss...😃p.s.i hope shrish n heena di dnt kl me 4 cmntng b4 dm...hehehe...😃lolzzz...😉

Thanks dear. whats your name? seems like you'r very familiar with the forum as you have read my other FF as well 😆

and thanks a lot for all the appreciation. my readers are my inspiration and make me try to write better things 😊 Aryan is a very nice character, unlike Abhay he's not rude. Heena and Shrish wont mind coz they have their own competition and they know when to strike 😆

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: abhay4piya
Oh my...!!! wht an ff..😲...i was totally lost into it..😳..really marvellous job👏...abhay is just like sid in the ff...hungry n ready for prey..😆..good one..eager to know how he will fall for her..continue soon n thnx for pm..😊..keep pm-ing me..

Thanku. no Abhay is not like Sid. But he's not a full veg vampire. He drinks human blood and not necessarily by killing them. he's not evil 😳

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: heena_mehta
omg omg omg omg
tanzie man u r superb gal!!... thanks a lot darling 🤗
rocking start...update was fabulous, fantastic, mindblowing, awesome
d way u av written it ...i m speechless, it was like i was watching a perfect episode... thanku...thanku...thanku 😳
poor pia!!😭
i m still wondering wat happened at sudden dat she left her home n reached dat cliff...??? will know in next chpt and to clear all the confusion..no rape.. ok?
bt d way u av defined dat particular scene where abhay saved pia...dat was mesmerizing... glad you liked it... i spent hours on writing that particular scene 😳
cn't wait for d nxt part...plsss update soon
n tanzie u always keep so suspense just like abhay, dats y i always put so many questions just like pa😆 hahahah...well said...me and suspense comes in same package 😛 so in my story jhelo suspense...

love u n a big hug to u🤗 same to you darls