New FF: Till the End of Time(Book1 DONE)note pg149 - Page 16

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kuttu

So Jai is worried for Pia. Now is Abhay going to sned Pia back or keep her with him and also the fact that she was slowly poisened.Waitng to know what the vampire brothers are going to do to help Pia


Jai is genuinely worried for Piya... Abhay and Aryan will soon find the truth and they will decide to protect Piya until they become sure what exactly happen with her but Jeh will keep looking for her under cover until he finds her 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: peehu24

tanzie...too good...loved it...it was fab...eagerly waiting for next part...plz update soon...


Thanks a lot dear 🤗
I told you I would use your name and that's coming within next 2 or 3 update 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sunu123

hey tanzi😃awesome update yaar👏👏👏... Thanks dear 😳that praveen n that lipstick chudail...i will kill both of them... wait and let Abhay do the honor 😆hey i didnt get one think...u n heena both together trying their hard to show that the jay is good hearted😆😆😆...jay kuch jyada hi pasand aa gaya kya... because Jeh is a strong character and there's a lot to explore about his character...i love to play with my characters... you will soon discover how diff Abhay n Piya both are by character in my both FF and so will be Jeh... i will try atleast... 😳omg chalo aacha hai aaj cold body kuch toh kam aayi😆...waiting eagerly for this part... sabko wohi part ki interzer hai... hai Allah 🤣plz update soonhav a nice dayluv u 🤗sunita

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Posted: 14 years ago
oh god that was such an emotional part
poor pia has to face so much😭😭
abhay is just so sweet
i hope everything will be fine
thanks for pm and update soon

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: purple_shadoz

res.*edited* hey tanzie...😃mai fr aa gai...😉wt n updt dear...👏so pia s n abhay's house n abhay s alrdy attrctd to pia????...😛chalo acha hai...bechari pia...😭dt prabeen n deepz...arrrggghhh...🤢av no wrds 4 dm...😡plz make abhay make a bhartsa outta dm...wn he cms to no bt ds...😡n aryan s so sweeet...😃nw d main part...😳so abhay wl gv body heat to pia????...awww... m already☺️waitng 4 ur nxt updt more dn evr...😉cvs ne to dhokha de dia...😡tm aisa mt krna plz nai to pia ke jagah mai asylm pahuch jaungi...😆😆chalo ab bye ...do updt soon n loadzzz of lv...🤗p.s. lvd d last part wr abhay asks pia ts devar...🤣to lv while he gvs body heat to hr...😆


Thanks Nidhi dear 😳 Nope... it's just a unknown pull which Abhay is still unable to understand but no love or anything. It's merely his kindness or pity out of his he is helping Piya. Prabeen and Deepu will get bashed on time 😆
dont blush so soon coz i might disappoint you dear 😆 i never rush to romance coz it seems baseless to me...mein bhi dhoka de sakti su 😛
now thanks a lot for comment and will update soon 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: abhay4piya

awsm blossom..
mind blowing ... thanks a lot dear 😳
fantastic...!!👏...ugh..!! i hate that prabeen n deepu..they r so gonna get it when abhay will find out about them..😡...i want to kill p n d...😡..they will get punishment..now worries 😊 poor pia..😭..but abhay is the hero,,he will surely help her at any cost..😊..u ended at wrong point...i m diening to read their first hug...😳😳😳...abhay is shooo cute n a saviour ...😳..thnx for pm..n keep pm-ing me..😃... will update tomorrow 😳
luv u..
take care..⭐️

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow tanzie awesome part so gud dear I loved it.Abhay saving pia,healing her & those bloody Praveen & deepu I hate thm😡.Wht the hell did they do wid poor Pia.Awesome part sweety loved it.Sorry 4 late rply
Luv u🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Rozy77

hi tanzie

awesome update thanks dear...how ru? 🤗
but i hated that prabeen😡 he is such a bastered🤬. how could he do that?😲😭 fine if he doesnt consider her his niece but she is a girl after all😭 And he's trying to drive her insane😡 He's greedy... evil and human wid no moral.. 😡
thank god abhay saved her. awww he was so concerned n tenderly dressed her wounds. ooh he's gona hug 'ahem' her😳😆 my crazy mind😆, its too soon for romance😳 yes... you r a sweety.. coz u understand my writing style 😆 rushing into romance is not my habit and i think u know tht so dont expect too much right now 😈
im waiting for pia's reaction when she gets up. it's gonna be very interesting...will come soon 😆
aryan is such a darling. i already adore his character😳 ...i love writing about him ❤️
thanks so much for the pm
Ramadaan is going well n so fast too, before we know it, it'l be eid😊 soo true...only few days left na... itni jaldi khatam ho raha hai 😊
take care hun


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Deepi20

First of all, awesome update! 👍🏼 Secondly, Piya's uncle is such a jerk! 😡 I hate him! I can't believe he hurt Piya! But I'm glad that Piya is safe for now with Abhay! 😳 I'm sort of feeling neutral about Jeh right now because he's not involved with the hurting Piya scheme so I really don't know whether I should feel sorry for him or not. So Abhay is going to reduce Piya's fever by his cold body temperature! 😳 Eagerly waiting for the next update! Continue soon 😊


Thanks Deepi 😳 I wanted to show when a human can be so low and evil only for money on the other hand, a monster to say Abhay can be more kind even then a human 😊 You are soo right.. it's too early to take any decision about Jeh.. 😉 will update tomorrow 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Artemis678

Gosh Pia's Step Father Is Terrible. ): Conti Soon.


Piya' s mamaji dear... 😳 thanks for commenting 😊

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