New FF: Till the End of Time(Book1 DONE)note pg149 - Page 14

hi! i m new membr bt i hav gn tru ur ff d i mst admit tht its very beautifuly written. plz cn u add me 2 ur pm list?

awasome part dear😊

Originally posted by: 1301Princess

Wow Tanzy...😊

That was really an awesome update... Loved it totally...👏 aww thanku Sweta 🤗

You really told the incident of Piya and her Mamaji and Dipanita very well...😊Her Evil Mamaji..😕I really wish ki ab Abhay usse revenge le.. Prabeen surely deserves his blood to be sucked by our savior Vampire...😡 Prabeen will pay his price on time

You were right... Jeh is really an nice man in ur FF... He's really a sweet heart...😳 he is... i wanted to show him as a positive character but i cant promise... my mind is full of evil thots and i love to play with my characters 😈

Coming to Abhay...😳 Well no one can match his care not even Jeh... 😆He's looking after a girl whom he doesn't know... 😊Still feels a connection towards her...😊Abhay is just amazing and his bro Aryan also...😃 Abhay is arrogant but not heartless and till now it's a pity or charity... the only connection Abhay feel with the girl is her BLOOD... it smells too good to him which she doesnt like 😕

Uff!!Wow!!! I can see a romantic scene is coming in the next update...😳 Really excited... Can't wait for it..😍 umm...i don wanna break ur heart baby so dont hope too much

Please update soon this time...😊

Thanks for the PM...😊

Lots of Love❤️

Sweta🤗

Originally posted by: heena_mehta

🤗finally i av read it once again n nw i m ready to comment

tanzie update was simply terrific...u made me speechless... aww Heena your comments always means a lot to me 🤗

abhay-pia's part made me shiver...gosh u av defined it so well!!! as such there was nthing b/w abhay-pia, bt if u try to feel it den it was like every moment passed b/w them was precious!! for the time being, everything he is doing is out of pity or kindness but still he feels the pull and unfortuntly the pull is only for her blood till now...

aryan...nt only abhay's aura, his persona also give me goosebumps in my stomach, specially imaging harshad as aryan made me feel wowww

n d last where aryan convienced abhay to give pia his body heat...( a simple hug😉), dat was wowww

( awesome , mindblowing idea tanzie👏) I just love to write abt Aryan henu, trust me 😆... you just wait and watch abt his ideas... 😆

jay ,😭, i m feeling so bad for him!! he reli loves pia , bt ofcourse pia cn only b of abhay..

bt i reli want him to b happy n hope he wl find his true love later in d story !! I will make sure he does...but there's still a lot of Jeh-Piya story to tell... it doesn't end here... 😉

parveen n deepanita...man they made me feel sick😡

cn someone b so bad n mean n dat deepz is playing wid her son's emotions ! shame on her!! They will pay the price on time... abhay will make sure they does 😆

tanz just one word to say-marvellous believe me i cn't wait for nxt part...u av to post nxt part asap😉

loadss of luv n big hug to u🤗 luv u tooo 🤗

Originally posted by: .rumki.

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awesome updte tanzie thanks Rumki 😳
jeh is really sweet here ... he is 😳
prabeen and lipstick aunty did it...hate them ... i hate lipstick chudail and show me zinda bach gayi to kya hua... i will make sure in my FF she suffers to the core 😈
hope abhay will take revenge 4m them
next chap must be romantic...waiting 4 it
pia's mama needed 1 last sign...did pia sign there?