New FF: Till the End of Time(Book1 DONE)note pg149

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sonia

@-Sonia-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#121

hey tanzie
WOW!
Double WOW!
Awesomeee update, once again!

OMG. I loved Abhay in this one!
Jeh is so sweet but his mother. .arghh !
Prabeen jaiswal. .is so dead. .i hope abhay makes him repay . .
Abhay cud have healed pia by his hands but still he gave healing kisses on other wounds. . Awww. . Cute!
Aryan is such a sweet heart. . Iske dimagh mei kia first class ideas atey hai. . Lol
I just loved the point where U stopped...
I'm sure, we have a very interesting part ahead. .hehe
You did a GREAT job!

Thanks for the PM. And i will be eagerly waiting for the next update. . Continue soon
tc

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LittleImmortal

@LittleImmortal

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#122

Awsum update 👏
Thanks for da pm😊

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Ume Salma Kakal

@sunflower52

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#123

Wow, 👏, thanks for the pm loved the update. Update the another chapter soon. Can not wait to know more.

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Raybika or u can call reeyana too

@Reeyana

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#124

wow! awsome update yar. i just read ur both chapter totally a new concept. abhay taking her 2 heal n his curiosity 2 know about pia n the story of Praveen n deeps aunt superb yar

and thanx 4 the pm would bewaiting 4 ur pm 2 get more story 😉

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visma

@kuttu

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#125

So Jai is worried for Pia. Now is Abhay going to sned Pia back or keep her with him and also the fact that she was slowly poisened.Waitng to know what the vampire brothers are going to do to help Pia

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suha

@suha16

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#126

awsum update!...luved di last part!

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Peehu24

@Peehu24

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#127

tanzie...too good...loved it...it was fab...eagerly waiting for next part...plz update soon...

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D.O_Xing

@D.O_Xing

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#128

Comments updated on Pg 15😳

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Pari Gupta

@Pari-Gupta

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#129

awesome update... loved it... Poor Sugandh her own brother used her and took away her property... I hope Piya recovers fast mentally and physically also... continue soon... thanks for the PM