New FF: Till the End of Time(Book1 DONE)note pg149 - Page 100

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Posted: 13 years ago
awasome update
thnx for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow tanz u rock man.its awsm.piya's new life seems intresting.want 2 know more abt it.
Felt reli sad at abhay's n aryan's state.i had tears reading the flashback.
At least u showed connection btn abhiya.continue soon.lv u loads.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Gosh I missed so much of action in this Tanzie!
Finally I caught up...
And must say brilliantly done dear...
Please ek request hain, Jeh ko ek psycho math banana...
I know I have no right to interfere in your character but please...
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update 😊amby-pia-misha convo was good looking forward 2 c their bond n friendship😃 aryan n abhay felt sad for them abhay is in so much pain 😭jeh i better dont get start on him 😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
Comment updated in page 132...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: heena_mehta

sry, i knw i m very late this time, which i shouldn't av been specially when i was hell beind ur life to update this part! *holding my ears* no prob Heenu.. u can comment anytime 😳

ok nw cmng back to comments!!
honestly telling u, i enjoyed reading it a lot nt coz abhay n aryan both were there(although u showed so much kanjoosi in showing them), bt coz of a fresh start of pia's life, it was so cool n different!!
i loved d way u av kept abhay alive in her memories!!! It has to...no one can remove Abhay from Piya's mind..they are soulmates 😳
u av placed amby-misha's character well, it was so smooth n natural!! loving this gal trio, it would b interesting to knw how story progressess b/w these three!! I needed these characters trust me..
so finally jeh, has turned negative, so negative dt he didn't think once dt y abhay killed her mother??, to save her pia, whom she claimed to love at some point of time😕, has he forget abt it?? n i m totally surperised dt somehwere he is playing so good wid her, just coz she is d key to abhay!!!🤢🤢 He's blinded by revenge for his mother's death. He loves Piya in his own wicked way.. u cant change that. but yes..his character will play diff shades here 😉
misha-pia-amby convo was super cool!!
ok nw coming to abhay-aryan😉. although it was painfull reading abt them😭
how aryan must b felt abt pia's question regarding his idientity
d way u wrote abt abhay's pain through aryan's pov, i loved it!!!
abhay compelling scene brought tear into my eyes 😭😭 n u knw it very well ,y it so happened!!😉 sorry
abhay-pia scene back at hospital was fab, it was so touchy n appearing so real to me!!! pia's behavior didn't surprise me n it was something natural!! I wanted it to be like this..
bt this time i want her to make an xception, no more running away frm d person in her sketches!!
n where r they shifting?? dheradoon???
would love to read nxt part asap, bt nt bf4 😉 I will upload when u dont have any exms..anything for u 😳
luv u loadsss 😳😳 me luvvvss u too🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: strawberryrashu

Tanzie seriously no words left awsum update pia trying hard to remember her part but abhay erased it 😭 pias frnds r so nice jeh eww i hate him abhiya ko juda kiya 😡 jeh still wants to kill abhay ye kab samjega 😕 aryan and abhay convo so touching 😭 abhay is also in pain *hugs hugs*thanks for pm


Im sorry to make you sad Rashu 😕 Jeh ne nehi kiya...urki mummy ne kiya 😆 Abhay doesn't know about Jeh...he will soon 😉
your welcome 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: bellaaa

yar its so heart taking update feeling bad for abhay piya hope next update mai woh mil jain kuch ho aisa but over all it was nice ff yar as always


Thanks dear. They will meet very soon... i wont drag it like a show offcourse 😆

Originally posted by: rashi.rose

Awesome update:-) loved it:-)


Thank you 😳


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: piyabhay4ever

super amazing update as usual. How do you manage to write so well yaar. You never cease to amaze me. Awww...thanks soo much sweety... 😳 im really glad you like my writing so much 😳

Coming to the update, I feel really bad for abhay. His desperation and longing for piya is heart breaking, I hope piya is able to overcome his compulsion and remember him. And I am sooo happy that aryan is back. I was missing him. U will miss him a lil in next update as well...because I will have to build up new characters 😆
I can never get enough of your updates so plese update soon otherwise I'll become like abhay in this update😆 Awww... so sorry...im dead busy but will update tomorrow...pakka 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: prerna26

Brilliant Update!😊 Thanks Prerna


Its possible to erase memories from mind but not from heart. They are engraved deep inside one's heart. So true 😳 You've expressed Abhay's emotions well. Pia was the only ray of hope in his dark life. Let's see how destiny brings them together. It has to..wait n watch 😉 Btw what happened to their blood bond/connection? As soon as the blood will run out of Piya's system the connection will become weak and Abhay didn't save piya with his blood when Deepu attacked her so the connection weekend during the time. Oh no, even Jeh wants Pia back in his life. Looking forward to the next update. Continue soon and thanks a lot for Pm dear.😃 infact now its Jeh whos in Piya's life.. 😆 will update tom.. ur welcome 😳

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