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Posted: 13 years ago
its fantastic start Mari
i loved both Mayur here
they both deserve eachother
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
fantastic though bit said but amazing concept
beautifully written
i loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesom update
Amazingly portrayed emotions
continue it
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Posted: 13 years ago
fantastic start
please continue soon
i loved the story
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice ss...
raj want to give divorce to nupur but y?
and mayank will be his future huby wow...
but y they both not accept their love for eachother...
pls cont soon...
i liked it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
not fair mari!
y r MN alag alag!
cont soon!🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Writer Note

Thank you so much friend sor liking update🤗🤗i m going to update next part of my SS
i hope u ll liked it😳ll wait for ur comment😳
Love
Maria...remember me in ur prayers
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ye Kaisi Mohabbat Hai

He stepped inside the house throwing his bag and tie on sofa and threw himself on couch "I want to talk to you Nupur"as she turned to bring a glass of water for him he called her and she turned back he was looking at her "I am listening" she looked back "I want DIVORCE" Her feet get froze at that place while the earth started spinning around her. she tightly pressed her hand on sofa and clutched it in her fist for support as her whole body shook at his words .she looked back at him in disbelieve while his face was stern and serious as it seemed he had been already taken that decision.. "D-iv-or-ce" her tongue was shaking even saying this word and tears rushed down from her cheeks she tried to control her shaking body and stared into his eyes "Please don't say this. If I did any mistake do punish me, I will bear that but don't say this" she clutched his shirt in her fists looking at him with pleading eyes and he jerked her hands pushing her back and she fell on floor "stop Nupur this drama.."he harshly said those words clinching his jaw and Nupur looked at him in disbelieve if he was the same person who promised her to fulfill her every dream and will spend his whole life with her while Raj ignored the hurt on her face "I want divorce and its my last decision"he announced in stubborn voice . "So you have been taken decision already but what about Ria?"she said and got up stepping towards him and Raj looked at her thinking about her words, she was using her last play card in hope may he will change his decision because whatever had problems between husband and wife but Ria,she was his daughter and as a father he would think about her daughter.. "She will adjust with her new mother" he said and Nupur got shocked at his words "New Mother??"She asked in disbelieve yet with shocking voice "yup!! new mother I am going to marry with Misha"he said looking at her face and Nupur looked at him with widened eyes "I cant bear you in my life anymore" his words hit with her ear drums and Nupur felt something broke in her heart. She looked at him in conformation he was the same person whom married her whom claimed that he was his lover, whom proposed her in front of whole college, whom said those words again and again to prove her how much he loved her, whom claimed that he could do anything for her and today he was saying he even could not bear her in his life. "So you no need me anymore" she said those words looking into his eyes in confirmation but he turned away his face and she got her answer. He said what he meant. She wiped off her tears with her palm "if you no need me I will leave you" she looked at him in hope may he will stop her but he did not and with broken heart she decided what she had to do..

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Mayank changed in his night clothes and lay down on his bed, closed his eyes to get some sleep which was impossible today as Today was her birthday, her memories were making him restless and in spite lots of efforts he could not control himself, today he was missing her like hell, wanted to see her, wanted to feel her closed to him. Today again 'he was adding want word with her every memory' feeling suffocated Mayank got up from his bed, today again he was feeling strange helplessness, emptiness in his heart he stepped towards the window and open that to inhale fresh air inside him it might could less his restlessness but No'he opened his eyes and felt his eyes pockets wet.. "I am missing you Nupur"he mumbled under his breath letting his tears to flow it was getting unbearable for him her separation. He took his car keys in hurry and went out the room.

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She walked towards her room and opened the door,Ria was sleeping she slowly took steps towards her with broken heart and leaned on her, she kissed her softly on her forehead letting her tears to flow. She took her in her arms and came out the room, Today Raj had crossed all the limit. He was still standing there waiting for her to leave his house.

As Nupur entered in hall taking Ria in her arms Raj turned his back to face her.

"Nupur you don't take Ria with you"Raj almost shouted at her snatching Ria from her hands and Nupur body shivered to heard his words "She-is my-daughter"she stammered tried to pulled her towards her but he pushed her Nupur back and she fell on floor while during their conversation Ria woke up and started crying loudly to see his father misbehaving with her mother.. "She is my daughter and she will live with me I will give you divorce Nupur you can go from here" he shouted at her and Nupur was stunned to see new face of Raj she could not believe he was behaving with her like this .she got up and rushed towards him to take Ria from him as Ria was crying now hysterically and spreading her hands towards her mother to take her in her arms but Raj wont allowing her. "She is my daughter you cant snatch my daughter..if you want to get marry with Misha..you can but don't snatch my daughter"Nupur pleaded infront of him tried to pulled Ria towards her but he jerked her hands and holding her wrist in his hand he threw Nupur out of his house and closed the door behind him while she pleaded in front of him but he did not opened the door Nupur sat on floor and cried her heart out she could not believe a person whom she trusted could do with her like that. How could he snatch her daughter? She was her mother. How could he be so heartless? It was night time and he threw out her from his house. She could not know where she would go now? She had no house. Where she would go at this time "now I will not plead in front of him, I will not request him to accept me again in his life, if he want to give me divorce he can but I will never let him to snatch my daughter what he thinks I am a weak woman .you are wrong Raj you will ashamed for your deed one day"she wiped off her tears and got up "I should talk to Gunjan and Samrat..i hope they will help me" thinking in her mind she took step with broken heart giving last glance to that house in which she entered as Mrs Raj but today he broke their relation..Samrat and Gunjan was Nupur friends they were married couple and knew about Raj misbehavior with Nupur they always said Nupur to leave him as he did not deserve her but she wanted to give her relation chance and was bearing his misbehavior because of her daughter..

She was walking on road lost in her thoughts did not know where her fate would now lead her but she decided she will take her daughter back from Raj she never let him snatch her daughter, a husband who could not fulfill his duties towards his wife would not deserve his daughter. She was so lost in her thoughts that could not see the car coming towards her in full speed.

Mayank was driving harshly thinking about Nupur he was angry on himself to remembering her "its not right Mayank,you have no right on her she is someone else wife" he closed his eyes in pain and could not see the person coming from opposite side as he opened his eyes he saw someone coming from other side he pressed horn many times but the person did not paid attention, his car stopped with jerk and he angrily opened the door of car and came out of it,it was night so he could not see the face of person clearly he walked closed to her "how could be you so careless walking on Road, don't you'.."he stopped in mid way looking at the person face who was standing in front of him, he could not believe his eyes he was shocked, surprised ,happy many emotions passed through on his face in just mere second .Nupur came out of her thoughts after listen known voice and looked up while her eyes widened to see Mayank infront of him, she looked at him in disbelieve and then a whisper came out of her mouth "Mayank" while he was still in disbelieve situation but after listening her same soft voice he got consciousness and realized it was not his dream she was actually standing infront of him "Nupur"he called her name in almost whispering tone while tears fell down from his eyes, she ran towards him and hugged him and Mayank was shocked, confused and in disbelieve situation'.

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here is update i hope u ll liked it😳

Edited by Maria. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
SIS...
awesome update...
i loved it to d coreee...
u know sis i sooo love dis name RAJ bt u made me hate him...
i wish ke iska nam Raj na hoke Adhiraj hota...
bt nvr mind...
i loved it...
he is such a jerk...
awww...
feeling so sad for Nupur...
bt now m sooo glad ke Nupur ko Mayank mil gaya...
ap tension karne ki koi baat nhi hain...hain na!!!!!
loved it lodsss...
beautifully written update API...
love U...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanx for editing ur title
hey sis
i jsut loved ur update
nups husband was such a beach...
how could he do with nupur. how dare he to snatch away her daughter frm her..
i jut hate him
i loved nups confident .. i know she'll fight for her daughter and now maynk is also with her
fab update
loved it


Edited by -Faria- - 13 years ago

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