FF: Tu Jaane Na...ch9 pg82. UPDATED!(: PMs later - Page 7

Originally posted by: AnnieKittWatt

Hallo Prix3,😊

Well, this is the first time am ever commenting on either of your FFs. But let me tell you something... You've got Amazing Writing Skills and a Fantabulous Imagination!! 😃 😛 I really loved the prologue of 'Tu Jaane Na'. It was a good start as there is so much for us to know about their past, the cause of this Showdown or should i say, Fight...

And about chapter 1: That was really awesome of her to keep going, rather than be stalled with fear written large in her eyes. That was totally cool. Even if she was scared, she did manage to keep those thugs away for sometime. And then came Arnav with a Gun!! 😲 Hah!...at first, I thought he was some secret agent or something (as you haven't given any character sketch of the characters)...But when, I came across his revelation, it was Hilarious 😆! hahaha...Even Khushi was shocked to see him with a gun.

And now, coming to the serious part, am kinda happy that Arnav, at least, realised his mistake. But by judging their thoughts and movements, I don't think that either of 'em will give each other away so easily, unless they come close to each other and feel each other's presence, look in the eye, try to read what is hidden in there and hold on to each other so as to not let go, as if their life depended on each other. ❤️

Hmm...What a lovely ❤️ story!! Heheheheh...😆

...All the Best, Prix3!! 😃

I, also wanted to dedicate a song to this FF (I know its a bit early to do anything like this, but look at the bright side, please) I request you to fit in this song in your FF - Tu Jaane Na, wherever you like, and whenever you like. It is truly an Amazing and one of the most Beautiful songs I've ever heard...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A7M7tko9oTI

(It is an instrumental, so you can even use it as a background score for the couple.)

Regards

Annie😊

Originally posted by: Danina

Yippieee:D:D

Congo for the new FF:D:D

Wow yaar i love the story:D

You write so nice:D

cant believe English was your weakest subject..LOL

you write superbly:D

:D

continue soon:D

cant wait for the next part:D

thanks for the pm:D

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

congrats on ur new ff...loved the prologue and first part...continue soon and plz can u pm me when u update

Originally posted by: aishi.muffin

Amazing story!

LOL "Take that you nincompoop! 🤣

I love your version of Khushi, and it cracked me up how Arnav's gun was a toy. 😆

Great story, do add me to your PM list!

Originally posted by: Simz786

OMG New Story. Khushi Throwing Her Heels At The Guys Lol 🤣. Arnav Scaring Guys With Toy Gun 😆. Soo Funny. PayAsh Wedding, Something To Look Forward To 😍. ArHi In Love.. Aww Cute. Plz Continue Soon 👍🏼

Originally posted by: iHeartTVD

Wow intense! Great start and first chapter. Loved Khushi throwing her heels at them goons! 😉 Looking forward to reading what goes on for Khushi and Arnav from here! Update soon and thanks for the PM! 😃