-RESEMBLE-SS-part 15 pg 90- (3 sep) - Page 10

awww congo for the new FF dear...

Superb FF Keya...Eagerly waiting for more.

luv d ff amazng all parts or so gud but i do wanna wat twist u will gv in dis ff urs may b maan fallng for dat other gurl😲

Congrats on the new ff
Great story line
Fantastic update
Plz continue soon

Just read the 4th part
Fantastic yaar

U wrte grat FFs but u end up giving unsatisfied ending in most of ur FFs which does leaves most of us sad!!!pls end ur FF with same interest as u start ur FF...immoral world was amazing but the ending looked like u were not at all interested in it n just wanted to get rid of it.I might be wrong it just what I felt.now u hVe started new FF m just afraid to read cos again u will loose interest n give some bad ending!!!sorry if I have offended u.but ending is as important as the start of any FF...if the ending is not done properly it leaves bad taste.m not a writer I just read lots n lots of books n anything I get.as I reader somewhere I can make out when a writer looses interest n just tries to finish it off.pls end ur FF with same zeal n interest with which u start it.I hope this FF will have a detailed n proper ending...good luck dear...pls don't feel bad I hardly comment on Antibes writing.it's just tht u write really well n I love ur FFs (except ur endingzzz:-()... Good luck dear keep surprising ur with ur writing!!!

Geet slowly hides her self behind maan. Hiding her face in shame. Oh how embarrassing must be for her mama to talk to her friends, and top of it this. No no. Oh no.
Maan "mama..."
Rano "enough! Puja peh bhi time per nahi ja sakti! Pata hi apki dadima kal phone kia tha. Taunting me." rano folds her arm. Showing false anger. Maan came close, hugging her, holding his ear.
Maan- sorry mama. Actually...
Rano- ha... Ha... Pata hi. Ab chalo. I have chose colourful dress for you.
Maan looks at geet, thinking what they should do. At least to keep her heart they have to & most importantly they have to be there on time.

Later on both walks out, driving way.
Geet "sab apki galti. Hamesha ham dat khatehi, aur ab maja leto ho!"
Maan "mane kuch nahi kia. Mane tumko bohot sari early warning di thi. Agar tum na suno, toh me ka Karu."
Geet "maann..." she makes another baby face. Not sure how to convince him, it's not right to behave like this.
It's been over a year of there marriage and still, with same childish behavior.
Another party. Geets cloths matching with maan. They looked like a doll. Reporters, photographer were present, clip after clip... Question after question, geet warmly smiled at everyone while maan with a Attitude walks in. Holding geets hand firmly.
There was buzz going around that how they always attend parties together. Never never they see them separate.

Girl one "don't they get bored?"
Girl 2 "they have been dating since ages."
Girl 3 "one of the best hot and happening couple.

all young girls and boys were envying them. Just couldn't stand that how happy they looked. Wishing they were in centre of attraction.

John gives both a warm hug. "someone on time." geet sighed and looked down. While maan smiled, giving him another hug.
Maan- well dad, so tell me who's party in this?
John- one of very close business friend. Oh you will know once you join.

Maan walked along with his dad while geet stood there elegantly speaking to few she knew from this Fame world.
The way she spoke it clearly suggested how soft, and warm she is. Every word was well suited to the situation. She blends well with anyone.

As the party came to end, everyone excused them self and took there leave. Maan came up and hugged her from the back. The hall was nearly empty,
Maan "so kaisa laga?"
Geet "har weekend pe koi na koi party hoti hi. Toh!... Per bohot acci thi. I made new friends." she smiles proudly.
Maan "tomara au collage dost kha hi?"
Geet "nahi pata. Hamne phone kia tha, tex bhi. Look..." she shows her phone. Maan could guess she have spend half of the time texing them. Uff this girl. What will he do with her?... This is there life. Not that... Collage... Umm...
Maan lost his word. He couldn't exactly express.
Geet "I hope au tike ho. Chalke dekh le?"
She spoke while looking at her phone. Then maan with her brown eyes.
Maan "geet.." he took a deep breath. "it's 3 am. Uski sone ki time 10-11! Au hameri tara nahi. I thought you know them more then me!"
Geet thought for a while. He was right. She looked at him, oh how couldn't she guess that.
Maan "ab chale ghar?" she was still thinking. He looked at her in amusement. Looking so adorable. He kissed her lips and cheek. Then gently whispered "chale?" she blushed realizing how close he was.
Geet "ap itna close ku ho?"
Maan "me toh her waqt tomahry pas rahiti hu!"
He cheekily came more close. Gently messaging her waist. "toh ab batovo..."
Geet "jute math bolo. Where were you through out the party? Pata hi all the girls couldn't stop asking me about you. Uff!"
Maan "isme uski ka galti ho? Agar tomara boy friend hot aur happening ho!"
Geet "boyfriend?" she looked at him confusingly.
Maan "husband!"
Geet smiled "Husband! Ab hame ghar chor do."
Maan "ha! Ha! Ku nahi. Meri Malkin."