abhiya'mini ff'an unknown desire' 'epilogue pg-66 - Page 34

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awesome update
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Posted: 14 years ago
guys thankuuu so much for ur wonderful support n beautiful comments!!! n pls forgive me this time, i m nt replying individually to all d comments coz i m reli running short of time nw these days!!
n as i av almost done wid nxt part, so i want to post it today only!!
so pls bear wid me n nxt part wl b coming wid in 15 minutes!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
part-8

Pia turned around n saw abhay standing there!!

Pia- abhay meet my father Praveen jaiswal n dad he is abhay raichand!!!

Praveen took his steps towards abhay n came stood in front him, wid a welcoming smile!!

Praveen- welcome abhay, its reli pleasure to meet some one like u, who has got so much success in his life at such a young age!!!

Pia was feeling so content, at his father's words for abhay!!!!

Bt for abhay his world was again falling into pieces , soon his blue eyes got filled wid tears n anger both, he kept looking at dat smiling face in front of his eyes n soon dat face got mix wid pia's face, abhay's mind started webbing his own story of betrayal, d person standing in front of him was d reason of his mom's death n d gal standing behind dat person was d shadow of dat murderer!!!

Praveen was abt to place his hand on abhay's shoulder in a way to appreciate him , bt abhay took his steps back!!!

Pia n Praveen both got surprised by his action!!

Abhay's eyes which were down, looked at Praveen n words finally came out of his chocking throat- mr Praveen jaiswal, its nt ma pleasure dat I m standing at urs door today, u r dat person whom I never wanted to see even on my death bed, bt GOD played a sick joke wid me , d person who snatched every single moment of joy frm my life, I fell in love wid his daughter, I found my life again in daughter of mom's murderer!!!

Pia n Praveen both got hell shocked!!!

Pia came n stood beside her dad n asked in her cracking voice- wat d hell is wrong wid u abhay??? How cn u talk to my dad like this n how on this earth my dad has got responsible for ur mother's death???

Abhay (wid those red eyes)-ask this frm ur dad pia, I m sure he must av an idea, wat am I talking abt??? Mr Praveen jaiswal remember dat night of 2 feb 2010, when u killed a lady n left frm there like a coward , leaving behind my mom in my hands all covered wid blood!!

Praveen was all shocked n guilty- he never thought ,dat past wl come out in front of him like this, he forgot dat one cn't run frm his sins, he/ she has to pay for it!!

Pia saw d guilt in her father's eyes, there was fear of committing a crime was visible on his face n pia's eyes were all swinging b/w d two most important persons of her life!! She was feeling miserable!!! Loosing ny one of then wl break pia n she was sure dat no wl b bother abt her n whatever decision wl they take, she wl av to accept it!!!

Abhay- ur silence won't reduce ur crime mr jaiswal n I think more than me ur daughter needs some answers frm u!!!

Praveen(wid a guilty voice)- abhay I m sorry, I knew I cn't bring ur mother back, whatever I did, is not forgivable, bt believe me dat was an accident, I lost my control n then

Abhay wid stern voice- n u lost ur humanity also mr jaiswal!!! Dat was nt an accident for me, dat was a murder n u r dat murderer!!! Bt don't worry mr jaiswal, I m nt going to complain abt u, coz I knw dat won't bring my mother back, I want u to regret ur life for doing this to me n my family, I want u to spend every single moment of ur life wid d burden n d name of a murdrer!!! U knw wat u didn't take away my life once bt twice, once when u killed my mother n today when u killed d love inside me for ur daughter!!!

Pia was just standing there , all quiet, tears were there in her eyes, she was just thinking dat seriously GOD cn b so harsh to her, her life was falling apart , like a pack of playing cards!!! Y d hell no one was trying to think abt her, wat was her fault???

Abhay(nw wid guilt n pain in his eyes, looked at pia)- I m sorry pia, I wanted my love to b mom's shadow nt a shadow of my mom's murderer !!! I love u bt I cn't b wid u , I cn't stop loving U COZ dats nt under my control, bt my pain n hatred for ur father won't allow my love to do justice wid ur love for me, I cn't see u in pain n I knw u cn't hurt and hate ur father for me!!! So it better I LEAVE U!!!!

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Present

Abhay opened his eyes n saw d first few sun rays entering his roombehind d curtains!!!

Abhay collected himself n went for a shower, he took his decision, without thinking abt d consequences!!! He cn't let his life go, widout giving a chance to it, either he wl lose everything or he wl get his life back, bt both d things were out of his hand, coz it wl b her decision only!!!

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After almost half an hour abhay reached at his destination!!!

Standing at d door, he pressed his finger on d door bell, he himself was confused under d pang of his overpowering emotions!! It wasn't easy for him, bt he was nt aving ny other option, he needed his answers or he wanted to give some also!!!

She opened d door n he looked at her, she was still d same, an innocent, cute soul, he still remember d day when he saw her in capri n T n even today she was in d same, bt dat smile frm her lips n spark in her eyes both were missing!!!

Soon abhay saw his bundle of love came there rubbing his beautiful eyes, his silky soft thick hair was all falling on his forehead n he said in his magical childish voice- morning mommy, cn I sleep for 5 more minutes??

He got totally disappointed when he saw his mom didn't respond to his words!! Then he turned around to see wat was so important dat his mom didn't reply to him n as soon as his eyes caught d man standing in front of him, his heavu eyes , got filled wid immense joy n he said xcitedly- abhay uncle!!!

He came towards him n said- wowww, I m so happy dat u came here, u av come to meet me na!!

Abhay smiled at his son's words , while picking him up in his arms, he said- ofcourse abhi I av come for u n for my love(he said while looking in her eyes)

Abhi-then y r u standing here, come inside!!!

Abhay entered while pia made way for him!!

Abhi was still clinging to abhay, when pia said- abhi come down , u r getting late for school!!! It doesn't look nice, if sam's parents wait for u!!! so come fast!!

Abhai while pouting- mom bt I want to b wid uncle!!!

Abhay while kissing his son's cheek said- I promise abhi, v both wl play n av loads of fun together very soon bt for nw, listen wat ur mom is saying n I knw u r a very good boy, who loves going to school!!!

Abhi –promise uncle u wl play wid me, when I wl come back!!

Abhay-promise!!!

Abhi kissed abhay n said- I love u uncle n abhay made him stand on his feet, he ran towards his room!!

After some time abhi left n pia came to abhay n asked him- abhay y av u come here?? Plsss abhay I don't want u to b getting close to abhi, he won't b able to bear d truth n I cn't see my son in pain, he is so small to face all this, pls abhay don't try to make ny place in his heart!! Don't give him ny false hope which u won't b able fulfil, like u did to me !!!

Abhay felt immense pain of her every single word, bt while controlling himself he said- pia he is my son also, how cn I even think of hurting him, u knw this!!!

Pia while controlling her tears frm falling down- abhay I don't knw nything!!! I just want u to leave, v both r happy in our world n jay reli loves me n abhi!!!

Abhay took his steps towards pia , pia was hell trying to avoid this situation, she knew dat she cn't control herself for long in front of him, she took her steps back, till d moment she got collided wid d wall behind her!!

Pia's eyes were on ground, she was nt so strong to look into his eyes, where were just asking for one chance, he was just nt asking abt his happiness, he was asking abt her n abhi's happiness also!!

Abhay cupped her face in his hands n asked her- do u love him pia??? Wl u ever b able to forget me, wl u ever b able to give my place to jay in ur heart, wl u ever b able to see abhi's dad in jay???

Pia kept looking into his deep blue eyes wid her teary one's-I cn't do this to jay abhay!!

Abhay- bt pia wouldn't it b unfair to jay also?? Plsss pia don't do this….plsss come back!!!

Pia closed her eyes in defeat for once n soon she felt abhay's lips on her, pia didn't resist his touch, she was nt so strong to keep her emotions still like ice, specially for him, his touch arose all d dead desires in her heart, she reacted gently while standing on her toes, abhay supported her frm her waist n they were just wanted to feel dat moment!!! Dat was nt a sudden rush, dat was love, dat was an emotional pull which were lying behind frm last 4yrs, bt today came out wid high waves!!

Coming out of their emotional la-push, pia saw into his eyes n said- go back abhay, I cn't do this, leave, plsss abhay chale jao, bf4 dat I wl surrender myself to u, gooo, I cn't betray jay, nt at all coz I knw d pain of losing ur love abhay, I cn't give dat pain to jay, nt even at d cost of losing my own love!!! V both r going to get married day after tomorrow n I want u to leave today only n she left d place while all crying!!!

Abhay was totally heart broken at her words, he failed !!! he lost her again n this time in all senses!!! He lost his son!!! He lost his life in d hands of jay!!!

Edited by heena_mehta - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Wow heena such an emotional part yaar.Wht Abhay did was bit wrong.It was Pia's father mistake & he punished Pia as well.Oh I hope soon Pia forget Abhay.Waise I know at last its all abt Abhiya but still.Woh Abhi-Abhay bond was damm cute.In all ur FF Abhay & his baby share strong & cute bond.Plzz continue😳

LUV u dear🤗
Edited by cuteshrishti - 14 years ago

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