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sonia

@-Sonia-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#321

wow... awesome update!
loved ur update
mesmerized by the way u described abhay's jealousy..his anger..abhiya's love & their passionate moment...
abhay pia moments were really cute ...especially the proposing one..
But now, abhay is going to leave pia due her dad's fault. .
I hope pia is now able to forgive abhay
thanx 4 d pm
waiting eagerly for the next update. . Continue soon
tc

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minibsp2007

@minibsp2007

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Posted: 14 years ago

#322

👏wow... very nicely written, loved the abhiya moments

beautifully described

Update soon

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ifrah.

@ifrah.

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#323

Great update heena..:)oh..abhay will break pia's heart :(

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kajal

@imkt

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#324

hey dear awsome yaar i just love ur ff too much,,,,

i dont knw where u bring these ideas...but u knw these are mind blowing and awsome... bechara abhay cant see him in tears...

u know heena yeh jo gussey waala abhay hai na mujhe bahut acha lagta hai...toh u shuld continue with this yaar...plz plz plz piya ko aur mat rulaoo warna i will cry dear😭😭😭

as i said that i want tips so u have to give me yaar...

i want to write like you dear...

i am your fan and today i will take tips in any cost

i dont know

u r superb and fansatic writer yaaar

just love u so much and ur writing

update soon dear

i will waiting and a big hug🤗🤗 to you

and yeah tips waiting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!waiting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!waiting!!!!!!!!!!!!😍😍

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abhiya7fan

@abhiya7fan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#325

omg..🤗.awesome..heena...great update...abhiya finally in love...☺️😳😛

but wat will abhay do now...pia's dad is his mom's murderer...!!

dont want abhiya separate so soon.😭..

waiting to know what happens next...!!

update soon...😛

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aamirkhanfan

@aamirkhanfan

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#326

what!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Pia's dad is abhay's mother's muderer...poor abhay, how will he deal with this?

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Pari Gupta

@Pari-Gupta

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#327

awesome update
Abhay now knows the truth and its time for their separation please unhein jaladi mila dena aur please jaldi update karna

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shivanirajput

@shivanirajput

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#328

oh god what a lovely update
everything was there jealousy,love,romance,guilt,remorse,anger,happiness
abhiya moments were superb👏👏👏👏
but last part was painful now abhay will hate pia and will broke her heart and she will be all shattered😭😭
i m hoping to return to the present soon and hope that abhay will win her back
thanks for pm and update soon
by the way waiting eagerly for love and deception update

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shafaq

@shafaq_abhiya

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#329

awww...ur post is really awesome loved it... abhay nd piya moment was soo full of bt last part was heartbreaking...

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sunita satardekar

@sunu123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#330

hey heena😃awesome update dear👏👏👏👏...loved abhay's jeolousy...abhiya's confession n their beautiful first night together😳😳😳...i loved how abhay proposed her...ohh god poor pia😭😭😭...now they will seperate..now abhay will hate her😭😭😭...hope pia forgive abhay...plz update jaldi haahav anice dayluv usunita

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