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Lily201

@Lily201

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#381

@Marvee-- I totally love the enigmatic,unpredictable part that surrounds Maaneet's meetings in this fic-it was a mesmerizing update !!😃

And voila - Maaneet's first ever,conscious kiss was sweet 😳
Yup also loved the sensitivity in building the situation,Geet's harried state after their encounter and Maan's upfront,frank reply of an introvert opening up
Waiting for the next part

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deepali1022

@deepali1022

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#382

awesum update yar i luv d shrt frml introduction of maan by himslf
thnx for d pm

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m-g19

@m-g19

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#383

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#384

Marvee as always awesome😊

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reni

@leverne

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#385

awesome update and a lovely first kiss...

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Abgina

@crazydevil87

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#386

Awsome update...luved it!! 'thank you' was hilarious...

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Deepa

@harshdb

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#387

Hey,

thank u so much for the PM & the update is good👏⭐️
once again thanks

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Abreshmina

@Abby-GC-Crazy

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#388

marvee...u askd us lykd it...??? Hmm...girl luvd it...it ws juz a super-fantastic update...wow...it ws cute...sensational...sensuous...comic...evrythin...it ws juz sooo WOW...!!!
D way maan kissed geet ws sooo sensuous...
Den d random person sayin...'get a room'.. Hahahahahhaha...it ws sooo hillarious... :D
den d thot process of maan...hehehhe...wht ws he 2 say...'u taste even betta wen ur awake'...hehehhehe..kya baat h..!!!
Den geet sayin thnq...hehehehe...thnq 4 wht baby...4 d kiss... :p
n den maan givin his intro...OMG...dat ws so cute...'my name is maan singh khurana..grew up in london wid daadi n bro dev...dis masters in business 4rm oxford..currently run my family business...' pura biodata hi bta dia...hehehhehe...
N den d last line ws d bst..' n m guessin m nt a vry gud kisser cz u hvent responded 2 ne of dem so far'...hehhehehehe...dat ws d catch line of d update...it ws lyk u'l roll down laughin on dat...hehehehehhe...
Ol in ol a perfect update... :D
thx 4 d pm...