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Hinal.94

@Hinal.94

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Posted: 14 years ago

#591

wowww loved it

it was superb

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Seher

@Speechless

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Posted: 14 years ago

#592

UPDATE

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Marvee Khan

@marvee-khan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#593

Awaken Me

Part 5

I WILL NO LONGER BE WRITING ON INDIA FORUMS, PLEASE REFER TO MY BLOG TO READ MY STORIES.

https://marveesfictions.wordpress.com/

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Seher

@Speechless

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#594

OMG

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They Made Love in such a critical situation and For the first time or who bhi completely strange only knew eachother's Name...

The Men Who were they?? and why they were following GEET Were they talking abt Geet's DAD whose body thrown off??????????what happened between them that she was not willing to recognize him at all ooopppsss so much confusion

the way u write past and present with so much perfection

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abinash079

@abinash079

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#595

awesome update loved the way u mixed the present with past
precap seems that geet would reply maan that it was not love it was purely lust but only she knows that what ever they did was purely love

already waiting for the next part continue soon

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Najmah

@Fallen-Angel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#596

Lovely update, it was rocking!!
Plz cont soon...

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Zahra

@-Zahra15-

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#597

is it that those men had killed geet's dad...the update was simply awesomme...both the present n flashback were amazing...from the precap am guessing that it might be geet teling this to maan in the present...i wonder how will maan react to this...continue soon...