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Posted: 13 years ago
whats wrong with maan... itni raat ko bui kaam kar raha hai... 😆😆
geet's gift from vicky... hahahhaa... geet bhi sample hai... kya kya mangati reheti hai...
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Posted: 13 years ago
its second day of their marriage ...

he is working ...on lapy ...!!!!!!!!

and she want to sleep😉 !!!!!!!!!

No comments Buddy ...


chee chee babaji ...ye maan kaisa MAN hi...!!



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Posted: 13 years ago
This is a very nice ff. Read the whole thing and just loving it. Do continue to pm me plz!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for the nice update. you were writings are like that we can truly imagine the shots and their faces . I don't know how to say thanks to u for writing this. u r awesome .👏
Now after marriage office romance will start.
Edited by riatagore - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: KamalikaG

This is a very nice ff. Read the whole thing and just loving it. Do continue to pm me plz!😊

sure buddy Smile
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Posted: 13 years ago

Wonderful update...❤️

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey nice update yaar...
geet's sooo brilliant in collecting details abt maan n surprise him😉...it was nice...looking fwd...

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Posted: 13 years ago
wao loved it sooo much can't w8 for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART - XLV


She got frustrated and opened her eyes when she didn't get any response from Maan.


Geet: u want me to help u??...chalo we will work together and finish it off...show me what's bothering u


Maan is looking at her without answering.

Geet: Maan i am talking to u...tell me what r u doing?

Maan: voh...i am just reviewing this code


Geet: ok give it to me i will check the code... i have kept everything ready on the table, u finish off the dinner

Maan: r u not feeling hungry?...don't u want to eat along with me?


"i ate before u came" said Geet yawning

Maan: what a traditional Indian wife...u didn't wait for me


Geet: i am feeling hungry so i have completed my dinner...vaise don't disturb me Maan

Maan: i think u forgot that it is ur duty to atleast serve me when i am eating


Geet: i am doing ur work... so there is nothing wrong if u do my work

Maan: nice...always compensating one with the other...u appear like a BALANCE SHEET for me

Geet: Maan stop it


Geet is seriously checking the code all the time while talking with Maan. Maan has seen her checking the code he is aware that she is not going to serve him, so he ate his food and came near Geet. The one and only common thing between Maan and Geet is that both are serious and sincere when it comes to work, both of them try to give their best.


Maan: It's ok i will check this tomorrow...leave it Geet

Geet: plz Maan give me 10 minutes


Maan's self thought: Oh NO!! What did i do...now it's my turn to plead her...i came to know one thing...i have to finish the office work at the office itself and never bring office work to the home...otherwise i have to wait for her and one more thing guyz shouldn't marry a girl of the same profession, i will advise Vicky not to do the same mistake that i have done ...see what she is doing she asked me to stop working and now she is working instead of me...this is ridiculous!!!


Geet: Maan did u look at this code...we can simplify this code we can replace this 20 lines of code with just 5 lines...and look at this, the same piece of code is repeatedly used number of times in hundreds of pages..we can reduce the number of lines of the code and the compilation time as well, by using just 5 lines in the place of 20 lines...what do u say Maan?


Said Geet pointing towards the code which she wants to change without looking at Maan. Maan has seen the code and identified that Geet's solution is apt to reduce the compilation time.


Maan: yes u r right...we can change this code

Geet: ok then let's do it


Maan: what?... u want to do the changes now...stop it Geet i will do it tomorrow...and u said that u r feeling sleepy so stop it


Geet: no i am not feeling sleepy now...it's ok do one thing, if u r feeling tierd u take rest ...i will finish it off


Maan got irritated and angry listening to Geet. He closed the lap top and grabbed it from her.


Geet: Maan what r u doing?

Maan: this is my work and i will finish it off

Geet: ok...as u wish


Geet took the cutie and laid on one side of the bed. Maan has seen cutie in Geet's hand and started cribbing.


Maan's self thought: OMG!!! ek museebat gayi toh ek aur agayi..what should i do to get rid of this Cutie now?

Maan came and sat on the bed thinking what to do with cutie.


Maan: Geet this bed is meant only for two...remove the third member from this bed

Geet: what ???...third member...what r u talking?


Maan: i am talking about ur cutie

Geet: Maan stop it...ab tumhe cutie se bhi problem hai

Maan: yes ... i have problem with cutie


He grabbed cutie from Geet's hug


Geet(shouting at him): Maaannn...waht's ur problem? Y don't u let me sleep peacefully


Maan closed her mouth with his hand and made her lay on the bed and now he is sitting on top of her. Geet made her eyes big looking at the way he pounced on her. She is looking straight into his eyes.


Maan: don't shout..i will not only do the office work i will do the work of ur Cuite also...u don't need Cutie any more


He removed his hand from her mouth. Geet understood what he is referring to, she made a pout and turned her face to one side and remained silent. Maan turned her face towards him, he leaned on to her face and touched her forehead with his'.


Maan(whispered on her lips): what do u say?


Geet: Mrs.Khurana is ready to follow the order of Mr.Khurana


He smiled for her answer and pecked on her lips, she hugged him in return...poor cutie lost her job because of Maan.

**************


After 5 Days


Geet: what is this Maan...y don't u place the things at the right place

Maan: what did i do?


Geet: see the way u have mixed the clothes and the files, i told u that i have changed the rack where u place the files usually and again u r misplacing them


Maan: u have changed so many things not only in this room but also in the house form the flower vase on the table to the curtains in the hall, from the files in the bed room to the shampoo present in the bathroom, from the books in the reading room to the knife present in the kitchen in just few days ...it takes some time to get used to the change


XXX


Few Days Later


Maan: Geet...Geet...where r u?
Geet: what happened?


Maan: look at this shirt

Geet: what's wrong?


Maan: u tore all the buttons of this shirt that night and now i don't have a ...


Maan is shouting at Geet pointing towards the buttons of the shirt which he is wearing...Geet closed his mouth.


Geet: stop it... don't shout...if this shirt is not fine, wear some other shirt


Maan removed her hand from his mouth


Maan: some other shirt...show me another shirt which is having full buttons...every night my shirts are suffering because of the tigress in u...u tore all my shirts and now see i have to go to the office without wearing a shirt


Geet: isshh...stop it


She got the stitching kit along with her and started stitching the buttons of his shirt. She is blushing remembering when and how she tore the buttons of the shirt while stitching.


Maan: so u know how to stitch?

Geet: Maan

Maan: bahot kuch seekh liya tumne shaadi ke baad


Maan is narrowing the distance between them. Geet intentionally pinched him with the needle to contol him.


Maan: ouch!!!... Geet

Geet: it's done...u can go now...bye honey


She kissed on his cheek and pushed him out of the room.

XXX

Few Days Later


Maan is getting ready for the office and Geet is putting on the tie around his collar.


Geet: Maan i want to come to the office along with u

Maan: what happened suddenly?


Geet: i am getting bored in the house...dadima has gone to Mumbai, Vicky goes to the college and u will be in the office...u r coming home late from the past few days...i am feeling alone...i want to join u at the office so that i can lessen the work burden on u and i will be engaged in some work..what do u say?


Maan: not a bad idea

Geet: really????...then i am also coming along with u from today onwards


Maan smiled looking at her excitement.


Geet: thank god u have agreed, now i can meet Pari also every day...i thought all my knowledge is getting into the air...enough of being a good Indian house wife...i can't sit inside the closed walls of the house...


She is talking without giving a chance for Maan to confirm that he is ok with her decision or not. Maan couldn't say anything looking at the glow in her face.


Geet: ok i am ready...shall we go honey?

Maan: hmmm...as u wish sexy


PRECAP: i am not ur wife at the office remember this before u say anything to me


P.S: sorry for typos and other mistakes that have crept because of my limited knowledge.



PART - XLVI

Edited by sldeeps - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Me first!!! that is so special for me...Geet is such a workaholic!!! Poor Maan why did he give the laptop to her!!! Loved the way Geet bringing changes in Maan's life and house and button scene was just 😳😳
Maan ne Geet ko Balance sheet se compare kiya??? now that's interesting...and now time for some office scenes and impatient to know Maan's reaction for the precap 😉
Edited by maanhar - 13 years ago

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