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Posted: 14 years ago
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Geet's eyes flew open.

"Mera woh matlab nahin tha…" she started.

"Koi baath nahin hai Geet…saach mein…tumse badhkar mere liyeh kuch nahin hai…main intezaar…" he said as he began to get up off the bed.

"Mera woh matlab nahin tha…" Geet repeated.

Maan felt her hand wrap around his as she pulled him back. He wasn't sure what was going on so he simply looked at her.

"Saath saal se iss paal ka intezaar kiya hai maine," Geet said.

"Magar Geet…" Maan began but was silenced by a finger that Geet pressed against his lips.

"Itni asaani iss paal ko nahin jaana dungi main," she said.

She knew he needed more reassurance that she as ready to take this step in their relationship so she let her hands find their way up to his face. She cradled his face in her hands for just a second before she pulled him down until their lips touched. She started the kiss out soft and tender before wrapping her arms around his neck and pushing harder. The pulled apart eventually because they needed to breathe.

Maan rested his head against her forehead as he said, "I love you Geet."

"I love you too Maan," Geet said back.

Maan pulled back and took a good look at his beautiful wife who glowed under the light from the candles. First he took off the head piece that she wore, as he did so he placed a kiss on her mang where he had only a short while ago filled with sindoor. He then nuzzled the back of her ears as he took off the heavy earrings, before tenderly biting her earlobes. Then he used his lips to tease her shoulders and neck. He placed kisses on every inch of her neck as she tilted her head allowing him better access. Soon her elaborate necklace joined the pile of jewelry on the bedside table. He turned his attention the undoing the clasp of the chain that still rested around her neck.

"Nahin Maan…" she whispered as she stopped his hands, "Isse rehne doh. Saath saal se taras gayi thi isse pehene ke liyeh…aab toh maarte dam tak isse aalag nahin hoongi."

It was only then that Maan realized that it was her mangalsutra. Immense pride and joy filled him as he kissed the back of her neck before beginning to undo the strings that held her blouse in place. He gently slid the fabric off of her shoulders and kissing them as he went. He turned her to face him as he drew the blouse completely off.

She gasped as the cool air hit her bare body causing her to seek refuge in the dupatta that lay discarded on the bed. Maan smiled at her shyness and let it go for the time being. Maan began teasing her more by placing kisses across her bare shoulder, neck and ears. He reached behind her head and undid the pins that held her hair in a bun. Within seconds her raven dark hair cascaded down her back and her bare shoulders. He was so entranced in her that he didn't even realize when her hands had found their way to the buttons of his kurta. He felt the garment loosen as she undid the buttons one by one. Soon his kurta lay discarded with her blouse in a heap on the floor.

Maan groaned slightly and closed his eyes as he felt her shaky hands run across his abdomen caressing every inch of skin as she went.

"Geet…" he said harshly as her hands ventured lower than he was ready for.

Opening his eyes he saw the blush on her cheeks as she looked down at her hands.

"Geet…" he whispered as he used his finger to tilt her face up towards him.

As soon as their eyes met, she threw her arms around his neck holding him tight. Maan felt the most amazing sensation as the dupatta that covered her slipped away allowing her bare chest to touch his bare chest. Maan knew that he wouldn't be able to control himself much longer. Using his hands he braced them on her shoulders before gently pushing her down so that she was lying on the bed. He kissed the base of her neck where the pendant from her mangalsutra lay declaring that she was his and only his. Slowly he made his way lower and lower as he teased her and touched her. Every moan she uttered was wreaking havoc on his body. Knowing that only he could touch her and make her moan in such a way gave him immense joy.

Making his way down to her waist, he slipped a finger under the chain that she wore around it. Using that finger he traced her waist gently until he found the clasp that released it. Undoing the clasp, Maan gently pulled the chain off and tossed it aside. Next, he carefully undid the hooks that held her ghagra securely on her hips. He felt her grip onto his shoulders as he nails gently dug in. This time, he used both his hands to slide off the garment and everything else leaving her bare under him. He heard her gasp as she used her hands in an attempt to cover himself.

Maan moved away for just a second causing Geet to look back at him questioningly. He took only a few seconds to discard the last stitches of clothing he wore before he found his way back to her.

He used his hands to trail the entire length of her body, starting at her legs, up her thighs, around her hips, across her flat stomach. He lowered his head as he kissed her bellybutton causing her to shudder under him. Using his lips he made his way up higher and higher until they found her lips once again.

He settled himself above her as she opened up for him. He locked his eyes onto hers as he braces his weight on his arms so that he didn't crush her. She stroked his arms with her hands making their way up to his broad shoulders.

Ever so gently Maan pushed himself in as she moaned quietly. He stopped when he met with resistance, a part of him afraid to hurt her in even the slightest way, but when he looked into her eyes he knew she was ready.

With one swift thrust, Maan broke the barrier that separated them from becoming one.

"Maan," she rasped as she arched her back up off the bed and dug her nails deep into his shoulders and back.

Her eyes were closed and Maan saw a tear glisten in the light around them.

"Geet…" he called softly.

A few seconds later, she slowly opened her eyes and smiled at him. She wrapped her hand around the taveez he wore around his neck before pulling him down to capture his lips with hers.

Maan withdrew and thrust again eliciting a moan from Geet. He began to set the pace, slowly at first, getting more vigorous as the seconds passed on. He felt her claw at his back and bite his shoulders as he buried his head in the crevice of her neck. He slammed his lips furiously onto hers as she cried out when she reached her climax along with him.

Later that night they finally lay in each others arms. It had taken them seven years of pain, seven years of tears and seven years of loneliness but they finally got to the place they'd only dreamt of.

Finally after seven years Maan and Geet were together. Finally after seven years Maan and Geet were one.

*~* Back to Present *~*

Geet had showered and dressed in a red saree as quickly as she could. Nothing having the time to do her hair, she let it air dry into its natural waves while she did her makeup. She kept it simple with jut a touch of eye shadow, eyeliner, mascara, a hit of rouge and a sweep of lip-gloss. She slipped on her shoes before going through her dressing table drawers looking for her jewelry. Find the set she was looking for, Geet quickly slipped on the kangans and necklace. She was just putting on the earrings when someone called.

"Didi!" Pinky yelled, "Aur kitna waqt lagega?"

"Baas hogaya," Geet answered as she put one earring on, "Aabhi aayi."

Geet was struggling to get the last earring through her hole when her mother-in-law walked in.

"Geet beta aagar tumhe aur waqt chahiyeh toh leh ho…jaldbazi kya hai," Mrs. Singh said as she placed a shawl over her shoulder.

"Nahin nahin Maaji, hogaya," Geet said finally pushing the earring through and securing it in place. "Aur jaldbazi kaise nahin hai? Hum ladkiwale hai…hum dehr nahin kaar sakte."

Mrs. Singh laughed at Geet's comment.

Geet straightened out her pallu and walked over to the door where Mrs. Singh stood. Mrs. Singh put a loving hand on her cheek before she spoke.

"Bohot khubsurat lag rahi ho," she said.

Geet simply smiled.

"Lekin lagta hai ke hume dehr hojayegi…kyun ke tum kuch bhool rahi ho," Mrs. Singh said.

"Kya?" Geet asked confused.

Mrs. Singh smiled at her, "Tumhari bindi…"

Geet reached up to find that she did have a small bindi already on. She frowned but before she could speak, Mrs. Singh did.

"Aagar Maan ne dekh liyeh ke tumne khud bindi lagali, toh halla macha dega," she reminded.

Geet sighed and smiled because her mother-in-law was right. Ever since they'd been married, Maan had insisted that he be the one to put the bindi on for her every morning. With the exception of the occasional business trip, he did so every morning without fail for the past seven years.

"Bhabi jaldi!" they heard Anne yell.

"Aayi!" Geet yelled just as Mrs. Singh went off.

Geet rushed inside her room and took off the bindi, placing it back on the sheet she had gotten it from. Grabbing her purse, she put the sheet inside as she exited her room.

She rushed down the stairs to see everyone in the family waiting – everyone except her husband and their two devils.

"Bhabi…Veerji kahaan hai?" Lucky asked.

"Pata nahin…magar tum log chalo…hum aate hai," Geet said as made her way towards them.

"Saath mein chalte hai naa," Pinky said as she shifted from one leg to another.

"Nahin tum log jaao…aagar ladkewale pohoch gaye toh? Vaise hi doh gadiyan toh lag hi jayenge," Geet said.

"Haan haan…chalo chalo," Anne said as she began walking out.

"Kuch toh sharam kar!" Pinky teased, "Aapni sagaai ke liyeh koi itna utavla hota hai kya?"

Everyone laughed.

"Chutki…main bataoon ke teri shaadi ke din tu kya kya kaar rahi thi?" Geet asked.

"Khabardar Didi," Pinky warned as she waved a finger in the air.

Geet laughed as she led the family outside to the waiting cars. They were taking the SUV so that it was easier for them all to sit. Mr. and Mrs. Singh climbed into the back with ease, while Anne sat in the middle row with her heavy ghagra spread out. Lucky sat in the driver seat while Geet helped Pinky into the passenger seat carefully.

"Sambhalke chalana," Geet called as she closed the door.

"Of course Bhabi, mere paas precious cargo joh hai," he said as he laid a protective hand over Pinky's swollen belly.

"Jaldi aana beta," Mr. Singh called.

"Haan Papa…baas abhi nikalte hai," she said.

She waved them goodbye from the entrance as they left. Once they were out of sight she went into the house.

"Aab yeh Maan kahaan gaye?" she asked herself.

She began to search for him starting with his study but didn't find him there.

"Maan……………Maan," she called as she walked the now quiet halls of the Singh house.

She waited for him to call back to her but he didn't.

"Pata nahin kahaan gayab hogaya," she said to herself.

Then, she heard laughter and instantly she knew where he was. She made her way to the playroom and despite the fact that she was angry at being late, she couldn't help but smile at the sight that greeted her.

Her full grown husband was sitting at the small table in a tiny chair that brought his knees up to his chest. He had on a pink feather boa around his neck and a purple glittered hat on his head. In his hand he held a tiny pink and white tea cup and saucer, from which pretended to drink.

In front of him, giggling to their hearts content, were their two daughters – five year old Arya and two and a half year old Nisha. They were her two little devils and his two little angles.

Geet marveled at the fact that at one time in her life, she would have never thought about having such an amazing family. She's given up on those dreams when she had thought that her Maan was dead. She'd never dreamt of every being happily married with two beautiful children. Yet here she was, smiling and enjoying the fact her husband was having tea party with their daughters.

As Geet watched Maan charm his angels, she was reminded about how much he'd loved them from the beginning.



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Edited by jnawaz - 14 years ago
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*~* Flash Back *~*

(Arya = 3 yrs ; Nisha = 6 months)

Geet stood in the nursery watching her baby girls sleeping peacefully. Arya was tucked in her small bed under her princess covers, while Geet had just put down Nisha after feeding her. Geet pulled the blanked up to cover her shoulders and placed Nisha's favorite toy, a stuffed bunny, next to her. She stood there quietly and just watched the two of them sleep so soundly.

Tears suddenly stung her eyes as she realized how oblivious her children were to the harsh world out there that waited for them.

Here, in the Singh house, they were the apple of everyone's eyes be it their grandparents, uncle/aunty or their father. Same was true for the Handa household. Being the youngest in both families they were both blessed with such love that it warmed Geet's heart to know her babies were loved so much.

But outside…outside it would be a completely different case. They were girls now but they would be women one day. They would be women in a world run by men, men who didn't give women the respect they more than deserved.

Tears flowed down her cheeks as she thought back to her own father and how he'd treated her, how he'd ruined her life simply because she was a girl. To him she was property that was valuable only depending on what she could be traded for. Her father had sold her happiness for his selfish reasons, he'd sold her life for material possessions, he'd shattered her spirit for his ego and power.

Geet felt Maan come up close behind her so she quickly wiped her tears. She knew if he saw her crying he'd be concerned.

"Kya kaar rahe ho?" Maan asked.

He placed his chin so that it was resting on her shoulders while his arms encircled her waist.

"Kuch nahin," Geet said, "Baas Nisha ko dood pila diya aur sula diya."

"Hmm…" he said in a deep voice.

They stood like that just looking at their girls for a while and try as she might, Geet just couldn't control her tears, which she chalked up to latent hormones.

"Geet…tum roh rahi ho?" Maan asked as tears fell onto his hand.

"Nahin toh," she lied.

"Geet…" Maan said as he turned her around so that she was facing him.

He instant saw the tears in her eyes and the wetness on her cheeks.

"Tum roh kyun rahi ho? Kya hua?" he asked concerned.

"Kuch nahin…" Geet said as she wiped her eyes, "Main toh baas aaise hi…"

"Jhoot maath bolo Geet…aachi tarha se jaanta hoon main tumhe," Maan warned.

Geet turned her back to him as she faced her girls again.

"Daar lagta hai Maan…" Geet said as she ran a loving hand over Nisha's back.

"Kis baath ka daar?" he asked.

"Inki bhivisha ka daar," Geet replied.

"Matlab…" Maan asked, not sure where she was going.

"Yeh dono ladkiyaan hai…" Geet said.

"Jaanta hoon," Maan said as he caressed Nisha's cheek. "Meri doh pariyaan hai."

Geet sighed as she walked over to Arya's small bed. She watched her older daughter for a second before running her hand lovingly down her head.

"Geet main kuch samja nahin," Maan said as he joined her.

"Yeh duniya ladkiyoon aur aurtoon ke liyeh nahin bana hai Maan," she said.

"Kya?" Maan asked, still confused.

"Mujhe hi dekhlo…" Geet began, "Bauji ne mere saath kya kuch nahin kiya sirf issi liyeh kyun ke main unki beti thi, beta nahin."

"Geet…" Maan began, now knowing where this story was going.

"Itni nafrat kyun ki main ek ladki thi," she said as her voice cracked.

Maan gathered her in his arms and hugged her knowing that she needed to be held at that moment.

"Main tumhara Bauji nahin hoon Geet," Maan said his tone slightly angered.

"Jaanti hoon Maan…" she began but was cut off.

"Humari betiyoon ko aapni jaan se bhi zyada pyaar karta hoon," he stated.

Geet knew he was upset because he felt that she was accusing of possibly doing to their girls what her father had done to her.

"Main jaanti hoon ke tum humari betiyoon se bohot pyaar karte ho…khabi inko dukh nahin deh sakte," Geet said as she cupped his face in her palms.

She kissed him on the lips gently before turning back to face their daughters.

"Magar yeh duniya…yeh duniya tumhare jaisa nahin hai…yeh duniya…jahaan mard raj karte hai…yeh duniya hi inko dard denge, inko rulayenge…" Geet said. "Yeh duniya inko nahin chodenge."

With that said Geet couldn't control her tears any more as she began sobbing. Maan took her into his arms once again and held her as she cried in fear for the pain her children might one day face.

"Aaisa kuch nahin hoga," Maan said as Geet's sobs subsided. "Main aaisa hone hi nahin dunga."

Geet wiped her tears as she pulled back from him when Nisha stirred in her sleep and whimpered. Geet was about to go to her but Maan beat her to it. He gathered Nisha up into his arms and rocked her until she settled down after putting her thumb in her mouth.

"Mujhe mein itni himmat nahin hai ke main inke akhoon mein asoon dekhoon…phir yeh duniya kya cheez hai," Maan said.

Maan walked over to the rocking chair and sat down with Nisha.

"Intak pohochne se pehle duniya ko mujhse guzarna hoga…jaan deh dunga lekin inn paar koi kharoj bhi nahin aane dunga," Maan promised.

He got to his feet after a few minutes and carefully laid Nisha down, patting her back while she settled in. He then leaned over and placed a kiss on her chubby cheek before doing the same to Arya. Stepping back, he put an arm around Geet's waits pulling her in close.

"Dekh na Geet…mardoon ki duniya mein bhi meri pariyaan raj karegi," Maan said.

*~* Back to Present *~*

Geet stood and watched her daughters with her husband. He was their knight in shining armor, their super hero that saved them from everything and anything. Even if they misbehaved and Geet said something to them, Maan always stopped her and favored his 'angels'. Of course the girls were smarter than Geet had originally given them credit for because they knew that all they had to do was tell their Papa and everything would go the way they wanted. At first Geet feared that they would be spoiled but surprisingly they weren't. Just like they knew their father was in their corner always, they also knew that whatever their father said had to be obeyed. Whatever their Papa said to them was set in stone and unchangeable.

Geet was jarred back to reality when she heard the musical laughter of her children.

"Aagar aap logoon ki chai khatam hogaya hai toh chale?" Geet asked.

"Mamma…aap humesha humari tea party bigad dete hai," Arya complained.

"Haan Mamma…" Maan whined along with her.

"Maan sudarjaiyeh," Geet complained as she stepped inside the play room, "Haar waqt bachoon jaise behave karte ho."

"Papa…baacha," Nisha said as she giggled.

Maan frowned at Geet as he got to his feet and removed all the tea party paraphernalia.

"Vaise Mrs. Khurana…aaj toh aap bohot khubsurat lag rahe hai," he said as he walked over to her.

"Mamma pretty…" Nisha said as she snuggled with her old pink bunny.

"Thank you baby," Geet said.

"Mera matlab hai ke aaj tum bohot…" Maan began as he leaned in close to her ear, "…sexy lag rahi ho."

"Maan!" Geet scolded. "Badmash!"

"Mamma…aab aap decide karlo…Papa baacha hai ya badmash…" Arya said.

Maan chuckled while Geet stood with her hand on her hips.

"Papa badmash baacha," Nisha said.

This time it was Geet that laughed while Maan looked horrified.

"Nisha ki baachi…" Maan threatened as he took a step towards her.

Geet grabbed his arm stopping him from going and tickling their youngest daughter to death.

"Abhi kehle ne waqt nahin hai Maan," Geet warned as she fished in her purse for her bindi sheet.

"Geet…" Maan whined.

She simply smiled at him.

"Vaise humari baath abhi bhi khatam nahin hua," Maan said softly.

"Kaunsi baath?" Geet asked confused.

"Woh hi…main sooch raha tha…" he started.

Geet rolled her eyes as she realized he was referring to what he had wanted to say when they were in their bedroom earlier but hadn't been able to.

"Main sooch raha tha ke aab toh Nisha bhi badi hogayi hai…" Maan said.

"Nisha aur badi…Maan…woh abhi bhi teen saal ki nahin hai," Geet pointed out.

"Toh…choddo…main sooch raha tha ke aab hume ek aur baache ke bare mein soochna chahiyeh," Maan said.

"Ek aur!?" Geet said in shock. "Doh shaitan hai…tumhe ek aur chahiyeh?"

"Shaitan nahin…pariyaan…aur haan…mujhe ek aur pari chahiyeh," Maan said.

"Maan…saach mein…tum pagal hogaye ho!" Geet said as she pushed him away slightly.


"Aare magar…" he began but didn't get to finish.

"Arya, Nisha…chalo…jaldi chalo…" Geet ordered.

"Hum kahaan jaa rahe hai Mamma?" Arya asked.

"Kahaan Mamma…" Nisha repeated.

"Aaj Anne Bua ki sagaai hai naa…" Geet reminded, "Aab jaldi karo varna Bua naraz hojayegi."

Geet finally pulled out what she was looking for as Arya got off her chair and helped Nisha off of hers.

Turning to Maan she held out the sheet, "Jaldi meri bindi laga do."

"Oh ho…issi liyeh main sochoon ke kuch missing lag raha hai," he said as he took the sheet from her hand.

Using his fingers Maan detached a small bindi from the sheet and carefully placed it on Geet's forehead making sure it was just right. Then, he leaned up slightly and placed a kiss on top of the bindi, making Geet smile.

"Eww!" Arya and Nisha said in unison.

Maan groaned in annoyance as Geet simply giggled.

"Chalo Papa…aab dehri nahin ho raha hai," Arya asked as she tugged on Maan's arm.

"Haan haan…chalo chalo," Maan said as he followed Arya who led the way.

Geet watched as her oldest daughter dragger along her husband towards the stairs. Geet stood amazed at her amazing husband, lover and father he was. He was so loving, so caring and so passionate about his family. Geet was a lucky girl to have him in her life.

Although she loved and adored her daughters, she had one more dream left. She had a dream that she would raise a boy into a man just like Maan. A man who respected women in general and cherished the women in his life. A man who stood for integrity, pride and humility. A man who would one day make another girl like Geet very happy. A man who would one day make another girl like Geet feel loved. She wanted to raise a man who would be the knight in shining armor for someone. She wanted to raise a man who would make the dreams of a girl come true. She wanted to raise a man who would be for a girl, what Maan had been for her.

Geet found her hand automatically resting on her stomach. Maybe the third time would be the charm. Maybe this time around she'd get the little boy she wanted. She had a gut feeling that this time around it would be a boy. With her previous pregnancies she's suffered so much morning sickness that there were days when she couldn't get out of bed. But this time, despite being almost 9 weeks before finding out, she had no sickness whatsoever. She smiled at the thought that her baby boy was already a perfect gentleman by making it easy on his mother.

"Geet kya hua? Tum tik toh ho naa?" she heard Maan call.

She quickly moved her hand away from her stomach.

"Haan…haan main tik hoon," she said.

She had only found out about her pregnancy two weeks ago but hadn't told anyone, especially Maan. She knew that if she told him, he'd have her off her feet lying in bed all day and night. With Anne's engagement approaching she couldn't have that happen so she'd kept the news to herself, promising to tell Maan the second they got back from the engagement later this evening.

"Mamma…chalo," Geet heard Nisha calling as she tugged on her pallu.

Geet smiled as her daughter as she laid a loving hand on her head.

"Chalo…" Geet said.

Taking Nisha's hand into her own she led the way to the car where Maan had already secured Arya.

Once everyone was in, they drove off in the direction of the venue where the engagement was to take place.

"Bua sagaai kyun kaar rahi hai?" Arya asked.

"Kyun ke woh Arjun se shaadi karna chati hai," Maan said.

"Shaadi kya hai?" Nisha asked.

"Shaadi woh bandhan hai joh humesha ke liyeh doh logoon ko jod dete hai," Geet said.

"Haw!? Humesha?" Nisha asked, surprised.

Maan and Geet both laughed at the reaction their youngest daughter just gave.

"Kya woh log saach mein humesha saath rehte hai?" Arya asked.

"Bilkul," Maan said.

"Kya aap ki aur Mamma ki shaadi hui hai?" Arya asked.

"Haan," Maan said.

"Phir aap humesha saath rahoge?" Nisha asked.

Maan and Geet turned towards each other with a knowing smile on their faces. Geet's right hand automatically went to her neck where her mangalsutra lay. She gingerly ran her hands over the sacred black and gold beads, before placing her hand in the hand that Maan held out for her.

He intertwined their fingers before bringing her hand up to his lips and kissing it softly.

"Humesha saath," Maan said.

"Humesha saath," Geet replied with a smile.

Life and destiny had played a horrible game when they separated Maan and Geet all those years ago. However, now…now life and destiny both smiled down on them because they knew that Maan and Geet were meant to be together.

Together forever.

Humesha saath.

The End



Authors Note #1: I tried to do justice to the SR...not sure how i did...i wanted it to be class and not vulgar or over board...hope i achieved that... and i hope you guys enjoyed Maneet's little family as well...if anyone is curious...Geet had a boy and some 25+yrs later...he made another very sweet and loving girl very happy 😉

Authors Note #2: THANK YOU to all the READERS!! you guys were awesome in putting up with my mind games...some of you fell for it...others didnt...its been a great ride!! 🤗
JAZ
Edited by jnawaz - 14 years ago
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Babeji its me!!!!!! finally!!!!!!!!! woot woot!!!!!

omg! never read this sort of stuff at work!!!! man people look at u weird wen u keep smiling at the screen and especially wen its a SR!!!😆😳
Omg i so agree after 7 years of pain and separation... omg thier reunion... i loved it!!!!! hai!!!😳 i loved this story!! even though i cant stop thinkin about the other couple and u know wat im talking about!!!😆
awesome job babeji!!! wow there were so many posts... wow!!!!!!! but in the end... done!!!!!!
luv u babeji!!😳
Edited by *Guli* - 14 years ago
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i hope it's safe to say...res for moi :)

edit: so i am being all nice and saying sowieee for interpreting ur posts...and then u call me a khambe 😲...me sad now 😔
okay...i had a huge smile like a ear to ear smile on my face with this epilogue as i knew i would be...the whole update was so sweet...and 'happy'...and all the teasing and the playfulness .. mean like everything was perfect in their life finally...
one scene i totally loved was when maan says that the wedding should be on a later day because NT is preggy...and then she named him Armaan 😳...like isn't that the sweetest thing...

and the whole SR part was perfect...trust me...u did full justice to it not going over board with it⭐️...it showed their longing that they had for each other...and the wait of years for them...it wasn't about just uniting their bodies...but also their hearts..i don't know how to explain to it...but the scene was perfect the way u wrote it..😳

another scene that i love and that touched my heart was the scene...when Geet was crying over how harsh the world could be to her daughters 😭..like my heart broke 🥺 when Geet was think about her own father and that loser crap he really was...but loved the way her Maan reassured her...the scene was just amazing 👏

Loved the family that they had...Maan, Geet and their two precious angels...and another one on the way...and it was boy...something about that wink is fishy...
You know...i haven't forgotten about our lovely Khushi...and her stories that u said u were going to do...😉 i think it's time for another read of Home Coming...😃

Thank you Jazzy for a wonderful story...u have done wonderful with all the plot, it's characters and of course the unseen twists...Loved it 😛
Edited by maankigeet4ever - 14 years ago
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awsome yaar...
finally got it...
loved pinkys teasing !!!!!!!
the babys are so cute...
you better come up with new ff soon !! 😉
Edited by mrk_1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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jazz i have already liked the posts 😉😉
in advance 😳😃😳
coz i know i m loving it 😊😊
so why waste time 😆
hehe 😆😆
next comment after the update 😉

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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
the teaser is amazing!!!! waiting for the update!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

hey Jazzy...i hope u are in the updating mood cause my refresh button might die out soon 😆...

my eyes are barely staying open waiting for u love...but ignore my nonsense and take ur time 😃

edit: OOPs...major OOPS...u spoke too late...me sowieee

i was about to go off on this "person" who came and ruined my consecutive posts!! then i scroll up to see...you!! 😲...and then the song "Khambe jaise khadi hai" popped into my mind!! 🤣

JAZ

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Posted: 14 years ago
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AWESOME OS!
I am truly speechless!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
A very beautiful HAPPY ending to a beautiful FF Jaz. This was a pleasure to read. Their consummation was definitely not too vulgar. And their family seems so cute!

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