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Posted: 14 years ago
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Guys I don't see y I need to give intro of two hot guys as in samrat n mayank' they r ditto as they were in MJHT just I will show a light change in their relationship towards each other.Now first before I start I already want u guys to know it is an tragedic story its not about pair in love with each other it is about sayank the guys how struggle from childhood to present life together' how much they will be ready to scarify their life for each other but due n a certian miss understanding how they will lose each other faith on each other n how it will immediately leads to someone's death in a very taragedic way.

3/4 of story will contain sayank brotherly love for each other mayur n sajan love story' 1/4 story last part I guess which no one is going to like is all about how sayank lose their friendship in their own ego.

Now before i start my story I want to clear one thing pls guys don't ask me here to write my before's sajan's mayur's stories as im currently a lot busy in my studies if u will ask it will whole ly make me sad that im not able to fulfill ur wishes n it might immediately will lead to my less attention on this ff..n my update of this ff will be monthly twice each update after 2 weeks on Sunday im not sure how leanthy it might be..if im free I can surprise u with a early update too.

Happy Friendship Day To All My Friends N Readers.

Enjoy.

Part 1

We can see a man walking through a dark room were many other mens hooting whilsting n banging there bolws on their steel platted doors'n man who is walking is covered by a lot of chain on legs n handcuff on hands joining his both legs handcuff n his hand handcuff together..as from a little behind we can see policemens pushing him to walk n some from front dragging him to walk..because he is a criminal walking through the other criminals cell towards his own to be there for the rest of his life.

As the policemens pushed him in the cell letting him to fall right on his chest 'through policemen's know he might have got a very deep cut on his chest though they didn't care nor the criminal the MURDERER himself cared about it as he stayed in same position how he falled letting the blood sink more out of his wound.after the policemens went off a man who was in same cell of the murderer got up to him stand through too he didn't moved.

Other criminal : "arre utho tumhain choth lagi hain aur thodi dair aisa hi rahe toh septic ho jayega"

Murderer : ''''

Oc : "utho kuch toh bolo utho"'he helped the murderer to get up on hi s own feet n made him sit near a small stone'"tum thik ho"

M:''..

Oc : "gunga ho"

M :''''''..

The other criminal signed n stopped saying anything to him'after few days when one more criminal came into cell who was a very evil looking man tattoos on his biceps n very ugly hair cuts on his face etc.

Evil man referring to the murderer : "ayye chal bazu haath..bazu haath kar baith"he quietly move without a word the evil man smiled " yeh hui nah baat isse bolte hain chup chap bagair maar khaye koi baat sun lena kya naam hain tera"'

Other criminal : "who bol nahi sakti"

Em : "gunga hain" he started laughing

Oc : "mujhe nahi lagta mera khayal sa shock main hain"

Em: "tujhesa pucha kya maina yeh teri rai mangi kisi chij main chup chap baith jaa haath'"

After few hours

Em : "arre yaar main bore ho raha hoon sun" he said referring to other criminal"naam kya hain tera"

Oc : "jamal'Jamal khan hain naam mera"(he is of 60 years old)

Em: "kis khushi main andar kiya tujhe in logon nah budha"

Oc : "dhoka sa mera hi office walon nah mujhe corruption ki case main phasa diya"

Em: " kya yaar bahut hi bekaar story hain teri bahut baar filmon main dekh sun chukka hoon koi interesting story sunni hain apnun ko"as e said that his eyes lid on murderer "aye tu kyun nai apni story sunnata hain apun k uteri story sunni hain chal jaldi bolna shuru kar"

Though the murderer didn't said anything the evil man punched him still he didn't said a work..after few sec when the evil man got tired of beating him " kya yaar kya kha kr bada hua hain tu itna marun tera ku par tera ku kuch hota icch nai hmph"

He went n sat in his own place sulking'n pounting n getting angry to be in this bloody hell cell here every wall is teasing him about his loneliness..

After few mins'

The murderer : " kya sunna chate ho mera bare main "

Jamal bhai's jaw dropped down as the murder never spoke a word in bloody last few week n here he is asking what they want to know about him n the evil man smiled widely as his chirstmas wish have been approved as he wont be bore'

Em : "sab kuch sab kuch janna chata hoon main tera bare main kyun yahan hain aisa kya kiya tuna dekhna main kafi young bhi hain tu aur isi ka murder tuna kiya bahut hi lafda wala mamla lagta hain kisi nah tujhe fasaya toh nahi"

Muderer : "nahi kisi nah nahi phasaya mujhe maina sach main mara diya apna aap ku apna dost ko"

Em : "matlab"

M: "18 saal pehla ki baat hain'"

Em: "oyye ruk ruk ruk rukk apna ku ram khata nahi sunni in short sunna"

M : "sunni hain toh shuru sa suno warna mujhe bahut eend aa rahi hain"

J: " shuru sa bolo beta main sunna chata hoon" evil man glared at jamal but after few sec signed n gave in ..

*****18 YEARS AGO*****

We can see in a park a small cute boy of might be 3 years old running from one side to another happily..

M : "maa chalo nah wahan chalta hain wahan par uss taraf"'mayank showed a very light dark place covered by very tall n big trees

We can see shilpa aunty there saying.."nai beta hum wahan nahi jaa sakta bahut kharab jagah hain woh"

M: "par mujhe jana hain.."

S: "mayank zid bandh karo aur chup chap yeh loh chips khao"

M : "maa..plsss"he said making a puppy dog eyes..

S : "no" she said sternly

After few sec mayank saw a little boy going in same place where he showed before to his mom he looked at shilpa aunty she was engross in novel seeing that he quietly got up n walked into the forest n back of the boy.

The boy who is in front walking was engross in the way where he was walking , mayank who was walking at back of the boy cant say seeing him shaking lightly that he might be scared or crying but y would he be crying..???he thought..its not that scary mayank dared a quick look around his surrounding making sure they both r safe.

After few sec mayank saw the boy stopped n than he turned n narrowed his eyes at mayank n asked arrogantly'

The boy : " y r u following me"

M : "hmmm I..hmm'i'lost'.my way"

B : "liar I saw u..u followed me u were sitting aith that women"

M : "IM NOT FOLLOWING U"

B : " u R"

M : "IM NOT"

B: "SHUT UP"

M : "U SHUT UP NO ONE SAYS ME SHUT UP"

B : "UFF"

M : "oh no"

B : "WHAT"

M : "DON'T dam u shout we lost the way because u"

B : "huh because of me how is it my fault its because of u"

M : "no its because of u I was following u,u walked this deeply"

B: "gottach u admitted u followed me" he declared

Mayank looked at him in anger but after few sec he signed he is struck now with this arrogant fool in middle of this jungle with no one elder around GOD can only save him now from the ugly boy he isn't scared of this place right now he is scared to think of the time he is goen spend with this boy irritating the hell of him'DAM.

After few mins..

B : "huh im hungry I want food"

M : "do I look chief go n get urself"

The boy got up n about to go when he remembered he is dam btw of a forest'

B : "dam'y the hell I decided to come here" silently mayank agreed with him in mind..

The boy suddenly shouted something like a "shit" n jumped on mayank letting him fall on ground on his back n the boy on top of him his back got sure a deep cut'

M: "what the hell"

Just than he saw branch lieing on ground where he sat before'"oh this boy saved him or he might have died because of this bg branch"

M: "tha..thanks.."

B: "its all right" the boy helped him get up mayank smiled'

M : "myself Mayank Sharma" the boy smiled..

B: : "myself samrat'samrat shergill'u can call me Sammy"

N they shaked hands'MJHT music going in background'

*****PRESENT*****

"WAHIN HUI HAMARI DOSTI KI SHURWAT"

I have a two question for u guys'who is in jail samrat or mayank..n who killed whom because of which one is in jail..??????

I know story still isn't clear I will try to clear more things in my next update'!!!!(ignore my mistakes n i will name it soon)😳

Sanu.

Edited by Soulmate_Sana - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Pm List(let me know all want pm's from next update)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Reserved...for page no. of update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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reserve
love you

*edited*
happy friendship day dumbo
changing my second statement to i hate you
i literally forget starting a story for you was not a tough job though
to update it was
u just tooo dash
ahhh will defo kill you now
n one more thing miss laziness dont forget ur own words '2 updates a month'
u really mean it na???
although i can never believe this
now i know what u r thinking have written this for damn you n u saying all this
ok taking my words back
love u love u love u
seriously love you
aj mein uper asman neechy
my hard work of more than months jani
so finally u r here with ur ff phew seriously buhut footage khaty hy to
celebration time
finally u r back literally this place was missing you alot n so was ur readers
i can bet tht

ok the ff i have never written a word till now
should i have to say something???
the title itself is enough isn't it
sayank rocks n rocks n rocks missing them alot these days
n to read a sayank ff written by u is just...
name kyun nae rakha tarzan ff ka abhi tak 🤣
to jo bhi naam rakhy its tarzan ff for me
n what the hell was that dash insaan???
was hell shocked after reading the start
what the hell is this??? she was saying will write tarzan ff
i thought u have changed ur mind
seriously u surprised me
superbbb superbbb superbbb work
fantastic attempt dear just flawless
n it should b sammy i guess
mein tery jaga hoty to ye sammy hota
tera ulta dimag kesy chalta hy i dont know
n he would not b the one who killed mayank
if mayank is died it would not b his fault
wasy tujhy sammy positive pasand nae hy so tujh sy insaan kuch bhi expect kar sakta hy
but hats off the way u have written it is just amazinggg seriously was a glue story
to kuch likhy acha na ho ho nae sakta
tera label hy buhut hota hy insaan ko agy kuch bolny ki zaroorat hy nae party
just superbbb lovely attempt
n plzzz do continue sooon
otherwise will kill you n will shape this story as real incident
killing a dear friend 😡
muahhh
do continue sooon


Edited by itzMYattitude - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey sana forst of all congratulations dar. for ur new story..

m really surprised when i saw ur pm...

n really happy when read its on saayankkk hehehe i totally loved it..

hmm coming to ur updt..

oh my god...

totally new concept... just fantastic fabulas yaar...

wat an idea sana jiii lolll

jail n their frndship omg totaly different n never expected lolll

just roking..

i wanted to shout ahhh

hehehhe well this is my way of showing my happines lolll

btw m really glad u back with a bang

n with an awesummm concept...

n wkya frndhship haii yaar haayy..

sayank rocks..

bt who is in the jaill

well its again a mystry...

n i think he is Mayank who is in jail...

n he killed my sammy (nahiii)

n Gunjan will have her live with her n samrat's baby...no life for her.. only she n her baby n memory of samrat (its my imagination dont knw wats cooking up in ur mind eheheheh)

well want u to reveal mystry soon plzz

plzz atleast reveal the name yaar... dat who is in the jail n where are nupur n Gunjan...

n plzz also show the sajan n mayur's relationship plzz

n sayank ki frndship to hogi hi hogi...
cherry on cake lolll''

hayyy dreamy smile heheh

n m glad u will updt wice in a month... its ok... bt plzz pwant long updt haa..

u knw na we cant wait for ur nxt 1 hheh

so plzz do cont asap ohkkk

btw love u n love ur updt so muchhh

waiting for the nxttt


Love😉
Radhi...
Edited by RadhikaBhushan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Happy Friendship day
awesome start
loved it.
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sana ki bachi where r u???? i miss you so much do you know that😭 u know my heart skipped a beat when saw ur pm... kahan hai tu yaar???😡 gayab ho jati hai n all of a sudden turn up with a ff...
thank god at least ur turning up on friendship day...
Sana🤗
Acha how r u? and happy friendship day😃🤗

(vese my bursting on u reminded me of what samrat said to nupur after the phone call.."na hello na hie sidha thai thai thai"🤣)
Edited by charmee_sammy - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG!!!! A New FF?! & That Too On SaYank...!!😲 😃
M Loving it Sana...😳
Ummm...i guess Samrat is no more...😭 & Mayank is in Jail...
Cant guess it rite now! Seriously...!!
Do Cont Soon... & Thnx 4 the PM...🤗
& Plz add me to ur PM list...😛

Happy FriendShip Day to U Dear...❤️

Luv,
Ekta...🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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read the part...
Ghosh its such an emotional story.. but neva mind i love emo stories😳 bcoz i myself m very emotional kinda😆 And wow on the eve of friendship day we have a surprise from u as a Sayank ff😃 i really adore sayan'ks friendship😃
Ghosh must say u have guts to write such sensitive stories.. And u were as usual very brilliant with ur writing skills.. I have always loved ur ffs bcoz of ur stories n ur writing style i feel connected to ur ffs😃
Ohk the questions u asked us... i guess its samrat who is in jail, but mayank can't die... its again a mystery...
I'll be waiting for the next updt... love ya🤗
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OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG

reserve
going to be back here real soon

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