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Part 24:-

Arjun went home and goes to geet's room.. He saw her sleep and smiled at her princee... He went to her and kissed her forehead..
A:" meri princess" he said softly he remembered that horrible day when her sister lost her eyes... He had tears in his eyes
A:" geet... Meri dua hai ke tujge jo koi bhi mile... Tere sare dukhu ko apna banale... Tujhse pyaar kare... Tujhe der sari khushiya de..."
He wiped his tears and left from there... Geet opened her eyes and start crying... She hide her face in the pillow... She cried for about 1 hour... There maan was feeling something odd... Feeling bechain... He took his mobile and was about to call geet when he thought
Mk:" agar so rahi hui tau... Try karta hu" he dial her number
Geet thought
G:" zarror maan ka phone hoga"
Geet took mobile and attend his call .. Her voice was painful but didn't want him to know
G:" hello" she was not trying to cry but tears came in her eyes
Mk:" geet" he said softly
G:" maan... Aap Soye nahi" she whispers
Maan smiled and said
Mk:" jaan tum bhi tau nahi soyi"
Geet smiled with tears and maan said
Mk:" tum theek hona jaan" he said softly
G:" ha...ha maan mien theek hu... Aap fikar mat kijiye"
Maan was feeling something strange
Mk:" you are lying"
Geet shocked and said
G:" nahin maan mien sach mien theek hu"
Mk:" geet dont lie... Don't u trust me"
G:" maan aesi baat nahin hai"
Mk:" then tell me what happened"
G:" maan"
Mk:" tell me jaan... I am listening pain in your voice"
Geet started crying on phone
Maan was really worried and sits up on his bed
Mk:" jaan... Jaan what happened are u okay... Plz tell me geet are you okay"
G:" ma..maan mien mien woh"
Mk:" mujhe gabrahat ho rahi hai plz tell me what happened"
G:" maan today I am feeling so alone... I dont know why... I am very bad maan... I am very bad"
Maan was shocked to listen her
He cuts the call... Geet was shocked and staring crying harder
G:" I am sorry maan... I am sorry"
Maan was sitting there worried face
Mk:" what happened to geet" he thought geet
There geet was continously crying hiding her face in pillow
Geet was thinking that she is not good for maan she can't see she will ruin maan's life
Geet was continuously crying when she felt someone's hand caressing her hair
She looked at that person
She hold her hand and shocked it was maan her maan she can feel him his maan
G:" maan" with tears in her eyes... She sits up on bed
Maan came in her house from window.. He was feeling scared about thinking geet again and again
G:" maan you here"
Maan cupped her face and hugged her tightly... Geet was feeling so alone she hugged him back tightly as much as she could... She was crushing him... Both were hugging each other tightly
Maan kissed her hair and whispers
Mk:" what happened jaan... Why my jaan is crying... Hmmm..."
Geet hide herself in his neck and crying
Maan caressed her back and said
Mk:" plz jaan don't cry ... I can't see ur tears plz for me"
Geet was still crying and hugging him tightly
G:" I don't know maan what happened to me.. I am feeling so alone don't know why"
Maan broke hug and wiped her tears and kissed her forehead
Mk:" why jaan.. What happened why are u saying like that... I am always with you.. You r not alone jaan"
Geet smiled through her tears
Mk:" tumne phir se meri geet ko bura Kaha jaan"
Geet touched his cheeks
G:" I am very bad maan... I am very bad... I can't keep you happy... I am very ba..."
She was about but stopped when she felt maan's lips on hers
Geet felt current in her body
Maan kissed her lips very very gently... He was waiting for geet's response when she didn't respond he thought maybe she feels bad
He was about to backup when he felt geet responded, he felt happy and both kissed each other... Geet put her hand in maan's hair and bring him closer and kissed him hard on his lips... Maan was aroused he put hands on her waist and brings her closer and kissed her tightly on lips
Both were kissing each other hungrily...they broke and painting haevily due to the lack of air
Maan looked at geet and touched her forehead with his and kissed her nose
Mk:" dont you ever dare to say my jaan bad samjhi"
Geet smiled with tears
Mk:" my jaan is the best and beautiful girl in the world... No is here like her... She is everything for me... I love her more than my life... Samjhi"
Geet nodded innocently and maan caressed her lips with his fingers and geet hugged him ...
Mk:" promise karo ke Tum ro gi nahi"
He took out his hand in front of her and geet put her hand in his and entwined her fingers with his and she kissed his hand
Geet put her head on maan's chest and maan laid there and geet on him... He wrapped his arms around her waist and kissed her head... Geet kissed his cheek and after sometime she doses off... When maan felt she is sleeping and slowly and quietly put her head on pillow... He covered her with blanket and kissed her forehead and left from there... He went to his room and sleep with smiling face



Precap:- maan se dur rahiye


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Edited by Geetmaan1234 - 14 years ago
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Part 25:-

Geet woke up with smiling face and still feeling maan's lips on hers... Geet blushed hard... That was their first kiss... She remembered how they were kissing each other... Geet feels shy and covered her face with blanket... She was smiling and laughing... Her mobile rang and she quickly attends it and said happily
G:" maan"
No one was speaking
Geet felt something different and said
G:" maan... Are u there?" she Sid softly
P:" hello"
She was shocked that was not her maan
G:" kon"
P:" maan se dur rahiye"
Geet was hell shocked and scared and said
G:" kon Bol raha hai"
P:" tumhare liye yeh zada zaroori nahi hai ke mein kon hu bas itna yaad Rakho ke maan se dur raho samjhi"
Geet had tears in her eyes
G:" shut up... Tumhe kya lagta hai mien tumhari in dhamkiyon se dar jaungi... Maan meri zindagi hai hai... Meri jaan hai... Unse dur hone ka sawal hi nahin uthta samjhe"
Person laughed evilly
P:" woh tau waqt anne pe pata chale ga..." cuts the call
G:" hello...hello"
Geet was feeling scared who was that person... No I have to talk to maan about this
G:" mujhe maan se baat karni hogi is baarein mien..." she wiped her tears and prayed to babaji
G:" babaji mere maan ka kayaal rakhna... Unko koi. Takleef mat hone dena... Yeh kesi musibat hai mere maan"
She wiped her tears and slowly slowly went to washroom and came out in purple shalwar kameez... She was looking beautiful
Rajji came
R:" good morning didi"
Geet was lost on that call and Rajji saw her sad and worried face
R:" didi"
G:"???"
Rajji shook her and said
R:" didi"
Geet came out from her thoughts and said
G:" ha..ha rajji"
R:" what happened didi you arelooking worried"
Geet was thinking to tell her
G:" Rajji mujhe tujhse baat karni hai"
R:" haa didi bolo kya hua"
Geet tell her everything and raaji was scared and shocked
G:" mujhe Buhat dar lagraha hai Rajji... Kanin ussne maan ko nuksan punchaya tau"
R:" nahin didi don't worry aesa Kuch nahin hoga... Hume maan bhai se baat karni chahiye"
G:" nahin Rajji... Agar maan ko bataya ko kahin na kahin se us insaan ko bhi pata chal jaaye ga aur maan ko nuksan punchaye ga... Nahin mein aesa nahin hone dungi"
Rajji hugged geet and calm her
R:" don't worry didi Sab theek ho jaye ga...haa"
Geet was feeling very very scared
G:" pata nahi yeh Sab. Kya ho raha hai rajji"
Just then Arjun came and said
A:" akele akele kya baatein ho rahi hai meri princess aur sweety mein hmmm"
Geet and rajji smiled sadly
A:" are kya hua"
G:" kuch nahin veerji"
A:" paka"
R:" haa veerji kuch nahi hua"
A:" aacha baba theek hai aab chalo breakfast keliye"
G:" jee"
They went in loving room... They were eating breakfast... Geet was eating very slowly slowly and thinking about tomorrow's incident arjun and rajji looked at her rajji knows what is bothering her but Arjun was confused and said
A:" princess kya hua Sab theek haina"
G:" ha... Jee veerji Sab theek hai"
A:" tau tu itne aram aram se kyun kha rahi hai"
G:" woh kuch nahi veerji... Bas itni bhook nahin thi"
A:" princess apna breakfast pura complete karo"
G:" lekin veerji"
A:" princess plz"
Geet smiled and start eating her food... Rajji was very worried for her... He was thinking to tell maan everything but how... Later she decided she will call him and tell him everything
Rajji looked at geet and smiled sadly
R:" Mein apni didi ko pareshan nahin hone dungi"
After breakfast rajji went to her room and decided to call maan
MAAN was busy in his office work and his mobile was on silent
Rajji was getting worried she tried again and again but he was not picking up her call...
R:" maan bhai phone kyun nahi utha rahe"
She tried again and his mobile went on voicemail
Rajji quickly left message for him and went to geet
Geet was sitting on bed with sad face
She tried to cheer up her mood and said
R:" kya didi itna udhas chehra... Pata Maan jiju hote tau kya kehte...non stop express" she laughed
And geet also laughed and remembers maan's word when he said non stop express and she calls him dust danav



Precap:" meine tumhein mana kiya tha na...MAAN se dur rehna"



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Edited by Geetmaan1234 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awsum part. That person is nt . I m sure
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome n dis time m 2nd 2 comment
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome updates now maan should come to know all this and should expose nt plz do it u dont stretch it too long clear everything in next update
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
i know that person is none other than naintara
plz dont do anything bad with geet plz chutki

continue soon
bye
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow loved it yaar ...awsome !!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing.Loved it, whose this person calling her and telling to be far away from maan. continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
WOW two updats in one go really happy
thanks for pm
lovely update
hope maan geet ki jaldi se shaadi hoja ye
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Posted: 14 years ago
All three parts were just awesome
Arjun and Maan are friends good Arjun's seen how much Maan loves his princess.
Their first kiss was Good and completely unexpected thanxs for that
I know for sure this stupid caller is NT
I wish Maan breaks her neck after coming to know the truth.
Btwn thanxs for the pm and accepting my friend request
Edited by krndr - 14 years ago

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