UNNAMED RELASIONSHIP part 18 on pg 44 - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
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all parts r g8...cont soon. Hate sheena..
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Oh I feel bad for them...😔 continue soon and Thank you!
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Originally posted by: arjunkidiwani

all parts r g8...cont soon. Hate sheena..

hey thks yr
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Oh I feel bad for them...😔 continue soon and Thank you!

thks 4 commentng..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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waiting for new part dear
hope u'll update new part soon

and u r really very good writer
so keep it up

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Originally posted by: -Faria-

waiting for new part dear
hope u'll update new part soon

and u r really very good writer
so keep it up

thks alots dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 7
City hospital (afternoon )
Nupur is going towards a room quietly, hiding her all tears n pain''..she opens a door n says''
N:GUNJAN''..
G:di''.(sitting on a wheel chair)
N:(runs towards her n holds her as tightly as she cn)
Kase hai?(says with concern)
G:ek dam fit n f9''..dekho''.(with a small sweet smile )
N:nupur too gives a fake smile''.
G:pr tumhe kya hoa hai di'..?kitne weak lag rhi ho, yaha se tho ek dam hatte-katte gye thi''teen din mae kitne kamjoor ho gye ho tum'''.
N:nhi'.nhi tho(says with hasitation'')wo actuly itne lamba safar upar se itna sara kaam tho shayad usse ki vajah se lag rhi hoe''..
G:tho itna kaam mat kiya karu di''..
N:accha mare ma''.nhi karuge'..bus'.(closing d topic)
G:that's lik my gud di''(n both laugh''.nupur trying to show her normal)

[/STRONG][/EM]</font><font color="#cc0000" size="4" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">They were talking to each other when nurse comes n ask to take gunjan with her 4 some tests n gungan makes a face bt nupur makes sure that she go for these tests''
Now nupur is alone in d room.when ever she comes in this hospital she always go into past bcoz in this hospital only she hd done a deal''.a deal of her lif''.a deal of her self respect'..a deal which changed her lif 4 ever

</font><font color="#660099" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Flashback''..

Gunjan ws coming from colledge suddenly a car in speed come n hits her hard.
When nupur gets to know this she rush 2 d hospital'..
N:dr'dr'''.mare bahan ko kya hoa hai?
Dr:dekhia unka bohat bura accident hoa hai or abhi kuch bhi kehna mushkil hai''..
N:kya''.(totally blank)😔😔

After few hours dr come n tells nupur that gunjan is badly injured''they need 2 do operation with in two hours bt 4 that she need to arrange 5 lakh rupees which ws a very big amt 4 nupur as she even didn't hv a house of her home, her parents died long back''.it ws jst gunjan who ws her family. Strill she tried her bst 2 arrange 4 money bt no use.
Sheena came 2 hospital 4 her regular check ups as it ws jst some time ago she hd abortion''.she watched out a girl crying badly,she inquired abt d girl n got u know abt whole situation.she inquired abt nupur nt bcoz of sympathy bt bcoz of her plan. According 2 her plan she need a girl who is young,beautiful n smart as well as innocent so that she only follows d orders without any questions''..n nupur is showing all these features very well
Sh:hellooo''..nupur'..
N: ji''..sory mane apko panchna nhi''
Sh:I know''.kase panchanuge akhir hum kabhi mile hi nhi hai''..
N:dekhia main is samah bohat pareshan hoe tho''..
Sh:I know that nupur. Iselea tho main aye hoe tumhare help karne'''..
N:(confuse)
Sh:tumhe 5 lakh rupees chahea na apne sis k operation k lea''..main de sakte hoe''.😕😕
N:kya'''..bt kyun?
Sh:kyuki I want that ki tum mera ek kaam karu''..
N:(without thinking once) ha main apka koi bhi kaam karuge''.
Sh:ek baar sun tho lo''..baad mae palat nhi jana''
(And sheena takes nupur in a empty room in hospital)
N:aap mujhe yhan kyun lae hai?(so many questions into nupurs mind)
Sh: bcoz jo baat mane tumse karne hai wo vhan nhi ho sakti'''.(n she tells her abt her plan n why she want nupurs help)
N:disgusting''. (angrily)apne galat ladki ko chuna hai mam'.. main ase lalki nhi hoe''.app mujhse koi or bhi kaam kara sakti hai, main mana nhi karuge bt'.. main se nhi kr sakti''.
Sh:theak hai as u wish''..shayad tum apne bahan se pyar nhi karti😭😭''wo bechari vhan dard se tadap rhe hai or tum ho ki''.. uske jeene ya marne se tumhe koi farak nhi padta.😡😡
(d name of her sis breaking her down. She loves her lik hell. She is nt only a sis 4 gunjan bt a mother n father too bcoz from her childhood only she hd taken all d resposiblies of her ''..after a long discussion she got ready to b in sheena's plan. She knows vary well that she is destroying her whole lif bt at that point of time to save gunjan's lif ws her priority.)😭😭
Flashback over
</font><font color="#66cc33" size="4" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">[EM][STRONG]Nupur wipe off her tears when come back from her thoughts n says'..
N: ab aage kya hoga''.kya ab koi mare maddat nhi kr sakta ? koi nhi?????(asks questioning to God)

And now a handsome doctor is show.he is busz in flirting with a nurse in his cabin 😳when another nurse knocks his door n disturbs him. He makes a cute n irritating face 4 disturbing him''
Dr: yes''.come in''
Nurse: main apke new patient ko le aye hoe sir.(n he brings gunjan)
Her name is gunjan bhushan sir''.(says to introduce her to d doctor)
Dr:hi''..miss gunjan bhushan''..i m Dr SAMRAT SHERGILL'''(says with sweet smile introducing him self)
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S. Hi miss gunjan bhusan i m dr. Samrat shergill
G. Helloo dr.(smal sweet smile)
S. Hm...tho aap hai humare new patient...i m soo lucky to hv u (says with excitement bt then control ) i mean to treat u.
G. (confused)
S. Vase jb nurse ne door knock kiya tha tho i got vry irretated 4 disturbing me.
G. Kyun bohat impt kaam kr rhe the kya?
S. Ya...flirt karne mae busz tha (mumring to himself)
G. Kya?
S. I mean nhi zayada koi impt kaam nhi tha...actuly i should b thankful 2 her.
G.(again gets confused on this sudden change bcoz few min bfor he said that he got irretated)
S. I mean agr wo muje disturb na karte tho main aap jase beautiful grl se kase milta (he started flirting with gunjan leaving 2 that nurse)
G. (unconsiously blush dont know y herself also)
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<font color="#3300ff">Then samrat asked nurse to giv her case file n mak her sit on sofa so he cn check her legs. Aftr studing her case he startd checking her legs. He checked each n evry finger of her feet n when she felt no pain he got lit worried bt didn't showed to her. He ws kept on talking to her n within no time she got adjsted with him. Then he asked nurse to tk her 4 some tests n call her any relative to whom he cn discus her case)
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<font color="#ff00ff">Aftr some time samrat ws again busz in flirting with nurse when d door knocks n again he got irretated.)
S. Yes..come in (n makes a face)
Nupur enters to cabin.
Samrat POV
ye kon hai samrat? Jalde yaad kr...iske tho na shakal dekhe hai or naam bhi nhi yaad aa rha. Kahe aaj ki date k lea ise tho nhi promise kiya...nhi..nhi. Koi baat nhi hoge mare koi gf abhi pta lg jayga)
S. Hello sweetheart...i mised u sooo much. (with a big smile on face)
N. What (consused on his words)
S. Gussa kyun ho rhi ho jaan...mujhe yaad hai hame date pr jana hai</font>[/DIV]
[DIV]<font color="#ff00ff">(nupur getting more angry)
N. Dekhia mera naam nupur...(smrat again intrepts b4 she completes sentence)
S. Of course...nups tumhara naam kase bhul sakta hoe...bolu khan legane ka promise kiya tha mane...(in flirting tone)
N. App mare pure baat sunege (in a worning tone) mera naam nupur bhushan hai or main gunjan bhushan ki behan hoe...
S. Oh..yane app mare gf nhi hai...(clearing his confusion)
N. Aap ko apne gf k shakal or naam yaad nhi rhte kya (giving tont to him)
S. Actuly itne sare hai na tho confusion ho jati hai (says with a smile n inocent voice)
N. (make a disbeleave face on this) apne mujhe bulaya tha gunjan k bare mae koi baat karne k lea
S. Oh...yes plz sit.
(he take out file of gunjan n being a dr he seriously tells nupur abt gunjan case leaving his flirty behaviour aside. He tells her that gunjan cn walk again bt it will depend on her own willpower. Her injuries r stil their so it will b dificult 4 her bt she hs to keep on trying otherwise it cn b too late. She gets tensed on this bt samrat ensures her that he will try his bst 2 give gud treatment to her n make her walk again. N aftr discusion samrat again comes to his mood)
S. Vase i mst say ur sis is too preaty .
N. Thks (with a simple smile)
S. Bilkul aap pr gye hai.,
N. (maks a disbelif face again...n thinks esa flirt dr mare bahan ka ilaj karega)
Samrat laughs at this n nupur too givs a smile n leaves from there.
Days were passing samrat bcome a vry gud frd of nupur n gunjan both. Gunjan started liking him bt always denies her feeling 4 him thinking abt her condition. Even samrat liks her actuly he started loving her. Nupur always keep on trying to b normal with them...to keep a fake smile on face n 1 month passed lik that only)
Gunjan n nupur r in hospital room n busz in their talkings. Gunjan siting on bed n nupur is cutting fruits 4 her.
G. Yaad hai di jb hum chote the tho hamesha apne rajkumar k bare mae baate kiya karte the.
N. Hm...
G. Main hmesha kehti thi ki ek din mera rajkumar ayega or mujhse shadi kr k mujhe hmesha k lea le jayga...
N. Ha yaad hai...
G. Mare story bohat simple hoti thi bt tumhare bohat intresting hoti thi. Tumhare lov story mae hmesha ek chudhal hua karte thi jo tumhare rajkumar or tumhe alag karna chahti thi bt hmesha ek angel bhi hota tha jo tumhare madat kiya karta tha tumhe tumhare rajkumar tk pohanchane k lea (nupur's eyes gets moist). Hena di...
(nupur unconciously says)
N. Na koi rajkumar ayega or na hi mare madat karne koi angel...
(gunjan gets lit confuse on hearing nupur's words when sudenly door opens n samrat comes with a sweet kiling smile)

</font><font color="#ff6633">S. Kya main andar aa sakta hoe.
G. Aona samrat tumhe puchne ki zarorat hai kya?
N. (again maks herself normal) tumhare shift tho over ho gye hai na tho tum yhan...
S. Kya nupur tum bhi na...mujhe apne frds k milne k lea apne shift ka wait karna padega kya? Mera man kr rha tha tho main aa gya tum logo se milne (sys with so much of inocence)
Gunur smiles. Sudenly nupur felt lik vomiting so she runs towards washroom. Sajan gets worried. Aftr few min's she comes out n her face ws totaly pale)
G. Kya hua di (in a worry tone)
N. Wo kuch nhi bas ase hi (she ws so scared from inside n she jst want to close this topic)
S. Kuch kase nhi...shakal dekhe hai apne kitne weak lg gye ho chalu cabin mae shayad food poisoning hoge main cheak kr leta hoe.
N. (gets more scare at this bcoz she ws knowing d reason of her vomitings) nhi koi baat nhi wo aaj... wo chat zayada kha le thi tho shayad usse ki vajah se hai...
S. Tum itna formal kyun ho rhi ho come on abhi cheak kr deta hoe...(tries to tk her with him gently holding her arm)
N. (pushes her arm back in a anger n shouts on him) mane kha hai na koi jarorat nhi hai..
Sajan gets shocked on her such action.
G. Tho tum itna chilla kyun rhi ho di?(says in a soft n inocent voice)
N. (on this nupur realises hw he shouted unnesarily on samrat) i m sory samrat wo bs pta nhi kase...
S. Its ok nupur...
N. Wo mujhe late ho rha hai tho main chalti hoe ghr pr koi kaam hai. </font>
[P]S<font color="#660066">. Ok so bye...bt ek baar cheak up kra late tho...
N. Its ok...main bilkul theak hoe (n then she moves towards gunjan n hugs her) bye gunjan...bye samrat (with a fake smile n she leaves from there)
Aftr an hour she is in her home. She decides to call sheena as it ws confirmed that she is pregnent
N. Helloo...(hesitatingly)
Sh. Ha nupur bolu..
N. Wo mane apko batane k lea call kiya tha ki its confirmed that.,that i m pregnent...
Sh. Wao nupur thats great...nw listen to my next plan (n she tells her abt next steps of plan)
N. Ji...(she almost cried n cuts d call)

</font><font color="#009966">Nupur's POV
Hey bagwan kl main unhe kase face karuge...kase?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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can't wait to read next...cont soon please...!!!
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plz dear update new parts...
we have already read these parts...

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