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Part 18

A call comes on mayank cel

Tring tring

M . hellooo...ha samrat bol

Ha main ata hu abi...

Main abi ata hu ( he says to both of them and leaves)

In samrats cabin

Knock knock

S . yes...come in...

M . hi samrat...

S . helloo...mayank...( both shares a hug)

M . kuch hua...

S . esa ho skta hai ki samrat ko koi kaam bola ho or won a ho...( both laugh at his line)

M . means ho gya...

S . ha... mane apne senior se baat kr le hai...he is saying its possible to shift gunjan at home bt it will require cost around 10 lack...bcoz us ki daily k treatment k lea jo machines hospital mae hai. Wo ghr pr hi rkhwa ni hogi, jo excersices hum usse daily krwate hai wo continue rkhne hogi. Baki koi problem nhi hai...

M . g8... mujhe peso ki koi fikkar nhi hai bus gunjan k face pr smile dekhna chahta hu or use theak hote...( with a smile he wish 4 gunjan)

S . ek or baat... mane apne senior se ek or baat kr li hai ki gunjan ka treatment main hi continue rkhuga...mare shift khatam hone k baad roz use ghr ja kr attend kru ga... teak kiya na...?

M . ha...

S . yesss!!!!!!!!!! ( he says slowly bcoz he is vry happy dat he will b with gunjan daily)

M . wht? ( mayank says as he listen him bt don't understands)

S . no...nothing...ab chl mayank...gunjan ko surprice bhi tho dena hai...( he says to divert his mind)

M . oh ha...chl...

Gunjan room...

Both mayank n samrat comes to his room...

G . agay jiju... kha gay the n samrat tum bhi kha the...

M . well Sali sahiba hum apka surprice gift plan kr rhe the...

G . realy...kya...? ( gunjan is excited to know n nupur also)

M . nupur in papers pr tumhare sing chahea ( he pass a file to nupur)

N . bt ye kya hai...? (confused)

M . gunjan k hospital se discharge forms...

N . wht? ( nt believing...n on other side gunjan gets happy)

M . yes...mene sara intazam kr liya hai...gunjan ka treatment aj se ghr pr hoga...wo hmare sath aj hi ghr chl rhi hai...

Both d sis gets very happy n share a hug...

G . thks jiju...

N . thks mayank...( n her eyes gets wet)

Samrat is also very happy watching both of them happy...

Gunan, nupur n mayank shares a hug again together...

S . o hellooo...main bhi tho hu...

And they cal him also a 4 of them share a hug...

Sharma mensions

Gunjan comes along with mayur...she gets amaze to see such a big and beautiful house...her eyes were watching each n every corner of d house...

G . wao...jiju...this house is beautiful...

M . mayank gives a smile...

N . mayank smrat kha reh gya ?

S . think of d devil n d devil is here...main a gya ( voice of smrat comes from behind)

M . sara saman a gya sam...

S . yup...

And he calls come labour who r holding some machines n they place it in a room and go...

N . mayank ye sab...

M . wo actuly gunjan ka sara treatment ghr pr hoga tho sara saman bhi tho ghr pr hi tho available hona chahea...

Kyu gunjan ( he smiles asking gunjan)

G . ofcourse jiju...( says happily)

Then nupur shows gunjan her room n whole house...at evening they celebrate gunjans b'day. Jst 4 of them. Gunjan cuts d cake. They enjoy their small party. At night they hv dinner. Smrat was little nervous b/w this time bcoz he bought some gift for gunjan bt he doesn't knows wheather she will accept it or nt...

tring tring...mayank cel rings...

M . excuse me office se cal hai...( says to them n goe aside)

N . gunjan chl tub hi ab room mae ja...main tre medicine lati hu...smrat tum chod au ise

S . sure...( smiles bcoz he wants this chance from long time today to give gift to gunjan n finaly he gets this chance to be alone with her)

Gunjan room

S . gunjan...( calls her name)

G . ha bolo

S . actuly main bhi tumhare lea ek gift laya tha...

G . really...tho diya kyu nhi...(ordering him to give) chlo ab jaldi se do...

S . pehle apne eyes band kyo...

G . kya ?

S . ha...vrna main gift nhi duga...

G . ok baba...(she close her eyes)

S . ab kholo...

For a movement she just getsstun... samrat was siting in front of her with his one knee down with a beautiful diamond ring in his hand...n he says

S . i love u gunjan...will u be my life partner...( a big smile on his face)

She is nt getting how to react. She is very happy in her heart that samrat also loves him she wants to stand n hug him, so she tries for it ... she just forgot that she cont stand bt as soon as she realise it her ol happiness shatters...keeping a stone on her heart she says...

G . im sory samrat...bt i cant accept your proposal...(samrat smile vanish at that very movement) mane hmesha tumhe ek acha dost samjha hai or kuch nhi ( controlling her tears she says)

S . main janta that um kuch esa hi kaho ge ( with a smaal smile n wet eyes he says) i ws ready 4 it gunjan.

Gunjan gets shocked at it...he continues...

S . Main janta hu jab tk tum teak nhi ho jati tum kabhi mujhe kabhi ha nhi kru ge bt iska matlab ye thon hi k tum mujh se pyaar nhi kri ( gunjan ws quite n her eyes also starts getting wet that hw much he understand her) its ok gunjan...main tho just try mar rha tha ki may b tum mann jao b tab tb tk nhi try kyu ga jb tk tumhe bilkul teak nhi kr deta...ok...( he smiles ) tb tk main ye ring apne pas rkh leta hu bcoz tum mujhe abhi allow nhi kro ge bt dekhna ek din main tumhe ye ring pehna kr hi rhu ga...( confidently he says)

G . or agar main kbhi teak nhi hue...

S . mujhe apne pyaar pr pura bharosa hai...tumhe main jaroor theak kr du ga...or rhi tumhare ques ka an ski baat gunjan...tho main tumhe bta du main apne pyaar k lea puri zindge khushi khushi wait kr sakta hu...

Saying this he leaves from there and a smile left on gunjan face. After samrat left gungan says

G . i love u too samrat...i love u too... (slowly)

Nupur watch ol this from door. She gives medicine to gunjan and don't show any thing to gunjan that she knows everything...thinking that she needs some time.

Mayor bedroom

N . thks mayank...

M . why?

N . gunjan aj ghr a kr bohat kush thi...apne mere behan k lea itna kuch kiya...

M . she is nt only ur sis nupur...jis din se hmare shadi hue wo mere behan bhi ban gae...( a smile comes on her face) thks tho mujhe tumhe kehna chahea...itne pyaare behan dene k lea...( with a smile he says...

Automatically she hugs him on this. He don't know how to react so he hugs him back. After a min they apart.

M . wo actuly mujhe kuch files complete krne hai tho main study room mae jata hu...tum rest kro

N . ji...ok...

And he leaves to study room.

Mayank POV

Pta nhi mujhe kya hone lga hai...nupur k zyada hi kareeb jane lga hu...pta nhi use sirf pasand krt hu ya pyaar...pyaar...nhi nhi... pyaar tho sirf ek baar hota hai jo mujhe ho gya hai...shayad wo itne acche hai ki main us k bare mae hmesha sochta rht hu...bus or kuch nhi...

Nupur POV

Main jante hu aap mujh se kabhi pyaar nhi kro gay...pr main tho aap se pyaar krti hu...or pyaar mae ye zaroori thon hi ki jo hum se pyaar krt hai humhe bhi usi se pyaar krna chahea...main aap se pyaar krti hu or hmesha krti rhu ge or badle mae mujhe kuch nhi chahes...aapka pyaar bhi nahi...( smiles)

Gunjan POV

Kitna pyaar krta hai samrat mujh se or main...pr kya kru mare ase halat hai ki khadi bhi nhi ho pati...uske sath zindgi bhr chlu ge kase...lakin main kru bhi tho kya...mujhe hi apne feelings pr control rkhna hoga taki baat agay na bdahe...( thinking she trys to sleep)

Samrat POV

Tumhare mere lea jo feelings hai use main zaroor tumhare samne lauga...its a promise gunjan...kuch bhi ho jay main tum se pyaar krt rhu ga or tumhe bilkul teak bhi kr du ga...

Next one days r running like that. They r buzy in their life, struggling from there feelings...following their routine. Smart used to come in evening for gunjans treatment. Gungan controlling her feelings. Mayank is as usual is a gud husband n nupur is happy with her feelings for mayank without any expectations from him in return.


Jab jab tere paas main aaya, Ik sukoon mila ( samrat checking gunjans legs, helping her in

paddling on machine)

Jise main tha bhoolta aaya, Wo wajood mila (nupur massaging mayank head with oil as he is tied)
Jab aaye mausam gham ke, Tujhe yaad kiya ( sajan thinking abt b'day day when samrat proposed her bt she refused to accept...both trying hard to act normal)

Jab sehme tanhapan se, Tujhe yaad kiya ( mayor thinking abt their marriage day. How unwontedly

they came into relationship)
Hmm..dil... Sambhal ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu ( mayank tring hard to run from this love feeling for nupur)
Dil yahin ruk jaa zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu ( on other side gungan controlling herself to love samrat)

Aisa kyun kar hua janu naa ( samrat acting normally with gunjan stil he is getting hurt when
Main janu naa gunjan avoids him sometimes... when samrat helps him to go her
Dil sambhal ja zara room.. she says she cn go herself...lefting samrat hurt)
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu
Dil yahin ruk ja zara ( nupur vomits out..mayank helps him by washing her face, giving a
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu a glass of water n giving a warm hug so she feels better.

He loves him bt again trying to run from this truth



Jis raah pe, hai ghar tera ( entering every time in Sharma mention he keeps hope dat
Aksar wahan se, haan main hoon guzra may b gunjan accept his love or atleast don't avoid him)
shayad yahin dil mein raha
Tu mujh ko mil jaye, Kya pata..
.

Kya hai yeh silsala ( nupur gets faint and mayank feels panic in his heart watching nupur in
Janu naa, Main janu naa such condition bt then doctor says its normal n mayank feels lit relax bt

He is nt able to understand that why he is over concern abt nupur bt

Then he smiles watching nupur who is unconscious lying on bed)

Dil sambhal ja zara (one day smarat gets late to reach Sharma mentions n when he
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu reach he watch tears in gunjans eyes...he goes near gunjan
Dil yahin ruk ja zara y his angel is cring...gunjan hits him on shoulder n hugs him.
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu she got scared for him that y he didn't reach on time like daily.

Kuch bhi nahi Jab darmayaan gunjan was nt able to controle her feeling this time n she cries
Phir kyun hai dil, tere hi khwaab bunta that mauch tha samrat shirt also gets wet.
Chaha ki de, tujhko bhula then she gets apart n with her wet n swolan eyes she sees in
Par yeh bhi mumkin ho na sakaa... his eyes which were full on love n they hv a eye lock
Kya hai yeh maamla, Janu naa when their eye lock breaks she gets ambaris , feels shy bt
Main janu naa a big smile comes on samrat face after long days watching her

Such action)

Dil sambhal ja zara ( gunjan again struggling from her feelings bt feeling happy
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu watching that nothing happened to samrat, he is fine n he is

With her)
Dil yahin ruk ja zara ( on the other side maynk is sitting behind nupur, watching
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu continuesly to her he kiss her fore head n smiles...
Dil sambhal ja zara then thinks he is right or nt bt then giv a thought n says
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu that "he is doing nothing wrong"

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nyc update koyal!
hope u add more MN moments in next update!😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful update.loved it so much.bt i want mord mayur scene.
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Posted: 13 years ago
It ws very nice update.
I liked mayur scenes most.
Plz add more mayur scenes.
Thnx for update SIS🤗
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Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

nyc update koyal!
hope u add more MN moments in next update!😛

thks dear
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Originally posted by: Faria.

Beautiful update.loved it so much.bt i want mord mayur scene.

thks 4 ur comment..ok dear i'll add more mayur scenes nxt time
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Originally posted by: Irum.

It ws very nice update.

I liked mayur scenes most.
Plz add more mayur scenes.
Thnx for update SIS🤗

ok dear more scenes of mayur nxt time..thks 4 comment

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