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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
i loved it...

continue soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
nice update..
erhh Sid is so bad..
whts maan goin to do?? continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
Nice update,
so aur Maan is Wearwolf , that's awesome
try to update next par soon
loved it thanx for pm.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
awesome ... loved part 3 ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
super duper
love it
cont soonnn
ty 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
wow!!! read the 2 parts together and loved it to the core!!! beautiful mixing of pkyek and geet and i love both the shows too the core!!!

beautiful!!! but plz have a little more maaneet
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
loved the updates...
well interesting concept...
sher ko wolf bana diya but chalega...
i am not huge fan of pkyk but if its more on maaneet then i am ok...
waiting for nxt to c how this revenge thing is gonna end...
pl cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78

CHAPTER - 4

Maan was in complete joy. He was happy that his sister could be saved. He wanted to share his joy with geet though he couldn't tell her the reason for his happiness he could cherish the moments with her. He went to his guest house he had insisted geet to stay there as it was not safe to stay in a hotel . As she woul not agree to stay with him alone he also asked Adi to accompany them.Geet was watchin T.V. in the living room. Maan sat near her.

MAAN : Hey...

GEET : sir... i was waiting for u...

MAAN ( asked excitedly) : u were waiting for me?

GEET : yes sir...i wanted to give u the details about the project

MAAN ( disappointed) : ufff...project...so wat happened?

GEET : Mr.Dobriyal is happy with our presentation...

MAAN : thats great...i will have to stay here for more a couple of days so u leave with Adi...

GEET : but sir ... i have promised my friend that i ll attend a party tmr...

MAAN : Frd??? geet its not been even a day in dehradun and u made frds...

GEET : yes they are very good...The Dobriyal Girls...

MAAN : great... so u want to stay here...?

GEET : ummm...

MAAN : ohk...u can go with me after two days...ask adi to leave today

GEET : y?

MAAN : geet why will he stay with us?

GEET : but sir...

MAAN : geet...

GEET : ok sir

It was time for party maan decided to go with geet for two reasons one obviously for her safty coz he cannot see anyone suffer just coz they are a part of his life and the second was to meet Abhay. Geet was dressed in a pink party gown and maan was wearing a black see through shirt yah the first three buttons were not on.They drove to the party.Maan found a space enough to park his car when he was about to park his car another car blocked the way.Maan wouldn't have fought for this silly parking thing if that car wasn't abhay's.

MAAN : hey... i came first

ABHAY : so wat?...i ve parked

MAAN : but ...

Geet came out of the car .

GEET : why are u arguing for such a small thing ...lets go...

MAAN : geet go sit inside...

GEET : no u come with me...

Maan gave abhay an angry look and went with geet.He was upset with the whole incident.Maneet met with Jay and neil maan introduced geet to them as his staff...neil has already fallen for her looks ( for those who don't know abt neil let me tell u he is a casenova)...but as usual geet ignored him .But Neil was determined to talk with her . so he went to her .

NEIL : hope u r enjoying the party miss. handa?

GEET : ho ya...its good...

NEIL : i guess u love dancing so why don't u join me

GEET : sorry Mr. Khuranna...( she saw maan in an isolated place free from noise ) i ll see u around have to go...

She went to maan.He was the most handsome guy in the whole party yet he didn't even dance with a single girl.

GEET : don't u enjoy dance?

MAAN : no one is good enough for me here.

GEET : really?

MAAN : with exception.

GEET : so who is the exception?

Before maan could answer misha came to take geet away to introduce her frds . Within few mins geet was comfortable with everyone like Kabir , T , Tracker , Angat.

The Music was stopped .

DJ : hey...its time for some fun...if u remember we have marked a number on your wrist when u came to party so check the number and pair up with the person for a friendly dance...

Maan checked his hand it was 6 he wanted geet to have the same number but unfortunately her number was 12 so maan has to search his partner. Finally everyone found their pair . The order was like this

Maan - Pia

Abhay - misha

Kabir - geet

Jay - panchi

Neil - T

( sry for this perfect mismatch but maneet could not dance together for now…………………… i promise a passionate dance in later parts )

maan didn't want to act over possesive and jealous as that would raise qus and create unnecessary probs . Anyway Kabir seemed a nice guy and was moving with geet in a decent manner.

Later after the dance jay came to maan.

JAY : bro may be its time we should talk with abhay.

MAAN : is it safe here

JAY : yes bro...if we are in some public place no one of us will use our powers...

MAAN : u r right ... then we ll meet him near the parking at 11:30...

Jay texted abhay .

Near Parking ...at 11:30...we are three... pure negotiation...no tricks...

Abhay had a victorious smile reading the text.He immediately made a call.

ABHAY : he is ready to meet me...ou plan has suceeded...

X : do u want me to come?

ABHAY : no i ll manage ... if need occurs i ll call u...

X: be careful...Maan is very powerful ...

ABHAY : ain't i

X : u r my sweet bro ... but trust me he is strong i ve seen him...

ABHAY : i ll take care

Sry this part is short but this small piece of party was needed for twist …………next part will be interesting and big... hopefully maneet romance will start in next part………………………

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update waiting for the twist
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Posted: 13 years ago
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