NewFF(Maneet) Mere humsafar Thrd 2 Upd pt26 pg 141 - Page 35

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anshra

yaar awesome loved it

thanks for the pm
do sent me more
just loved it yaar👍🏼

Thanks dear

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Water.

Loved ur FF.

Read all parts today only.
Please add me to PM.
Cannot wait for next update.

Arjun can be positive for now and make Maan jealous...cus Geet knows she is not in a relationship yet..and Maan's ego will not even allow him to accept the fact...that he actually likes/love Geet.

later on Arjun can be negative...when mind finds out how he wants to trick Geet...

N den he will realize his feelings for her and so will Geet...

wat say

I too have similar thoughts but it is slightly different u will come to know very soon. Thanks for such a nice suggestion

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mayurmaaneet

omg... finally maan is jealous.. lol.. btw for ur question i think arjun is positive... he is gonna make maan realise that he loves geet.. lol.. cont sooon hun

Dekhthe hai kareena k tumhara guess sahi hai ya galat

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

lovely part...


maan was so J...😆

ye arjun..kahin dadi n all ki help karne ke liye to nahi aaya??

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

arjun dadi n annie ki help karne aaya hai k nahi pata nahi par haan maan ko jealous karne zaroor aaya hai

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: zunaiba5

Thnx 4 pm


😊

Maan is J n Maan is J


I think arjun should be positive ...


Update soon

Thanks dear

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rsroopali

arjun is a positive charater

i think bcoz he will bring geet n maan close n however
i just doubt tht arjun n geet know each other frm before
awesome updateee

Let us see roopali k your guess is right or wrong

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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you dear friends for your encouragement and support.
Here is the next part and this part contains a VM on Rabba main toh mar gaya oye from the movie Mausam. Credit goes to my genius friend Roopali
Many of u have already seen the VM but it is a humble request that do watch it again while reading the update I m sure u will get a different feeling
love-Piya
PART 22

Maan: Geet iss project par kaam nahi karegi

Geet: Kya?

Maan: Haan Geet tum iss project mein kaam nahi karogi

Arjun: O u must b joking Mr.Khurana

Maan: Mujhe mazak karne ki aadat nahi hai Mr.Arjun

Geet: Sir kya main jaan sakthi hoon k main iss project mein kyun kaam nahi kar sakthi aakhir meri galti kya hai

Maan: Tumhari galti ye hai k tumhe faltu k sawal puchne ka kuch zyaada hi shauk hai aur waise bhi main tumhara boss hoon issliye main decide karunga k mere kis employee ko kaunse project mein kaam karna hai samhji tum

Arjun: Mr. Khurana ye bhi kya baat hui aap Geet se itne rudely kyun pesh aa rahe hai...Geet se toh pyar se baat karni chahiye haina geet

Maan couldn't take it any longer

Maan: Mr. Arjun mujhe lagta hai humhe baaki k details discuss karlene chahiye chaliye

Arjun: Thik hai

But before going with Maan Arjun stops and

Arjun: Aapse milkar behet khushi hui Geet...hopefully ye toh shuruwat hai ab aisi mulakathe toh roz hongi

Geet was getting irritated with this behaviour of Arjun
Maan: Geet tum issi waqt jaakar woh Singhania k project par kaam karna shuru kar dho...
Geet: Ji Sir
Maan: Chaliye Arjun
Arjun and Maan leave
Geet goes to her cabin
Maan's cabin
Maan: Waise project k saare details humne already finalize kar liye hai phir bhi agar aapke kuch aur demands ya expectations hai toh aap issi waqt bata dijiye
Arjun: Mera toh ek hi demand hai aur woh hai geet...
Maan: (zara aawaz badhakar ) What do u mean?
Arjun: Mr. Khurana aap galat samaj rahe hai main toh ye keh raha tha k agar iss project mein geet bhi kaam kare toh mujhe khushi hogi...
Maan: MSK apne faisle badaltha nahi hai
Arjun: O common Mr.Khurana aisi bhi kya zidd...itni talented ladki ko aap iss project mein involve nahi karenge ye toh zyathi hai
Maan: Geet itne bade project ko handle nahi kar paayegi wo abhi iss field mein nayi hai aur main iss project ko lekar koi risk nahi lena chahtha
Arjun: Common Mr. Khurana main maanta hoon k geet iss field mein nayi hai par jis khubhi k saath usne aaj ka presentaion diya hai mujhe nahi lagtha k usse behtar koi aur iss project ko handle kar paayega...I think u should give her a chance
Arjun: Aur waise bhi itni khoobsurat ladki k saath kaam karne mein mujhe bada achha lagega
Maan: (thinking) Jee toh karta hai k iss Arjun ko yahi zinda dhafna du...uski himmat kaise hui k mere saamne meri geet ka naam apne zubaan se le
Arjun: So Mr. Khurana toh Geet iss project mein kaam kar rahi hai right?
Maan: Main iss mamale mein soch kar bataunga
Maan: Aap baaki k saare details Adi se discuss kar lijiye main abhi aaya
Arjun: Ok
Maan leaves
Arjun: (thinking) Geet...hmm kafi interesting ladki hai...kuch bhi karke main usse impress zaroor karunga... maza aayega geet k saath khelne mein
Geet's cabin
Geet: Ye maan sir bhi na pata nahi kis baat ka badla le rahe hai... raat bhar baitkar project ki taiyaari ki maine aur ab mujhe hi iss project se bahar nikal diya...ye toh sarasar naa insaafi hai
Geet: Haan aur main iss naa insaafi k khilaf ladungi...samajthe kya hai wo apne aap ko Dhust Danav kahi ke
Maan: (thinking) Main Arjun ko Geet k aas paas bhi mandarane nahi dunga najaane kyun mujhe ye aadmi thik nahi lag raha
Maan Geet ki cabin ki taraf badtha hai
Geet: Khair pehle uss Singhania k project par kaam shuru karti hoon...par wo file hai kaha
Geet starts searching the file
Geet: ye lo pata nahi saare kaam ki cheeze itne uche shelf mein kyun rakhi jaati hai...ab main isse kaise nikalu
Geet: Haan iss chair par khade hokar nikal lethi hoon...
But then she stops
Geet: Rukh geet pehle isski tang chaang check kar le warna dubara neeche gir jaayegi
Geet starts examining the chair
Geet: Haan ab thik hai... chalo ab iss chair par chadthi hoon
Geet chair par khadke file nikalne ki koshish karti hai
Maan enters her cabin
Maan: Ye geet kya karne ki koshish kar rahi hai
Geet loses her balance
Par isse pehle k woh neeche gire maan usse apni baho ka sahara de detha hai
Maneet eyelock...
Mahi...Mahi...
They once again get lost
But then Geet realizes and
Geet: Maan Sir...
Maan: Hmm... o ha
Maan Geet ko khade rehne mein madat karta hai
Maan: Geet tum ye kya kar rahi thi
Geet: Ab maine kya kiya sir
Maan: Kya sochkar tum uss chair par chadi agar main waqt par nahi aata toh tumhe chot lag jaathi na tum apna zara sa bhi khayal nahi rakh sakthi...
Geet: Wo main Singhania ka project file nikal rahi thi
Maan: Geet wo project tumse zyaada important nahi agar tumhe kuch ho jaata toh mera kya hota
Mahi...Mahi...
Geet: Aap kehna kya chahthe hai Sir
Maan: (realizes his mistake) Mera matlab hai agar tumhe kuch ho jaata toh dadima meri class le lethi aur tumhe toh bahana chahiye mujhse badla lene ka
Geet: Badla main le rahi hoon ya aap le rahe ho
Maan: Kya maine kya kiya
Geet: Aur nahi toh kya raat din mehnet ki maine aur aapne mujhe hi uss project se nikal bahar kar diya...ye badla nahi toh aur kya hai
Maan: Geet aisa kuch bhi nahi hai jaisa tum soch rahi ho
Geet: Aisa hi hai Sir...Main jaanti hoon k aap mujhse nafrat karte ho magar iska matlab ye nahi k aap mere saath zyathi karo
Maan: Main tumse nafrat nahi balki main toh tumse pyaa...
Geet: Kya...aap mujhse se kya karte ho?
Maan: Main tumse sirf nafrat nahi balki hadh se zyaada nafrat karta hoon samjhi tum
Geet: haan aur issliye aap mujhse mera haqh cheen rahe ho
Maan: Geet tumhe jo samajhna hai samjho magar tum iss project mein kaam nahi karogi
Geet: Thik hai ab aise khadoos boss se aur umeed bhi kya ki jaa sakthi hai
Maan: Tumne mujhe khadoos kaha...tumahri itni himmat
Geet: Maine toh sirf khadoos kaha warna main toh aapko dracula bhi kehne wali thi
Maan: Dracula ...main tumhe kis angle se dracula diktha hoon
Geet: Har angle se...
Maan: Geet...tum
Geet: Haan Sir mera naam Geet hi hai...magar kya fayda aise naam wale logo ko MSK ke saamne aana nahi chahiye kyunki yaha unki koi kadar karnewala nahi hai
Maan: Bus geet bahut ho gaya ... Tum iss project par kaam karogi magar yaad rahe koi gadbad nahi honi chahiye
Geet was very happy to hear this
Geet: Thank you Sir
meanwhile Arjun enters
Arjun: O Wow ye jaankar khushi hui k Geet bhi humare saath iss project mein kaam kar rahi hai
Maan: (thinking) Ye kaha se aa gaya
Arjun: Geet ab toh roz mulakat hothi hi rahegi haina
Maan: Arjun aapne Adi se baat kar li
Arjun: Yes Maan saari baate puri ho gayi hai...waise Geet aaj shaam aap kya kar rahi hai
Before Geet could answer him
Maan: Aaj Geet ko bahut important kaam hai...haina geet
Geet nods her head in approval
Arjun: Never mind...aapka kaam pehle jyaada important hai aur wiase bhi...
Maan: Arjun mujhe aapse kuch imp baat karni hai aap zara bahar aayenge
Arjun: o sure...Bye Geet
Geet: Bye
After some time Arjun leaves
Geet is busy working on the project
Maan bhi chori chori Geet ko dekh raha hai
Geet enters his cabin
Geet: Maan Sir maine kuch changes kiye hai aap zara inhe dekh lijiye
Maan: Hmm... Achha geet zara wo blueprints dikhana
Geet blueprint lene jaathi hai tabhi uska pair mud jaatha hai
Maan immediately notices this
Maan: Geet tum thik se dekhkar chal nahi sakthi kitne martaba tumse kaha hai k apna dyaan rakho magar nahi
Geet: Ab maine thodi na ye jaanbujkar kiya hai
Maan: Chup bilkul chup...
Maan: Dikhau kaha choth aayi hai...
Geet: Choth nahi isse moch kehthe hai
Maan carefully touches her feet
Geet: AHH...
Maan: Chalo ab ghar chalthe hai
Geet: Magar Sir...kaam
Maan: Kaam kal karenge abhi hum ghar jaa rahe hai
Geet tries to get up but the pain was unbearable
Maan Geet ko apni baaho mein uthatha hai aur car mein bithakar ghar le jaata hai
Both of them were silent throughout the drive
KM
Maan geet ko apni baho mein utakar outhouse le jaata hai
Geet ko bed par letha detha hai
Maan: Zara apna pair dikhana
Geet: Sir dard ho raha hai
Maan: Geet meri aakhon mein dekho aur kaho kya main tumhe kabhi nuksaan paucha saktha hoon
Geet could only see love in those eyes...she was completly lost
Maan immediately twisted her leg
Maan: Geet...Geet... abhi kaho tumhe kya abhi bhi dard ho raha hai
Geet: Ji Sir
Maan :Maine kaha kya tumhe abhi bhi dard ho raha hai
Geet realizes that her pain had vanished
Geet: Ji nahi sir ab main thik hoon...magar aapne ... thanks sir
Maan: It's okay Geet...apna khayal rakhna
Maan goes to his room
He stands near the window
At the same time Geet too comes and stands near the window
Ye pehli baar tha k Geet ne maan ko apne kamre ki taraf jhakthe hue dekhatha
Maan apni nazar pher letha hai
But then once again he starts looking in the same direction
Geet Maan ki taraf dekhkar muskura rahi thi
Maan bhi geet ko dekhkar muskurane laga
Geet took her moblie and typed a message
Maan recieved the message it was from Geet
Message: Good night Sir
Maan replied back
Good night Geet
Geet curtains bannd karne wali hothi hai but then she looks at Maan and stops
Geet bed par jaakar so jaathi hai
Maan bhi bed par leth jaata hai dere was a smile on his face
His eyes were closed yet there was one face that was coming in his thoughts...GEET
and then (watch this)

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YsfymxqPEjU[/YOUTUBE]

PRECAP: PARTY
Thank you Roopali for making such a beautiful VM.
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love-Piya
Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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