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OMG That was like the best part youve writen so far! Absolutely amazing! how do you do it? you put so many emotions in your parts and the way you describe them is unbelievable! I LOVED LOVED LOVED IT!<3 <3 <3 this is like totally my fav ff now! (LOL sorry Ri you got competition girl😉yous may be hot but this one more emotional which i love😃🤣) Seriously im not joking! i check your ff like everyday hoping for an update so i can res first! :P sadly this time i couldnt coz my dad had to take my lappy away on the wrong day :/ Screw you Rida! watch next time im being first! Can i ask you a question? were you born with gift or did u just pick up from somewhere coz i want to have it! your too good! the way you describe everything..the way you lay out ArSh emotions...its all just fantastic <3 <3 And i agree with Rida if you dont turn this in to a novel i will strangle you too😈🤣 dont get scared we are saying coz we love and your ff and we want the best for you🤣
This update described soo many emotions i love where its going! Hayyyee the old ArSh are gonna come back soon right? please please dooo! i miss their little knok-jhok! It brought the TRPs up for DMG, maybe it will bring the TRP's up for this ff, not that u need any more anyway this ff is gonna be loved and remembered by everyone especially me i can promise you that!😃 <3
Okay now the part 😆
When i first read it i was thinking whats Shilpa up to? i wanted to know how it wud make him feel better, but i knew she wouldnt do anything to hurt him coz she loveshim...seee! she gained our trust aswell as Armaans! What effect has your writing had on us???!! Hayyyee the trust he had on Shilpa left me bedazzlleddd <3 (lol i never used that word before :P) it reminded me of KaSh and their romance and chemistry Hayyye <3
I felt like crying when i saw Armaan state in the fire escape...arghghhh i hate Riddhima for hurting him like this :@ Im soo soo soo glad Shilpa was there! Shes sooo sweet helping him through all that even though its hurting her!
OMG her trick to helpnig him was soo good! but the best part was of that was that the memory you chose to put in it was a KaSh memory! Hayyyee i loved that scene with 500 push ups! Armaan looked soo hawwt then 😉🤣I literally love u for using that scene! :D
OMG is she angel or something??!?!!! Shilpa is truly an amazing character! Your ff Shilpa is like literally my fav Shilpa! <3 You make her such a sweet heart! <3
i loved how u showed armaans trust on her that he can tell her anything! they have such a great connection between each other they dont need words to see if they can trust each other or not they can see it their eyes!
OMG the way she asked those questions!! amazing! she knew what she was doing what she saying the best about it was that it made perfect sense and it made him see sense! i never thought about it like that but after reading this...woooww see your ff is making me see sense too!
okay i have to quote this, i dont what about it but just love this bit! :
S: tumhari yaadon waala Armaan...kya tumhe aaj ke Armaan mein woh Armaan dikhta hai?
Armaan had never thought of that before, whenever he reminisced about the past his concentration was always on Riddhima. Now when Shilpa asked him that question Armaan remembered himself and in an instant he had a definite answer for her.
A: nahin...bilkul bhi nahin...
S: kya tum usse badal sakte ho...
A: pata nahin...
OMG WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO ME???!! i loved this part! see your ff has made me that crazy that i dont know why i love it :P
i dont know what it is about this particular scene that got me to love it soo much! i think its the words..soo much tension and emotion... i never thought about this kind of stuff.. i think i loved the fact that she made him realise that he can be happy and become the old armaan, he doesnt have to remain sad, that its not impossible to go back to his old self! And the thing is he knew it too! well kinda! but hes not given up hope on his old self! i love the way you wrote it!
Hayyyee Armaans right! Shilpa is soo different, shes not like others, she understands where Armaans coming from and knows how to help him unlike others :/ ( not mentioning names :/)
Shilpa is one of the best characters ever!!! you made her it yaar! i literally cannot write how i feel about this part, what i wrote is nothing to how much i love it! seriously! like ppl say some things just cant be said!🤣
Hayyyeee i just realised you just gave us another KaSh scnee in Fire escape!!!😃😃 OMG i wish they put this in the actual DMG :(
OMG Armaan is soo sweet! but i wish he realises Shilpas more than just a friend! seeing Shilpas state made me cry for her😭 poor girl...shes the most sweetest person ever! she doesnt even care shes hurting herself she just wants to see him smile how sweett! but shes a strong girl and i love how you reflect her character in her, strong on the outside but she vulnerable in the inside! :)
i seriously cannot get over that scene! i got no words to describe how much i love it! <3 <3
Okay i hate Riddhima now😡😡 you might not want to read the next few words :P... that kutti kameeni bitch, asshole! i hope she rots in hell! and the snakes and scorpions eat her😡😡😡How could she be soo evil to Shilpa! she did nothing to her! and yet she said that to her knowing her much it must have hurt her! i cant beleive hse can stoop soo low! the cow!
Awww Armaan was thinking about her! Hayyye soo cute! he misses the old her!! that shows something! they both miss the old ones of each other, the happy ones which shows that they like seeing each other haapy which is a step closer to LURRRVVVEEE!😃😆 Seee Armaan thinking about making her haappy too... its not all one sided! he caresabout her too and he knows the old Shilpa was more happier! I adore this kind of conncetion between them that they know how each oehr are feeling, and what better for them!😍
HAAYYYEE! the last bit reminded me of the old ArSh again! i want them back soon but i also like this emotional comforting side of them so i want to see more of this first 😃
LOL that was long phew! you have to give a update now super soon coz i gave this long comment! i took me more than an hour to write! i will be waiting 😆
continue sooon x
Edited by zARqaa_X - 14 years ago
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