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Sia89

@Sia89

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Posted: 14 years ago

#131

whao 3rd thread ? Congrats Muski (: and nice update .. hit the like button as well😳

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Tamanna_TJ

@Tamanna_TJ

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Posted: 14 years ago

#132

hey Muskan,
u dont kno how flattered i m reading aal the parts...
u r just awesome...
wud be waiting for the next part...
continue soon...
thnkx n keep writing...
loads n loads love,hugs n kisses...😃 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

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Eva Shah

@maanujaanu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#133

CONGRATS ON D NEW THREAD

luved d update dear

do continue soon

like d way Geet's trying to settle down wid Maan but is still scared of him

n Annie wat do I say bout her

awesum , she is a darling

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sarika

@kiran99

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Posted: 14 years ago

#134

congratulations for the new thread... awsome update

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Sia89

@Sia89

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Posted: 14 years ago

#135

ATTENTION GUYS ..

There is a FF Award Nomination .. so start voting for our Muskanp and her awesome FFs !!!
here is the link .. !!

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1744837/ff-awards-nomination-thread-note-50

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princess163

@princess163

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Posted: 14 years ago

#136

Ae mere maula, kya dua maangu aaj main tujhse?

Ab to tu bhi yeh jaanta hai,

meri zindagi hi hai amanat kisiki...

meri har saans mein uski khushbu basi hai,

Zubaan se kya bolun, jab har dhadkan bas usi ko duaaen deti hai!

Uske sajde mein ye sarr har pal jhukne ko betaab hai,

Uski ek jhalak dekhun toh lagta ek khaab hai.

Badi hi fursat mein tune uss murat ko taraasha hai,

Uski ek muskaan zindagi mein bharti nayi aasha hai!

Ae Khuda, kyun main uska intezaar karta hoon,

Haan, main khud se zaada usse hi pyaar karta hoon.

Par meri battameezion ka khamiyaza usne bhugta hai,

Uski har ek aah ko soch kar aaj dil mera dukhta hai!

Haan jee chahta hai ki baahon mein usse samet loon,

Haan dil machalta hai ki duniya se main usse chipa loon.

Par apni hi haiwaaniyat se ab mujhko darr lagta hai..

Us pak inayat ke kareeb jaane se bhi dil darta hai.

Ae khuda, zindagi ka har ek pal ab yahi kehna chahta hoon,

Use apne aaghosh mein chupa le mujhse bhi, ye aashik apni aashiki ka yahi sila chaahta hai...

Ummm...sorry if its bad...I don't know Urdu...it was just an attempt, a spur of the moment I saw Maan's dargah pic!

Love

Swati

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ninand

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Posted: 14 years ago

#137

That was really heart wrenching.. She can get warm with him, and maybe even think of him in positive light, but its his intimacy , his closeness that will trigger the horrible memories.. This is what Maan has to live with, What pitifully painful consequences.

The part where she frantically starts looking for her dupatta💔.. and now when his guilt is overwhelming him, about to consume him, he returns to that one place nearly every man seeks specially when guilty, God. Then even such a small thing like tying a knot there seems like an act of penance.. very sad.

Brilliant part. hope you post few more parts today. :)

Edited by ninand - 14 years ago