MRITYUNJAI-Some Love Stories Never Die MGff cmpltd - Page 60

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
here cmes the twist :(
and thnx for the pm
waiting for nxt update
do cont soon
love
meena
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

It was a divine passionate update...
The change of colors during the sunrise was very well compared to the changes in life which is the universal truth...
the truth which one can never deny...
Geet's simple statement was so touching...
"Now I can swim only in two situations. If it is with you or if it is for you.
"
We r ready to do the things which we think we can't only for that special people..
Geet's mature thinking is amazing maan day by day..
Nw she s neither feared of their separation...and they r ready to fight against all odds..
They r understanding more abt love and life...
Beautiful sayanee...love u...😃


Thanks for ur lovely comment n love u too.. muuaah 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
yippie yippie yippie !!!
finally read it
oh my gosh
what an update
loved maaneet moments😳☺️
oh my god and geet is pregs !!!
i'm really scared now
what is dev gonna do
precap sounds really scary
hope its not dev
i was a silent reader for a long time
but the ff was so interesting that i cant stop myself from commenting
pls update the next part soon
really eagerto read it
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sarkh26

yippie yippie yippie !!!

finally read it
oh my gosh
what an update
loved maaneet moments😳☺️
oh my god and geet is pregs !!!
i'm really scared now
what is dev gonna do
precap sounds really scary
hope its not dev
i was a silent reader for a long time
but the ff was so interesting that i cant stop myself from commenting
pls update the next part soon
really eagerto read it


thanks for ur comment dear.. but I guess I can't explain the thing.. Geet isn't preg she wanna be a mother.. 😛 .. plzz keep commenting .. love ya
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Posted: 13 years ago
Diii

Kya kahooo???

Such a wonderful yet sensitive update...

Me doing Dhinka Chinka for Maaneet reunion...

Loved the Love making Scene...it was so Sensous, yet pure and with lots of divintiy in them...

The Way Maan worships Geet is beyond imagination...

And Geet's love is something more eternal for him...

But i was really flabbergasted reading the Last Paragraph...

Dev just got miffed seeing their Kiss...what will happen if he knows, Geet is already Maan's wife...

Precap is dilusional... I dont know who is carrying her!!! if its Maan its more than Ok...but if its Dev... i really dont want his dirty hands on Geet...

I know u will do wonder in the next update too...

Me crying for having left in a cliff hanger...Desperately waiting for the next update...

I dont want Maaneet story to become like Thammi and Swarna...their love should never die..and tats the request!!! hope they win the fate of Govardan temple ppl and set up an example, even a Devdasi has feelings called Love!!!!

Fabulous Di!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

it was an amazing update

d way u show how life changes wid example of sunrise was brilliant

dere love was eternal,undying ,everlasting


thanks u dear.. I am so happy u loved it.. keep commenting plzz😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
I just got to read this amazing piece of writting...is so beautiful,like reading an old novel..thank u for these wonderful writting and art infos
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran



amazing update...

Maaneet love moments were beautiful...

Devdutt saw them kissing...asliyat to abhi use pata hi nahin that they are more involved with each other than kissing only...

who took Geet away...

some person send by priests of Jagannath temple to take Geet away...

update soon...

thanx for pm...


thanks for ur comment.. d precap will be revealed in next update.. will try to update soon.. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi friends .. Mrityunjai is heading towards its end and so I had a plan to share some thing about this story .. the story behind this story with u all but unfortunately I have to inform u that I am very upset .. As I always give late update n keep u people waiting I thought this time I wont do so as I have some free time today so I will start writing by now but after this update my likes n comments has decreased in such way that I am not getting any motivation to write the next update.. to all silent readers one thing I want to tell u that I have tu put a lot of effort in every update .. so I can expect at least two/three lines of comment .. u r free to criticize my writing my pov I never stopped u but please leave a comment.. and now a days I think I am not able to impress my regular readers also so that their comments are also not reaching to me.. there r many who personally asked me to pm but I have never seen them to comment ... Please do understand comments r not meant to be praise or increase the no of pages it is like inspiration to the writers, no comment or short comment of one or two words just demotivate us from writing.. I am writing coz I love writing n I love MAANEET .. but if there is none to appreciate them Its better I will write n keep it to myself or pm only them who is interested to read.. y sud I make a thread n editing pics n update with song n everything.. I never asked anything for my other FF SAMNE WALI KHIDKI ... but MRITYUNJAI takes my lot of time n hard work too .. Now a days I feel it was my mistake that I started writing on such a subject

I am sorry if I sounded rude but honestly speaking I am hurt and upset .. I was planning of starting another FF a love story based on historical background n I have also announced it before in my FF gallery .. but now I have to give a 2nd thought should I write it or not coz I guess I am not capable to write love stories at all .. sorry for bothering u all n spoiling ur precious time..

PS: I WONT STOP WRITING MRITYUNJAI.. I HAVE STARTED IT SO I WILL END IT DEFINITELY BUT I GUESS NEXT UPDATE WILL NOT COME ON NEXT WEEK AS I WAS PLANNING .. DONT BLAME ME FOR LATE UPDATE DS TIME
Edited by sayaneegupta - 13 years ago

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