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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: valli22



will try 2 update 2day..

try nahi dear update karna hi padega me waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: valli22


this time special thanks to poongs..for helping me

aka thanksalam solle vena akka eppo na ungaluku help pane inga iruken aka
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Posted: 13 years ago
U, ME,AUR...?

PART 49

Hai friends,

Thank you all for your support .Special thanks for my friends who clicked like buttons and commented my updates.. Please encouraging me in the same way'😊I love you all.

2-3 parts will be sad 😭😭😭..please accept it ...its need to carry the story..

Dr.called the villagers..
she is not listening to me..now all of you take ur chance..try to speak with her..i want all of you 2 talk with her..till she break down..
gudia..dek..mein hoon..tumhare chacha..are you coming with me to farm..i will get ur favourite coconut..
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gudia..ye dek..munna..tumhare saath khelnekeliye ro raha hai..you take him with you to play..
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didi..aap aayi na..we will play hide n seek..
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nehi di..hum kuch aur khelengi..aapki pasand ki..
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hum snake n ladders khelengi..
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gudia..i've made ur favourite aalooke parotta..tum khaogi na..
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gudia..see ive bought ur mangoes..isi farm houseki hai..tum vickyko degi na..
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didi..hum cycle pe chalein...you told me you will teach me to ride cycle..
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gudia..mein mandir jarahi hoon...tum mere saath aaogi...
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Gudia..see ur puppy ..its not letting me to near you..


the hours were passing by...all their attempt failed..there was no response from her..she was lying there like a deaf..as if she did not hear any sound around her..
maan was half waken few hrs before..he felt better after taking rest...he could hear whats going on around him...but could not get up..
suddenly there was a dead silence in that room..
Dr.ji..all of us have tried our best..none of us is left..what to do now..Maan woke up and made himself settle to the bed post..his hands were still entwingled with geet..
He was about to shout at Dr.for making him sleeep😡..

How dare she..He saw tears in Dr.s eyes..😭
Dr.kya hua..is geet ok..why are you crying?
Yes.i'm crying..i'm also human maan.Dr.s too have emotions..they are not stone hearted..I'm the one who brought geet to this world..from that day..i'm seeing her growing from a child to girl..i've always seen her bubbliness,charming,non stop bak bak,playing,smiling..But I've never seen her quiet like this.like a statue..without emotions..
geet is physically ok…but the way she is not responding is making me worry…she must break..she must cry..hum sab try karliya…par uspe kuch bi asar nehi horaha hai…she is not recognizing anyone..if she remains like this we will …lose her…

Dr…he shouted at her…how can u say this…
Medical ithna improve hogaya..aap yese kyun kehrahi hain..u tell me what should I do to get my geet back..i'll call all the best dr.s for her treatment…
I don't mean that words…its in geets hands..she must react..u r right medical has improved a lot…but this is a small village and you cant get more facilities…I think you must take her to delhi for further treatment…
Ok..we will leave to Delhi now itself…Daadi lets go..kalakka jane ki tayari keejiye..
Maan..we cant go today..there is one more duty to finish..
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Geets family ka anthim sanskar…we cant take her without finishing it tomorrow..then we will leave..
Munshiji said..mei uska thayari karthi hoon…aap gudia ko deklijiye..aur kal janeki tayeri keejiye..
Ji munshiji..
As she is not eating I'll give her drips,that will keep away from weakness.i''ll be back in half an hour…I'll stay here tonight..
Yes dr.

Dr.came out..
Dr.ji gudia kesi hai..wo teek hojayegi na..
I cant say anything now..ive told maan to take geet to delhi for further treatment..
Par dr..kya hum maan ke saath gudia ko kese bej sakthe hain…wo tho ithna gussa wala dikra hain..gudia kese rahengi unki saath…one of the elders asked her..
Or you talking in senses.. you are elder..you have much experience in life..maan is angry…I agree..cant you see the love n care behind it…he is accusing himself for the loss of her family..even when I made him sleep,he did not let her hand for a minute… he is her husband now…he has the right over her now,than us..jo gussa wala hota haina..uska dil saaf hotha hai…I'm sure he will make cure gudia soon…
Maafi chaatha hoon ji..mei ek baath kahoon…geets neighbour munnas mother asked.
Haan bolo..
You all mens went for farm..only we women witnessed what happened..Maan babu beat that ram vigorously for touching our gudia…for every beat he claimed how dare you touch my wife..my wife was the word he repeated often…no one can love our gudia like him..i trust him..he will come back here with our old gudia..
All the womens accepted the same..
Ok.we will send her with her husband.lets go and help munshiji for further arrangements..

They accepted half heartedly..


Dr. came back to farm houseafter her visit to hospital..

maan did not let geet for a moment..

After so much of pressure given by maan,pointing her sickness ,dadi went to sleep..dr.said she will wait in living room and will check up geet for every hour..nakul n kala were in bed for name sake..
Maan was sitting beside geet.starring at her..he was waiting for her one move..one word …one smile..the drips had made her sleep again.
How in this world my life has changed upside down again?
Yesterday was our starting of life…
Today,it seems to be questioned..
Will she get normal..
Will she behave like yesterday..
Will she irritate me with her nonstop questions like yesterday…
Will she smile again..
Will she be able to forget this incident…

It was mid night…he has not slept…
He bent n kissed her forehead..
Geet..please react…cry…scream from your lungs..say something..get angry…break things..let your depression come out…
He slided beside her in bed..he took her head n placed it over his chest..without disturbing her hand that is in saline..
Can you hear my heart beat..its beating for you..
I cant see you like this…you made me smile..now you took away from me…
Please come back geet…come back..i feel lonely again..

he kissed her hands.
He did not see dr. was watching him..
She will not reply maan..she is sleeping..
Maan tried to get up..
Don't get up maan..if you feel better by holding her like this..let her be like this…shayad tumhare dard wo bhi mehsoos karein..
Dr.changed the drips n sat opposite to maan..
I don't know this side of yours…few hrs before I thought you are an angry young man.but this is straight opposite..
how is she dr..
No improvement..she is the same..she sighed..
Why don't you sleep maan..i'll take care of her…
No.Dr.i can be awake..meri aadath hogayi..i have spent many sleepless nights…this is added to one of those nights..
I don't get you…
First I lost my mom…then dad…then dev bro n his wife….now Geets family..whoever i love..sab muje chodke jaathe hein..

you have dadi with you maan..why are you talking like this ..she loves you..

Maan doesnt answer..

That made Dr.feel something is behind it..

Daadi who came to see them,heared it..

Yes.i have not showed my love to him..i have let him stay alone always .shayad..i did not see his hidden pain behind him..have i done a big mistake?

She left without saying a word..


the next day morning..

All the formalities were finished..in the crimitorium..


Precap:😭😭

3.12..2011..4.00pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
⭐️👏👏 tooo gud 👏

kafi jyaada ⭐️

keep it up
Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part didi👏...
but feel sad for geet😭...
waiting for geet funny question...
Edited by hepzi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
missing geet yaar...
i hope she vl cums bak into his life soon as bubbly geet...
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Posted: 13 years ago
verynice please update the next part soon thanku
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome but very painful i hope ki maan kuch aisa kare jisse geet ro pade aur pls dadi ye na soche ki maan dadi se pyar nahi karta maan ur dai ke soch main difference kabhi bardaash nahi kar sakte pls dadi maan ko bataye ki vo maan se kitna pyar karti hai par jan bhuj kar kabhi maan ko ye sab bataya nahi pls n continue soon eagerly waiting for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
didi missing geets bak bak
nice part
hope geet get well soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
ONLY ANOTHER SHOCK CAN BRING GEET OUT OF HER DEPRESSION
MAAN HAS HIS WORK CUT FOR HIM AND HE NEED LOTS OF PATIENCE TO HANDLE HER

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