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thabassum

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Posted: 13 years ago

#451

aww bechara maan...

kitna dair thak control karega😆

iam afraid wat willl be geets reaction😲

hope she doesnt screamz😲

awsum update vallz akka😳

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Smily

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Posted: 13 years ago

#452

awesome part

luvd it

thanks for the pm

continue soon

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seshatree

@seshatree

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Posted: 13 years ago

#453

i just started reading your ff and god it is really fantastic...you had me laughing with Geet's bak bak...keep updating..

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SONU_29

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Posted: 13 years ago

#454

Awesome part👏.
I loved it😊.

Continue soon.

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vrinda22

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Posted: 13 years ago

#455

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vrinda22

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Posted: 13 years ago

#456

U, ME,AUR...?

PART 43

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His hands moved slowly removing the rest.Her choli landed on the floor.She was standing in her slips n inskirt.He entwingled his fingers with hers.he was in a drunken state ,fully drowned in her.Geets heart paced fast.She closed her eyes.She could feel her blood flowing from head to toe.He rubbed his nose in her crook of her neck.his breathe was hot as hers.She arched her back,hitting his hard chest..This feeling was new to her.one part of her told her to stop him.and the other told not to.She was fighting with her inner turmoil.maan slowly slided his hands under her slips.he could feel her bare waist.he encircled it n tugged her more closer.his other hand started to move upwards over her arm slowly followed by his wet kisses,sending her goose bumps.he rubbed his stubble on her cheek sideways,giving her a small peck.she tightened her eyes more.She digged her nails on him.
May be she is childish n unaware of marriage,but physically she is matured.she reacted to his every touch.noone has touched her that way that he was touching her.both were lost in their emotions.maan slided her slips with her bra strap.he can now see her half shoulders bare.her cleavage were visible.his fingers caressed her shoulders,moving front to neck .She slided her neck otherside ,giving him more space.
The chill cold air touched her half exposed shoulders ,which brought her back.She saw them in their images in the mirror.Maan was standing at the back of her with his eyes closed.his hand was moving lower from neck.
She allowed him to touch ,kiss n hug bcoz her mama said,its his right.but this is too far.
She remembered how will her mother taunt her when her dupatta was not in its place.But,now,she is standing in half dress before a man..this is wrong.Her mind alerted her to wake up. He tried to kiss her neck.but,he was getting wild.He ended in biting her.Ouch'She screamed in pain.
The reality struck.she moved in a jerk from him,crossing her hands over her chest.replacing her straps over her shoulder,she said'.
Please'don't'''..
Maan was not able to understand the situation for a minute.her voice please..brought back the sense in him..he was ashamed of himself for crossing the limits.loosing his self control..when he has made his mind,he will stay away from her,then how he ended like this.What if she questions about,what I did?how will I explain.even if I try to explain,I know she cant understand it..their was an awkward silence in the room. they want to speak.but barely the word came. He took the water and gulped it in one go. the chillness of water made him a little cool to control his burning desires.
He took her dupatta and covered her.
wo..hmm..I'm so.so.rry geet..wo'tum..mein.choli..strings...kese..i don't know..
He was unable face her more.he turned the other side.The same was she.but she was looking at him.she could see the guilt on him'he was hitting himself on his temple.
You go and fresh up.
No.i don't want to fresh up.
Why..
I'll get fever if I take bath at this time.
Then..change karo..i'll wait in balcony.
Ok.Without seeing her he walked..she looked at his back.
Oh..babaji what I've done
He turned,what?
Making a baby face she said,I have scratched on your back'
She came near him. She pointed his back,where she had digged her nails deeply.Blood is coming.see here. blowing air on his shoulders
I must cut my nails tomorrow morning
is it paining.she asked innocently.
Maan saw her in awe.
That's the special feature to be child hearted.She forgot what happened a few seconds before between them. Now she is caring for him.He was relieved that she forgot and speaking to him normally.
.noit is not.you go.n change.
.She moved.
Thud'ouch..
He turned to see what it was.Geet was standing in one leg,massaging the other leg with her hand.
He came back to her.he took her leg in his hands.
Kya hua..
I hit in the chair.
Why don't you see n walk'ok sit down..
She tried to move'aaah..
What happened?
I cant walk its paining.
Tum bhi na..bilkul bache ho.😉
He scooped her in his arms and made his way to bed.He was seeing other places other than geet.He placed her on it.He took the medicine n applied on her leg.
Ab kesi hai geet..is it still hurting?
There was no answer.He lifted his eyes.he saw geet sleeping peacefully,still crossing her hands over her chest.even though she was covered with the cloth.
He smiled ..pagli..he applied ointment on her neck,where she had irritation.then he covered her with the spread...He searched for her changing dress..there is no sign of it.
Lagtha hain geetki dress rakna boolgayi..What to do..?
He took one of his shirts.he removed her dupatta slowly without waking her..he still could not take his gaze from her beauty.he shook his heads.
nogeet I'll wait for you till you yourself will submit to me.
He weared her.the shirt..There is no couch for him to sleep.He was also tired,so he slided to the far most corner of the bed.he was fast asleep,till she started to scream in middle of night

12.11.2011...10.35am

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keenu_kk

@keenu_kk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#457

ossum part dear

superb

loved it

so what next?

college for geet

i want all the boys drool on geet dear

ma be she may wear shalwar

psss

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

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Posted: 13 years ago

#458

U, ME,AUR...?

PART 44

Hai friends,

Thank you all for your support .Special thanks for my friends who clicked like buttons and commented my updates.. Please encouraging me in the same way'😊I love you all.

Geet screamed at midnight.Maan woke up hearing her.he moved to her.
Geet kya hua?he patted her cheeks.
She held his vest in her fist tightly.
chunni..chunni..mama..papa..chunni..blood..
she was screaming in her sleep..
Maan could understand,she has not recovered from that incident..
Geet..calm down..he slowly brushed her hair backwards n consoling her.
She instantly placed her head on his chest,placing her hand on his shoulders,holding him tight..she again drifted into sleep.
Bichaara maan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
He tried to move.But, could not .he don't want to wake her also.Holding her in his arms was a pleasant feeling for him.He smiled.
You are mine.My wife.Thats enough for me.he placed a kiss on her forehead.Good night my cute wifey.he switched off the lights.
He also slept very peacefully .

At the same time a few kms away from HP.
Dayalnath n Ramnath ,both were walking through a jungle way.They have returned from Delhi.They were still in city costumes.sothat no one could find them.
Bapuji,why are we walking in this route.?
Police are their in Hp entrance.That Maan had made every way to block us.Very few know this way to enter hp.so we are taking this way to enter the village.Have you kept the gun safe .
Ji bapuji.he took it out,that was kept hidden under his shirt.what are we going to do.
I know youcan't think.but,pls don't irritate me with ur questions.I'll tell you what should you do n when.till then follow me quietly.
Ji.They both went first to farm house of maan.they were hiding in dark far away from farm house. They saw the securities there. Maneets window was open.Ram saw maan lifting geet in his arms.Geet encircling maans neck.only he cold see the faces of them as the lower windows was shut.a few minutes later the lights switched off and maneets room went dark.
Ramnath imagined that they are having their SR😆.His blood was boiling from the moment he saw geet in maans arms😡.Maan have stolen geet from him.Rams only aim was to own geet for himself.,for a long time.But,today he has lost.his angry had no bounds😡 .he took the gun and tried to move towards the farm house.
Dayalnath pulled him back to the dark.
Are you mad?
Yes.I'll kill that man today.
Do you think you can near him.?We have seen his power in delhi n here to.before you reach him you will be dead.see his securities.
Ramnath felt helpless.
Tho mein kya karun..i cant bare this sight.she is mine..only mine..and i will make her mine.
Use ur brain.
What you want me to do bapuji..
Lets move to geets house.i'll say u what to do?
They moved from their without making noise.

In geets house
All were feeling lonely without geet.
Lucky n sukhwinder were lying on rano's lap on either side.
Bhabhima..gudiya ki bhina ye ghar soona sa lagraha heina.
Rano was trying her self hard not to make them weak.
Haan.she cannot sit quietly without her blabber.or fighting without Vicky.she will be asking questions for everything..kya karegi wo sasural mei..muje tho uski chintha horahi hei.
Mama,I'll not fight with didi from now.you ask jiju to give our didi back.mei didi ke bina nehi resakthi.
Don't tell like that.now she belongs to them'she will be happy there..god has given her a nice future.if we want to see we can go there..n they will also visit us..we can talk to her in phone also.
Chalo ab sab jake sojao..kal kal jaldi utna hai..
wo dono aayenge..uska inthasaam bhi karna hai.. geets papa said.
puppy started to bark.it saw dayalnath n his son watching them through the windows.
Puppy ,be quiet.we know you also miss gudia na..she will come tomorrow.so dont bark.
But it never stopped its barking. it new the enemies are there with there evil plans...

Precap: Geet wearing sari n maan left his phone in the house ...

12.11.2011..3.30pm

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