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Posted: 14 years ago


PART 70
PLEASE VOTE FOR OUR GC & DD here

a reader wanted me to include maan's reactions..as Nt is narrating the past to him.. I have added that in bracket..hope it makes sense..the current track is past ..after 5months in US...Nt found out that Geet is pregnant & trying to help her out with it

Oh genie.. I love u ..so so very much.. she was so excited..knowing that they loved each other..his not being there never mattered. She knew he only loved her..especially the way he claimed her...that night. Now realizing wat it meant she was 200% sure he can't love anyone else the way he loves her.

She was the one

The only one

One of a kind!

She was as innocent as a new born baby

As nave as the first dew drop on the grass

As plain as the clear blue sky

As understanding a human can ever imagine

As truthful as the words of God

As believing as your faith can be

She was the one

The only one

His dodo!

She was unaware of what happened to her

She was unaware of what the future will bring for her

She was unaware that she was carrying a child

She was unaware that she was an unwed mother

She only knew one thing

That he was her Genie and he was her world

He could never do anything wrong

Her blind faith in him always reached its infinity

She loved him, loved him to the core

Her love for him had no boundaries

She only knew one thing

That she was his and he was hers

The sun blessed her with his shine

And the night cocooned her with his love.

She was his and only his

She loved him, more than he loved her.

She was the one

The only one

His dodo!

love
rachna

next day nt saw Geet sleeping in maan's room. She went in woke her up.
(Maan felt so touched)
Nt '
tum yanah kya kar rahi ho?
Geet blushed ..main wo..
nt was taken a back..seeing her blush..
(Maan knew probably that was the first time she blushed in true sense)
Geet '
main genie ko I love u kahne aayen thi
nt '
finally u know.. that u love him
Geet blushed..
haan.. hum pata nahi kabse ek dosren se pyar karthen aayen hain.. hume hi nahi pata
that was really deep words from Geets mouth.
(Maan nodded..with every word she spoke.. his heart cried out in acceptance)
Nt '
correction.. hum nahi sirf tu
(Maan couldn't complain.. but that was not true...his heart..soul..mind cried..it is hum)
Geet frowned ' genie also loves me.. & he loves me more.. he expressed it first.
(even his dodo knew it before him, he felt..wat big dodo was he then)
Nt ' he told u he loves u? She asked in shock
(Maan dipped his head in guilt..how he wished he had told her...all those days..under one roof.. he had himself lost to her..& never ...not even once he understood his true feelings for her...she could never.. but atleast he should have..)
Geet '
he didn't say..he expressed it
nt was confused now..
tu kya bol rahi hain
Geet '
di aap bhi na
nt ' tu saaf saaf bol Geet
Geet blushed gain..
genie ne us din raat ko.. pehlen genie ne hi express kiya na..mujhe tho samjh hi nahi aaya ki he was expressing his love.. I just followed wat he did..
(Maan chuckled)
nt '
wait ..wait wait.. u r getting it all wrong
Geet '
no I am getting all right only now. mujhe pata genie loves me a lot, he always did.
(he just cried..)
Nt cupped her face '
he just had a physical relation with u..that too one night...thats it.. there is nothing more to it
(maans heart bleed.. & close his eyes,, that wat it would mean..to any one)
Geet snapped her hand.. aap humera pyar ko physical kyun bol rahen ho?
(he couldn't believe could be so innocently matured)
Nt got angry & shouted at Geet '
god sake damit try to understand he raped u
Geet ' di..she almost raised her hand
(Maan was shocked!!!)
genie would never force him.. he didn't even that night...he could never di.
He looked into my eyes every time..seeking my permission.. when he saw any apprehension.. he just moved away..he never forced anything even in that state of mind. Main hi pagal ki tarah ussen aapne se dur nahi jane diya.

(he hit his head.. & wondered how could he be so careless around her. Though he exactly knew when this could have happened. He was horrified ..& cursed himself.. now realizing the contentment he felt when he woke up the next day..was because of the expression of love they shared the previous night.. he droped his head backward)

Nt was getting angry trying to explain..it was physical..but Geet lost it completely & yelled.. jab aapka aur rahul ka pyar rape nahi hain tho humra kaisen ho sakta hain
Nt ' Geet she roared.
She calmed herself ..
we are married
Geet ' kyun bina shaadi ke pyar express nahi karsakten
nt knew there was no point explaining it to her now.. she will not accept her genie was wrong

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(Maan just hid her face in his palms )
Nt ' Maan it was not easy .. those 4months were so difficult to mange her.
How did u manage her for 4yrs
..she asked him amused
he would rather say how did his dodo mange him. ..took care of him through his emotional ups & downs.. being their for him... every morning.. every evening.. every night.. just for him... & when she was not there ..he lost every thing even the desire to live. ..he laughed at self pity
Nt held his collar ..u know yeh pagal ladki.. was not ready to accept for first 2days that amy was born from her stomach. She was so terrified..she kept gaping at the baby..like she was seeing some strange creature... she kept questioning how can something so big be inside her.
maan just stood numb
Nt.. kanha se lekar aayen tum iss master piece ko. Yeh kya kia tumne uske saat. Kitni bholi aur masoom hain ..how could u Maan??
her grip tighten against his collar ..how could u be so cruel to her.. how could u rape her.. not once..not twice.. god knows how many times that one night. His couldn't face Nt..he tried to look away.. Nt jerked him angrily.. how could u Maan? How could rape ur best friend...if thats wat u considered her!!!maan tried look every where...but not her.. his face darkens & he was filled with inward grief! with shame, feeling worthless.. no longer able to understand what love is..maitri is..
-maitri part 70-
Precap
Maaneet confrontation
-PREV PART 69 NEXT THREAD 9-
thanxs a lot for all the comments
love u all a lot
please please comment..I AM WAITING FOR UR RESPONSE ..LIKES & COMMENTS...shall post the next part the moment get them😳
will PM later
love
muskan

Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

me🥳on independence day me first yay Di🥳🥳🥳 Geet is so innocent and she loves her genie so much😳😳😳Genie and dodo get married soon😆😆😆 awesome update di👏👏

Edited by angelgurti - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yeyyy !!!! Me second after a long time...!!!!🥳

Update was awesome...!!! Loved the way Dodo took Genie's side n was not ready to hear a single word against him...!!! Dodo is such a sweetheart !!! 🤗

Rape !!! 😲 😲 😲 How can Nt think so low of Maan.. 😡 😡 😡 But I guess..she din't have any other choice left as Maan din't show up after that night...!!!!

Atleast Geet knew that he loved her n not raped her !!!! That felt much better...!!!! Poor Amy... His mother cud not believe that he was born frm her stomach 😆 😆 😆

Awww... Maan doesn't know where to look...!!! He must be feeling so embarassed... Anyways...the last line was superrrb Di... Will be waiting for maaneet confrontation...!!!!

Thanx for the lovely update n go sleep now...!!! U might be feeling sleepy...sleepy 😉
Edited by Sameenaas - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update ...really reaaly wonderful one.

loved the way How Geet defended Maan that it was his love not rape,when NT claimed his act nothing but rape.


waiting for their confrontation.

please ...peash ...cont. soon
Edited by -dia- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Where do I hide myself?

How I wish I could bury myself somewhere?
Als, this world is too small,
Alas, this earth is too shallow,
To be able to take the depth of my mistakes!
Why am I even calling them my mistakes?
They are crimes that I commited,
Crimes for which no punishment can suffice,
Crimes the punishment for which was borne by you for me!
How I wish I could die,
Sadly that the most cowardly thing to do now!
My child needs me now,
I will do all to save him, I vow!
But, is he my child at all?
No, certalinly not-he is just yours...
Keep him away from even my shadow,
For I might harm him, hurt him, trample him,
The way i did to you, your feelings, your emotions, your love...
My heart bleeds, but its nothing...
Nothing compared to the endless tears that you have shed,
the lonliness that you combatted,
And the love that you still saved for me!
Why? How? When?
Why do you love me-I am not worth you!
How could I do this to you-you are so innocent!
When did I fall for you-perhaps the day I met you since!
I am a devil-burn me, scream at me, kill me!
Shout at me, abandon me, blame me...
how can you still forgive me,
How can you still protect me?
Why do your eyes still speak love?
I fail to look at myself...I fear to even open my eyes,
But, even when they are closed, my heinous crime chases me behind those shut eyelids...
I am doomed, but thats what I deserve,
What hurts is that I brought upon your doom,
When you needed my love-I gave you lonliness,
When you deserved to be treated like a princess-all I gave you is hopelessnes!
Tell me-what do I do? where do i hide myself...
The oceans seem shallow, the earth insufficient...
Edited by princess163 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
thank u so much for updating promptly.
bechara maan...only if he knew...

Edited by basicquestion1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved it...Finally the confrontations... Waiting... update soon please...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Muski,

Thank you so much for the update...

I have no words...it was juss amazing...

I loved how NT tried to explain it all to him...

Will he repent? Will Geet let him repent?
Is the question...

I cannot wait for their confrontation...


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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing yaar👏...

maaneet confronatation...omg...dieing 2 read it
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome muskii, absolutely loved it, writing maans expressions is very nice, Geet is very very naive , now cant wait to see what the confrontation going to be how maan is going to face her and vice versa that too after maan coming to know that Geet loves him exactly what he is wishing for so long and other side he is reason for all the pain she had to face !!!


Muskaan please please please update soon ya :) love you lots for giving this to us.
Edited by cyberprincess - 14 years ago

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