-Immoral WORLD-3- PART 41 pg 128 - THE END - Page 58

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Posted: 14 years ago
i dont know but i not very satisfied wid the end... i know its ur story ur creation... u have all the worlds right to draw any end according to ur wish... bt i felt like maan deserves much more punishment.. he doesnt deserve love and family.. he does nt deserve ppl around himself to call his own... he destroyed an innocent girl...
dev raped geet physically and maan did the same wid her bt that was emotional rape... he killed her widin her... he make her live in hell when she needed the most care and love... he sleept wid her sister in front of her eyes... how could she forgive him..
being cold is not a punishment for maan.. its like geet is punishing herself... she is also an human being... even she deserve love and happiness... i can see that she did it for her childs better future.. bt bt bt.. is it the right thing to do.. i m sure she can never forget the words maan spoke about the unborn sia... and i m not surprized that she differentiate among her kids... cos maan is the one who started that differentiation...
a conversation between mia and geet regarding geets loving more sia and maan over hear it will do great i think... it may be like that..mia asking her why does she love sia di more ?"
geet saying she(sia) does nt have anyone except me to love.. so to fulfill her love cota i love her more baby and mia innocently asking about how sia does nt have anyone else.. she has dad as well and geet very clearly and firmly explaining her that no sia does not have maan as her father as sia is only her child only her... and maan over hears the conversation...
i dont know i m not a writer.. so does nt understand the craft very well bt i cant digest the fact that geet accepted maan after all the pain she had been through for that moron...
dont take me wrong... i m not talking about revenge... i m not a revenge seeker kind of person bt i dont even like ppl forgiving without any valid reason...

ohh god i have gon mad... its just that this story have been very close to my heart and thats why i am a bit to much sensetive about the end story line...

forgive and forget if i hurt u wid my useless opinion... love u and u know that... dont u??!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loived it, amazing update.continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yaay u carried on :)))) muahhh
Feel so sadd for geet and sia...that part was dramatic
Awesome...plz cont soon x
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Posted: 14 years ago
u r defo d best.. ossm updates i jus want more revnge fo maan u r makin nt hard enuf fo hm!!!:(he shld get more tortures fo what he did to geet!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
hiii
awesome update
loved it
poor maan
hope geet can 4give maan nd move on from da past
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome updt
loved it
so maan finally questioned & geet expressed her thots
hope maan convinces her
poor sia & mia
cont soon
thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow,,,,wat an update,,,,,,,,plsss update more parts
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome updates...

Finally they are letting out their hear to each other... they are sharing their pain, fears ... everything... eagerly waiting for the next update...
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Posted: 14 years ago
poor maneet r facing so much
cont next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hwy waiting for update...
as some situation are such that we can not give any opinion...
as can understand Maan is regretting but is it that easy for geet to accept what ever he says...I dont know aht she must have suffered when sia had born...
it takes years to build the trust ...but takes just second to break it...& it takes never to build broken trust...

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