-Immoral WORLD-3- PART 41 pg 128 - THE END - Page 10

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

geet shud never forgive maan..even if he die of remorse or repent...she shud b strong n shud leave him to die... but NO MAANEET IN THIS FF PLZ...MAAN SHUD SIMPLY ROT IN HELL

first time.. heheh
i am reading a comment where my reader do not want mannet..
oh i am happy.. happy that i sussefully showed a negitive character is always negative.. :D
hehe

I totally agree with bhanu Keya...I too don't wanna see Maaneet together in this FF...Geet deserves to have someone else in her life..someone who loves her to death and shovers all his affection on her...it would be great to see MSK suffering and repenting for what he did...I wanna see him in pain ...plz make him suffer for what he did to Geet...

I cannt belive maan can do this

Congratulation for the new thread.lovely update hate maan gnu to Mary Mancini wat wrong with him.I can't take it no more he need to knw the truth n geet should nt go back to him easily.

Immoral WORLD

PART 32

Maan stood by the door, feeling disgust to walk in. Geet finishes her breakfast. And then tries to get up, but tummy didn't let her. She smiles, creasing her stomach. Maan felt jealous, furious. It's not his child. It's not his kid. She deserves to be no where.

Every time he does something wrong in purpose, he could see the love and pain. It shatters her. He didn't like her smile. No. She doesn't deserve the smile.
Maan "done?" geets eyes snaps from her stomach to him. "don't you feel disgust living under my roof? With someone's els kids? You sickening me! You are sick. I find a postratude on the road to be more honest then you.
Geet wasn't sure what he was talking about but his word hunted her. She felt so low and disgust about her self, she slowly picked her self up and walked towards him...
Geet "ap hamse aysy rudke bath math Karo. Apne hi hame aiha ko ane kha tha!" her voice was low and quit. She just wanted to here him... Hear him talk to her...
Maan "talk? What talk? How shall I behave with you?" anger, bitterness was clearly visible on his face. He hated her mere presence. He wanted to see her crash. Yet there was some attraction. He could have left her to die out there, but he couldn't. He hates this child, her family is the reason behind the disappearance of his brother.
Maan "first your dad betrayed our family with all those property and now you have betrayed me."
Geet "no, no" she nodes a no. "papa have never done anything."
Maan "shut up!"
Geet "why you won't listen to me?" she holds his hand in order to bring him close, make sure he listens... But he won't. He snaps off his hand.
Maan "don't you dare touch me!"
Geet "I am your wife.." she pleads.
Maan "you are my servant! Actually even my servant have much greater position in the society then you."

Geets heart shattered again. Seems like nothing is left in her heart now. It have been broken so many time that now there are no strength left to continue. Her eyes looked at his... Unable to take anything in.
How her heart cries to see him with her sister, yet she still love him. Maybe it's best to leave... Maybe it's best to leave him, if that's what makes him happy... If that's what he wants.

She wipes her tear way. Couldn't take anything in, couldn't agree any further. In which way can she convince him, that she never cheated on him. She never did, she was raped. Her father never took over there property, because she gave all of them back before he died. She never wanted this child but she only thinks it's his child... The day she found out.. Its the feeling that matters..

Maan walks in to his room. Nandini already have left. He walks towards his wardrobe, looking at his family photo. His sister life is ruined, his brother no where to be found and his dad no more. What could he expect? After all this, be nice with her. Never. He rather die then see her happy. What was his family fault, they tried to keep way, but seems like they love calling them self close to him...

Maan makes his way to the office... Nandini walks in... He comes round and hugs him from the back, "when are we getting married?" she wonders. Maan instantly frees him self... And gives him a look...
Maan "marriage?"
Nandini "ha..."
Maan "what?" he gives out a mockery laugh. "I can't! I have hidden something.. I am already married!"
That came no surprise to nandini, actually both knew well. This is no surprise. But nandini acted any way...
Nandini "what?"
Maan "yes, why don't you go and ask her to give me a divorce then maybe we.." he smirks...
Nandini did a big mistake. She ran out instantly, without asking who is she? Where is she...

That gave maan a reason to smile, he just gave it way...

Nandini walks in to the jail, looking at his brother brij sitting on the corner of the jail.
Nandi "bhi!"
Brij "have you done it?"
Nandini "yes, he agreed to merry me."
Brij "keep your distance and make sure soon after marriage you get the property paper sign.
Get that geet out right now!"

Nandini nodes "dint worry bro.. Everything will be fine."

Nandini walks in KM.

next-?

awesome update great waiting when would maan come to know about all this .

awww amazing part Keya...so Brij has sent Nandini to get even with him...me wondering if that jerk Maan would come to know that Nandini is Brij's sis...

Lovely update
Looking foward for more

waiting for some more great updates