NEW FF ON MAANEET:NAINA TORE - Page 28

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago


part 32-


Geet:oh my god!!!!!!

That's what she exclaimed when she saw herself in the mirror and blushed profusely

From the morning every one in the dining table were giving her odd looks and teasing her ,and maan had been ignorant to her glances'''''..leaving her to wonder what was wrong with her

Latter when she came for a bath she heard a loud gasp escape from her mouth soon replaced with a moan

Geet:ummm maaannn

Maan:geet you look great with those love bites'''''..it explains what has transpired between us last night

Geet:everyone was staring at me'''''''mmaaannn plsss

Maan:geet we are married and then no one will regret or refuse to what we share

Geet:but maan vo'..mai I I .im''''.

Maan picked her up and placed her on the bathtub filled with foam

Geet:maan what are you doing???

Maan:thought about sharing a bath with my wifeee darling

Geet laughed and soon it was supressed in his scorching kiss_____________________________

Neil-she was 19 then

Dev-is it

Neil-yes 19, brilliant ''''''and beautifull

Dev-young too'''''..not that shes old now

Neil-she will fry you if you call her old

Dev-love''''''was it really love or crush'''..attraction'''''.facination

Geet-I don't know what love is''''''.its too deep to comprehend

Dev-bhabhi kab ayi aap

Geet patted his head and side hugged neil-just now devarji

Neil-devar jii yuckyyy

Geet threw her head back and laughed only to be highly admired by neil

Geet:I was in my 1st year '''''''..commerce

Neil-and she was fabulous in the subject

Dev-and he was in 3rd year naa??

Geet-yes he was'''''..he my Mr. champion '''''''.

Neil-geet madamjii pyaar me aise pari ki phisalgayi

Geet wacked neil-dev''''.i was already there in army at that time

Dev-he was a champ in tennis and you used to silently cheer him

Geet-admire him''''''goshhh I used to feel so annoyed when he would change his shirt in front of all'''''''attention seeker

Dev-he was never bothered about the glances people used to give him though

Geet sighed-I know

Neil-I thought she will continue studying commerce and do some job and in secrecy continue her army career''''''but she chose to be a photographer and went further in being a commando

Geet-if I continued with commerce then I had to do a 9-5 job which would not let me focus in my army carrer anyway

Dev-then seeying his condition she decided to be a commando and chose photography as it depends on the photographer to work or not

Geet-I still remmember that horrible night when he was attacked

Neil-thank god that geet was there to save him''''''else

Geet-neil''''''''please

Dev-you are the best geet I m proud to be your devar

Geet laughed-bhabhi bolo dev else your posseeessiiivvveee bhai will scold you

Dev-waise neil pata hai bhabhi ki natural beauty ab shaadi ke baad to kam hi dikhne vaali hai

Neil 'matlab Dev-concealer ki to b00tles lag jayengi lovebites chupane ke liye

Neil smiled geet blushed and dev-chale bhabhi lunch to ho gaya ab ill drop you at handa residence and head to my work

Geet-chalo dev bye neil

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precap-pagphere ki dooriyaan😃

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Edited by chandreyeeroy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow me first to comment.
Pls reveal Mr Champion's identity soon.
Thanx for update and pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum update chanduu. loved it. totally.
dev's dialoues wer fab,
especially the one

Dev-waise neil pata hai bhabhi ki natural beauty ab shaadi ke baad to kam hi dikhne vaali hai

Neil 'matlab Dev-concealer ki to b00tles lag jayengi lovebites chupane ke liye


this lines were awesum.will be waiting for u to return n give me moe updtaes.



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Posted: 13 years ago

Wow

Loved it

Do continue

Thanks for the pm

👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice FF...

do add me to ur PM list...sent u request...
maaneetsangel thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Love bites😳😳
i wonder whether Maan will let geet be away for one day also😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank u for the awwwesome and regular updates 🤗...still have to catch up with some of the earlier parts...love this FF ❤️...really appreciate u giving us updates inspite of being busy with Navratri...Happy Durga Puja to u too...hope u have a wonderful trip...TC...Ratna 😊



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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update...
so it was maan she loved from start...
waiting for next

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