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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Shru !!

Your note appalled me! You are in any way NOT going to discontinue this fic... You have a long way to go, girl 🤗
I have sent you a pm on your other account. Check!

love
Vini
P.S: m out right now. Will comment by night!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey!

So, I'm just going to pretend nothing happened! I thought over night, and I realized, that this FF, and these people who have stuck with me for so long, DO matter a lot to me! I cried thinking about closing this thread, because I just opened it last week, and I have sweet memories attached to each thread, and I've made great buddies, all thanks to this FF!

And so, no, if some couple of people had the insight to take my apology in the wrong way, had the perception to view things differently from how they were meant to be, that doesn't make it reason for me to discontinue something that is so dear to me! I could PM parts to people, but what's the point? It won't ever be the same that way!

And why should my loyal readers suffer because of a selected few? They don't deserve it, and if I say so myself, I don't deserve it either! And nor does this FF! To think this FF is all about friendship and love, but I lost out on a few because of obvious miscommunication! Whatever it is, I would AGAIN, like to apologize, from the very bottom of my heart to anyone and everyone I've hurt! It was NOT intentional like some people assumed it to be, and nor was I trying to put anyone in a bad light! I felt bad about giving people a bad time on the whole comments front, and so I apologized! It should have been taken at face value, but it wasn't taken that way, and there's only this much I can do about that! You guys can accept this apology, think I have hidden intentions behind this as well, for all I care! I did my bit by apologizing, its up to you guys to accept it! There's little I can do about that!

I want everyone to stop further discussion on this! For those who think I'm wrong - I'm sorry for being wrong, for those who supported me and think I'm right - I love you guys a lot, and if anything, it was you guys who made me hold back on the decision on discontinuing this FF for good!

Again, I'll get very little out of hurting someone over cyber space, and also, none of you guys know me personally, so I would really appreciate it that problems against me will not be highlighted here on. I have problems with the comments, not with you guys personally. And about the comments, you guys can comment if you'll want, not if you don't, I swear, I won't be saying a word about that from now on, I'll do my bit by entertaining you guys with my work! That's what I'm here to do, and I will do it!

For those who are out of time, who have busy schedules, I just wanted you guys to drop in a comment sometimes. Because I too have a busy schedule! That's all I asked for, and although I may have been rude while expressing this, I can't help it, I like being appreciated for my work. Its a human feeling to want credit and acknowledgement on the efforts you put in. I didn't mean to hurt anybody, why would I? I ain't getting ANYTHING out of it!


And for those who think I take criticism badly, I'm sorry, I disagree, because I don't think I've ever made a big fuss about it! I ask people for feedback to know the majority of opinions, and so I can make amends to the way I write. That's IT.
Also, I don't care about being rude anymore, but if one more person tells me I should take criticism sportingly, I'm sorry, but this particular criticism will not be attended to very nicely. You guys don't know me personally, and words over cyber space may be interpreted in different tones by different people. According to me I take criticism well, and I don't feel bad about it! If you guys feel the opposite - I'm sorry about that, but there's little I can do to change your opinions!


Coming to this FF, I'm going to continue now for those people who stuck with me yesterday, and supported me. Thanks Aanya, Kavi, Jojo, Sanaa, Baby-Girl7, Zarqa, and others who supported me and saw things for what they REALLY were! I adore you guys, and I am going to move forward with the story, maybe update an installment and finish this long pending chapter tonight! Love you guys! x


I don't know how many readers I've lost. But if you guys don't care enough for my feelings, and still feel I'm talking crap, you guys can stop reading, I won't say a word. I bothered with someone, asked them personally why they hadn't been reading, because I honestly cared for their opinions, and it was that which led to this whole load of crap last night. So I ain't going to be doing that again! You guys are free to read if you want to, don't if you don't want to, I'll continue writing now, for those who I care about and who care about me in return.


This marks the end of all further discussion on this topic. Please don't comment on anything now, and if you have things to say about my note and 'tone' in this particular note, keep it to yourself, I'm genuinely not interested. I have clean intentions behind them, and I'm not answerable to anyone. Take offence, for all I care, but there's none meant from my side! Its up to you, how you want to take things! Its cyber space, so I suggest you guys learn to take things at face value, if you don't, its your problem, really!


I'll try to update tonight! I want to finish this chapter! Fingers crossed! 😃 x
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Posted: 14 years ago
Reserved <3

But meanwhile - 🤗

*EDITED*

SHRUUU 🤗

Baharo, phool barsao, Aanya finally apna comment edit kar rahi hai! A minute of silence please, to capture this epic moment 🤣

So, I'll start from where I haven't commented, which is the last installment of Chapter 32. Shit. I am so behind in commenting :|

Hann, so coming to the update, it was okay actually. I didn't like it that much. Definitely one of your worst updates. Okay chill, I'm just kidding, woman. I was bored of writing amazing, awesome, etc, etc toh maine socha ki kuch aur likhti hoon 😆

LMAO I loved the beginning where she's begging him to buy the dress and he says no. It's so typical 😆 She wanted to buy a three grand dress?! Abhi toh ussko daat rahi thi, ki why did he waste so much money on the rooms, etc. She's crazy 😆

Ahahaha Gooo Nikki! She's completely lootofying Abhi. Bechaara. Girl Power!! Woot Woot! 😆

And Munchkin! Poor thing! She has Hitler for a boyfriend! She's right man! No drinking, No playing, toh aur kya karegi? But I love it when Armaan says she can do much more than stare at his face. Reminded me of DMG. You know that part where he "kidnaps" her [in that, "Main, Armaan Malik, Riddhima Gupta se vaada karta hoon..." waala episode] and takes her to his house? Well in the car she's like, Armaan tum kya karte rehte ho, etc etc and then he kisses her on the cheek and then he says - "Agla waala gaal pe nahi hoga." 🤣
Erm so now that I wrote about that scene, I fins it completely unrelated to your FF, but when I read the update, it DID remind of that, God knows why. 🤔

LMFAOO I loved the "You Love Is My Drug" wala part! He's hell bent on annoying her! But I love it when we see Munchkin-Peanuts like that. Especially now that they're fighting. 😳
Buuut, more on that later ;D

"I hate him. I hate the entire lot. Nikki he ain't letting me do anything!"

🤣

🤣

🤣

So, since I have an exceptionally dirty mind, I immediately thought the worst meaning [read: dirtiest] of this sentence. But then I saw the next line and I could totally imagine people looking at her 😆


Ahh, they both need to talk to their respective boyfriends! Haha at that time, I didn't know the real reason for their fight and I thought it was the job so I was like - Why the hell isn't telling him??? But then I did my wittle baby drama and you and Kavi told me. Weee


The yellow dress really was just a piece, literally.

LMFAOO 🤣

I can completely imagine the dress! And the way she's so afraid about what he'll think is so funny 😆 I agree with her though! He charms you, makes you fall in love with him and scares you shitless when he's mad at you 😆


adfhkakdalakjs Armaan's reaction was so hilarious! She left him speechless 🤣

Awwh I really wish things are alright between Abhi and Nikki, soon!


Awww I love Munchkin and Peanuts!!!! They're so cute in the club! <3 Slow dancing and all <3 :D


"Are you having trouble keeping your hormones in check now?" I teased, but even I knew just how his little confession had caused my heart to take two beats at a time. Armaan didn't reply, but his eyes narrowed at my teasing. I was surprised he had had no sarcastic comeback to that one. But the next moment, I felt his hand running up and down my back, his cold fingers coming in contact with my bare back. I gasped when his other hand pushed me closer to himself, if that was even possible, brining his face dangerously close to mine. His sensuous caressing was definitely creating a havoc in the most obvious ways, and my breathing hitched and I closed my eyes as I felt his hot breath on my lips.

"Are you having trouble keeping your hormones in check now?" He whispered against my lips, breaking the beautiful trance I was in. I opened my eyes, scowling at him as he looked at me cheekily. He was still holding me the same, his hand was still caressing my back, but somehow, the enchantment was lifted. All thanks to his stupid comment. I hated him for that.

But I knew how to take revenge. Determined, I leaned in closer to him, my body completely leaning on his for support, and saw his eyes widen slightly. Smiling, I placed my toes on his feet, shifting all my weight on him, and laughed inwardly when I felt his breaths go shallow.

"I love having this effect on you!" I murmured, rubbing my nose against is. I saw a smile light up on his face, his eyes shut. He looked divine. And I knew what I had to do. Not caring about the thousands of people around us, not caring about the completely non-romantic setting, I placed my lips on his, asking him to respond back, prodding him softly. But I gasped when his arms crushed me in his embrace, and he responded back, with fervor I had no idea he possessed. There was something different in the way his lips were moving against mine, the way his hands caressed my waist, but I loved it anyway. He seemed eager, desperate, for what, I had absolutely no clue. I felt my knees give in and clung on to him for support, I knew I would fall if he hadn't been holding me that way.


dcdajgdkadhladhalnd HOT :O And you say you can't write stuff like this. Right.

This was seriously dreamy ☺️


OMG she[& you ;)] thought Chippendales were Chipmunks? LMFAOO 🤣

Really, Shru. You're so innocent. No wonder YOU'RE Cinderella and I'M the evil stepmother 🤣


And the whole thing after that, I was Aww-ing the whole timee! It was so cute! And awesome! I love M & P <3 <3 *Sigh*


And you write hot stuff really well. Seriously 😆


Oh God, Armaan is so STUPID! Isske wajah se he's naraaz? Idiot! Daffod chhe ekdum! Taara jevo! 😆 I want them to patch up :|


There. I'm done with the comment. *Pheewww*


xoxo

Aanya

Edited by Aanya_taanu4evr - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Aanya_taanu4evr

Reserved <3


But meanwhile - 🤗



You watch Masterchef Australia? I'm watching it right now! 😃


Watch it! It makes you so damn hungry!

And also, for all KSG fans, Zara Nach Ke Dikha is back on Star One, and I've seen the whole season twice, but *sigh*, its Armaan, who wouldn't want to watch him! He looked so cute while hosting it! 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yay I'm so glad u rethought ur decision. Can't wait for this story to go on and create more threads. Cause darling there will be many many more <3

And don't forget about BTHE. And also if u ever need help of any sort. We r here for you :)
Edited by BABY-GIRL7 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
i am very happy that you are continuing and not caring about the people who don't care for you...personally i do the same
now we would not dicuss about all this ever again-not on this thread and nor on lots others to come😊

love you and your fic
tc
luv
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Posted: 14 years ago
YAYYY

And SHRUUU🤗 always!!!!

Edited my comment on Pg 14. sent you a pm about that yesterday!!

and waiting on the complete part!!!!

🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Castle-Beckett



You watch Masterchef Australia? I'm watching it right now! 😃


Watch it! It makes you so damn hungry!

And also, for all KSG fans, Zara Nach Ke Dikha is back on Star One, and I've seen the whole season twice, but *sigh*, its Armaan, who wouldn't want to watch him! He looked so cute while hosting it! 😆

OMG really? im gonna go check if its on in my country too *runs to grab remote*
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Castle-Beckett



You watch Masterchef Australia? I'm watching it right now! 😃


Watch it! It makes you so damn hungry!

And also, for all KSG fans, Zara Nach Ke Dikha is back on Star One, and I've seen the whole season twice, but *sigh*, its Armaan, who wouldn't want to watch him! He looked so cute while hosting it! 😆


Yes I dooo!!! I watch both :D And I've put both in recordings so that I can catch up :D Gosh Karan is...dmiqwehr2lqer n2;fkdnwiuedhwkn...sorry I become incoherent because of his extreme hotness + cuteness 😆

I know right! It makes me feel so so so hungry! Especially when they're doing deserts!!!!

Oh and that reserve is for my comment for the chapter :)

Shru, I am so glad you decided to continue!!!! Sachiii! And I bet everyone else is doing a happy dance as well 😆 And I'm so glad you're feeling better about it :)

You know, Star One's doing reruns of MJHT and Sarabhai vs Sarabhai too...koi unko bolo ki DMG ke bhi karde :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
Im so happy you are not ending it Shru! you should continue doing what you love with all the happiness in your heart! im sure i said this before and if i havent then im saying it now...you should totally become an author and make this story in to a actual book to sell! its amazing Shru and i cant wait to see what you have in store for us!
Love you and AWOTB very much X

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