Maaneet.. Just like Heaven UPDATING - Page 46

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Posted: 14 years ago
thankyou all will be updating shortly
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi all
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Part 9:

He ate it until the chilli sensation ended. And sat down there on the floor panting geet was laughing like mad and then in a flash her hand accidently touched the bowl full of flour and it fell directly on maan's head

Geeettt… maan shrieked gaining attention of both dev and dadi

Kia hua baite dadi ma came followed by dev. Who burst out laughing looking at maan.

Oh who kuch nahi dadima he glared at geet and got up.

Per aap niche kia ker re thy or ap k uper ata q gira wa hai.

Wo umm I slipped.

I did not know ishq insane ko slipry bhi bana daita hai.

Dev maan picked up the other bowl full of baisin and threw it on dev.

Ha now who is slippery?

Maan ye ap aj dev jaise harkte q ker re hai.

Me batata ho dadi ma sach

Aj ye sach ki awaz dab nahi sakti

Dev … maan ran behind him as dev started running all around the place. Finally maan got hold of him as dev fell on the ground he sat on his back holding his mouth.

Ab bol k dikha.

Maan dev ye kia tamasha lagaya hua hai apne. Aisi harkte to ap logo ne bachpan me bhi nahi kit hi. Hame ap se ye umeed bilkul nahi thi.

Dadi ma was fuming with anger.

Both got up.

Wo sorry dadima wo sari galti is ki hai na ye bhag k yaha ata na me is k peche ata

Nahi dadima bro ki galti hai he threw that baisin on me.

Nahi dadima geet ki galti hai usne mujh pe ata… and he realized what he said.

Kis ki galti hai.? Dadima said

Umm wo umm dadima wo.

Neend ki dev added. Wo kia hai bro ko bohat neend aria hai waise bhi ajkal her wo chhez jis me double e ho wo bro ko bohat pasand hai so don't worry dadima

Dev . dev ran for his life and maan after him.

Me aik pote k liye pshychiatrist dhoond ri thi yaha to dono hi pagal ho gae hai.

Dev locked his room and after knocking actually kicking at his door for 15 mint he returned to his room only to find geet sleeping there peacefully.

Oye uthu yaha se mera bed hai ye.

Geet just stirred

Is se bad me nibatta hu phle naha ao nahi to bathroom me bhi ajae ge.

He went in had a long bath trying to relax. And then came out

Oye utho yaha sse he pulled the blanket from her.

Oye nahi utho ge she pulled it back

Ye mera bed hai

Mera bhi hai.

Your bed is in outhouse

Mujhe waha akele dar lagta hai

Kis se bhoot se .aww so sweet madam tum khud bhoot ho is liye wahi ja ker raho

Mujhe bhooto se dar lagta hai is liye me apni body k pas nah ja sakti . me yahi raho gi. Aise mere body dar gai to

Tum coma me ho kaise daro gi or wo bhi khud se

Mere body mera bhoot mera dar apko kia hai. Me yahi so gi.

Whatever give my blanket back.

Nahi do gi

Ye mera blanket hai

Mera hai

Mera hai.

They were pulling the blanket

How r u doing that. Are ntyou supposed to be transparent or something like that how can you hold something and pull.

Ab phir se batao bhooto ki category..

Nahi nahi I m good but still blanket mera hai mujhe do

Ab ye mera hai or me nahi do gi

Mera

Just then dev came

Bro wo mr chopra ka phone aya tha. He had preponed his meeting to tomorrow.

Mera blanket hai geet pulled it

Mera hai. He pulled it back

Kia ? dev asked

Oh wo mera blanket hai

Mene kab kaha mera hai.

Nahi wo tum aisa kaho na isliye me tumhai bata raha tha.

Bro you know what you have lost it.you have got two options either talk to me or to pshychiatrist.

Dev tere to nikal yaha se abhi k abhi he pushed dev out

Geet pulled the blanket back mera hai

Whats up with you tum karo gi kia blanket ka. Its not like k tumhai sardi lag jai gi ya something.

Bro what the hell who are you talking too.

PRECAP:

Maan trapped btw dev and geet😡😡😆😆😆

Maan catching geet's chori.😳😳😳😳😆😆😆

next update after 90 pages😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amaaazzzing;D
So funny;D
And 90 pages:O
isnt that too much??
btw..continue soon;D
thanks for the pm;D
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Posted: 14 years ago
Heheh 😆 When will Dev find out abt. Geet not being wify but a bhootni or Maan realising Dev's wify idea
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Posted: 14 years ago
Funny part
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update i was holding mu stomach laughing aall the way...update sooon...cant wait...
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg it was really funny
geet is scared by her own body 🤣🤣 and telling him about bhoot category🤣
can't wait for next part
plz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
wonderful update...
maan and bhootni geet ka T& J fight is simply awesome.🤗...waiting for some cute romance...😆😆😆 please continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
this was so funny...i loove how dev was teasing maan...he thinks his bro has completely lost iy...haha...continue soon n thnxxx...
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Posted: 14 years ago
🤣 🤣 🤣omg this is sooo hillarious...Maan to gaya kaam se...Geet aur Dev ke beech pagal ho jaayega...hey bhagwaan Geet jaldi coma se bahar aa jaaye to bechare Maan ki jaan choote.😆
thanx for pm. Samra.

Edited by tushti-kiran - 14 years ago

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