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lively-piia

@lively-piia

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#61

nice update...

though confusin concept...lvin it..

thanx 4 pm

chao

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Dilsay

@Dilsay

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#62

Lovely updates dear 🤗

Me back again sorry for delayed comments

I read the last 2 updates simply wow...

the story is gripping and toucing and pogressing very well...

So its clear that Maan is not her husband...

I could feel the agony and pain of Geet for what she has done..

brilliantly written👏

The concept of this FF and how ur narrating is dramatic and enchanting .

Simply awesome 👏

We now know a lot about Geet but nothing much about Maan..

will wait to know more about him in ur coming updates...😆😉

Me as usual greedy to ask for more updates..heee

love ya for writing so well...😆

wishing you all the best for this FF and the other one and for more to come.😊

I hope people get to see ur work soon.

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Magicia

@magicia

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: Dilsay
Lovely updates dear 🤗
Me back again sorry for delayed comments
I read the last 2 updates simply wow...
the story is gripping and toucing and pogressing very well...
So its clear that Maan is not her husband...

I could feel the agony and pain of Geet for what she has done..
brilliantly written👏
The concept of this FF and how ur narrating is dramatic and enchanting .
Simply awesome 👏

We now know a lot about Geet but nothing much about Maan..
will wait to know more about him in ur coming updates...😆😉

Me as usual greedy to ask for more updates..heee
love ya for writing so well...😆
wishing you all the best for this FF and the other one and for more to come.😊

I hope people get to see ur work soon.

could u believ just now i send u pm

Nobody was liking my other FF , no demands ..hnghee ..so i thought about what u pmed and .. this ... the story was in mind ... i have many many stories , just need to put ingredients of maan , the perfect male body and the perfect sensuous doll lol

so i decided to get little infamous then continue the other one , which is really cute lovely love story ..., i just wish i could be able to express it in the way i conceived ,,,thanks for teh first pm ,, which became a moto for me..lol

Edited by magicia - 14 years ago

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Dilsay

@Dilsay

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: magicia

could u believ just now i send u pm

Nobody was liking my other FF , no demands ..hnghee ..so i thought about what u pmed and .. this ... the story was in mind ... i have many many stories , just need to put ingredients of maan , the perfect male body and the perfect sensuous doll lol

so i decided to get little infamous then continue the other one , which is really cute lovely love story ..., i just wish i could be able to express it in the way i conceived ,,,thanks for teh first pm ,, which became a moto for me..lol