Mystery Girl updated Note on 148 - Page 7

Originally posted by: Dilsay

Lovely updates dear 🤗

Me back again sorry for delayed comments

I read the last 2 updates simply wow...

the story is gripping and toucing and pogressing very well...

So its clear that Maan is not her husband...

I could feel the agony and pain of Geet for what she has done..

brilliantly written👏

The concept of this FF and how ur narrating is dramatic and enchanting .

Simply awesome 👏

We now know a lot about Geet but nothing much about Maan..

will wait to know more about him in ur coming updates...😆😉

Me as usual greedy to ask for more updates..heee

love ya for writing so well...😆

wishing you all the best for this FF and the other one and for more to come.😊

I hope people get to see ur work soon.

Originally posted by: magicia

could u believ just now i send u pm

Nobody was liking my other FF , no demands ..hnghee ..so i thought about what u pmed and .. this ... the story was in mind ... i have many many stories , just need to put ingredients of maan , the perfect male body and the perfect sensuous doll lol

so i decided to get little infamous then continue the other one , which is really cute lovely love story ..., i just wish i could be able to express it in the way i conceived ,,,thanks for teh first pm ,, which became a moto for me..lol

Wow...awsome!!! Damn innovative yaar...m totally hooked 2 dis 1...thnks 4 d pm

awesum update

just read your story...look interesting...add me

wow!!!!

now i get the story she is full filling her

may be try to finish today itself ./... otherwise ..long u have to wait