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Originally posted by: spvd

part 7
glad that Maan is alive...
does Dev have any hand in this?

Originally posted by: jasraj123

awesome updates. all three parts r really nicely written and now the story is flowing very well. u r doing a wonderful job as compare to ur first ff.👏 LOL ..i like this comment ..hmm once the other story pick up pace u are going to love it ...trust me,,,

,, pls continue and make us happy more and more.

and how exactly it can be done??...winking

i really like the way u wrote the flashback and then the maaneet moments. poor maan can't do any thing just has to bear geet hain😆

thanks for pm and pls update soon

Originally posted by: spvd

part 9
wow what planning...
so no one knows that Maan is alive and getting treated...
what about the Empire?

Originally posted by: spvd

part 10
wow lovely...
Maan in the beginning was really irritated by Geet...
but hes getting to know more about her...
but Geet doesnt have any clue about that...