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Posted: 13 years ago
wowww loved it
i feel so bad for maan
n they all in same college
waiting to see what happens next
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful...i just loved it...

at least geet is no longer angry on kaka...but then she is also not willing to hear abput maan... :((((((

n now they will all be doing their MBA same place...but that sameera...urggghhh...y did she have to come...

continue soon n thnxxx for the pm...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Great update. I hope Maan and Geet get to talk soon. Thanks for the update and PM!
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Posted: 13 years ago
maan geet sameera yash pinky dev all in same college..hehe sooo nw we r gng to watch college game...hope maan will makeup wd geet in here...
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Posted: 13 years ago
maan should now bout now y geet is not talking.. cont sooon
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Posted: 13 years ago
I am feeling very bad for Maan...😭
I will be waiting eagerly for the next part
You are getting better day by day!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updt
lovely
finally geet forgave kaka
hope she forgives maan soon
wats up wid dis yash & sam
cont soon
thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
I really feel bad for maan but i think it was his childishness so plsss wan to see soon maaneet together again.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part-43

In the College'..

Pinky hey yaar lets go to canteen its very hot here'

Dev... Shutup mujhe pata hain tujhe canteen kyun jaana hain Bhookad..

Geet: chuckles to hear this'

Pinky: Gives them with an angry look'

Geet: Controles his laughter'

Dev: kya aankhe dikha rahi hain.. Hum yahan Pizza of burgers kaney nahi aaye hain.. remember..

Chal apna form fill kar'.

Pinky: Geet yaar tu kar de naa kitna boring form hain'

Geet: what form bhi boring hota hain'

Pinky: aur kya.. agar ismey puchte kii which film u like, hootest man u ever seen' tho thoda intresting bhi hota par' yahan par tho Percentage, Marks k alava aur kuch hain hii nahi

Dev: Geet tu isko chood yea tho paagal apna pagalpan nahi choodney wali saath main humko bhi pagal kar degi'.

Geet: theek hain I will fill your form' tum dono chup karo'

Tumdono kii baaten sun sun kar mujhe chaakar aaney laga hain'.

Chal apna form de main fill kar deti hun'

Pinky tu meri best friend hain'. Aur yea pata nhai kahan sey mera bhi ban gaya aur vo bhi twin'

Kaash tu meri bhen hoti'

Geet: tu mujhe baksh de main teri friend ban ke hii happy hun issey jyaada khushi mujhsey bardasht nahi hogi'

Dev: chuckles'.

Pinky: what do u mean ' ki main acchi nahi hun'.

Geet: mera matlab yea nahi hain' vasie bhi tu yea kya lekar beth gayi hain' tuhje bhook nahi lag rahii'

Pinky: arey haan... Tum dono ke chakkar main yea tho bhool hi gayi mujhe bhook lagi hain'.

Geet: haan tu chal main yea form submit kar key aati hun'..

Pinky: haan par jaldi aana'..

Geet: haan haan' tu jaa' hum aatey hain'..

On the other side Maa, Yash & Sameera also comes there''

Maan: yea forms kahan available hongey'

Yash: chal inquiry counter pe puchte hain'

Yash Saam tum ruko hum aate hain'.

Saam ok''

Maan and Yash proceed to inquiry counter''

Saam is all alone there''.

Dev noticed her and lost in her beauty''..

Dev kitni sundar ho tum'..

Geet: thanku' but I know'

Dev; din't answer her back Geet turned and notice he is looking at Sameera'

Geet: Yea parkati yahan kya kar rahi hain'..

Geet: Dev chalen'. Form submit karney'.

Dev din't heard him''

Geet: oye Devdas calen'.

Dev: heard this''..

Dev: who'..

Geet: You'..

Dev: Geet tub hi naa haan chal''

On the other hand Maan and Yash also takes forms and came'

Yash: Saam take ur form and fill it up'..

All three of them start filling their forms'.

Back to Geet and Dev'..

Geet: suddenly feeling Dizzy'

Geet: dev I am not feeling well can u pleas submit my form also''

Dev: why what happened .. everything all right naa'.

Geet: Yaa everything is all right'. Its just because of this hot weather'..

Dev: u sit here I'll go and submit them'.

Geet: ok''

Geet: she sits on the nearby bench'

And Dev went for forms submission'..

Maan noticed Geet'.and lost in her''..

Yash: saw maan hey champ kya hua' form fill nahi karna'..

Maan: haan haan''..

Maan: Geet yea yahan kya kar rahi hain'.. vo bhi akele' yea pagal tho nahi hain abhi yea puri thera theek bhi nahi hui'. Aur yahann akele aa gahyi' yea ladki khabi apna dhayan nahi rakhti''

Maan Main abhi aata hun'..

Yash: But champ where are u going'

Saam noticed Geet'.

Saam: haey vo dekh geet vahi jaa reha hain yea majnu'.. both laughs'.

Maan went to Geet'.

But Geet was not there'.

Maan: vo yahan thi naa phir kahan gayi'..

He looks for her''

On the other hand Geet is looking for water'.

Geet: Yahan ek water filter bhi nahi hain'' Se really feeling Dizzy'.

She put her hand on her forehead'. As she having blackout''

Maan noticed her'.

Yahan hain'.. lagtha hain isko chakkar aa rahe hain'.

He ran towards her'..

She is about to fall but Maan holds her''

and lifts her into his arms''.

Dev noticed Maan with unconscious Geet'..

Dev: isko kya hua'.

Maan iski tabiyat kharaab thi yea yahan kya kar rahi hain'.. aur tumney bhi isko akele chod diya'

Dev nahi vo actually'..

Maan: ab koi excuse mat do'.. jab tum iska dhayan nahi rakh sakthe tho apney saath laaye kyun'

Dev: Par yaar'

Maan: shut up ab jaake iskliye Paani lekar aaoo'

Dev: haan' and he gone'

Maan put her on the bench and continuously call her name to make her awake''

Yea hitler sab kaa dhayan rakhti hain par apna khabi nai'..

Yash & Sam also comes there'..

Yash: isko kya hua'..

Maan: iski tabiyat teek nahi hain phir bhi yahan aa gaye'. Aur Vo bhi apney us carless friend k saath

Yash: who''

Then Dev came there'..

Yash: Dev tum

Maan haan yea hii'.

Sam: MK let it be ab bolna band karo aur Geet ko hosh main laao'.

Sam sits near Geet and Make her conscious

Geet: Tum sab loog yahan kya kar rahe ho'.

Maan: shut up jab tum apna dhayan nahi rakh sakti tho kam sey kam aisey careless ke saath tho nahi aana tha naa'.. pointing towards Dev'

Geet: Din't reply him'.

Dev; hey excuse me''..

Maan: you please now don't give us any excuse'.

Sam: MSk tum bhi naa Geet kii tabiyat theek nahi hain aur tum loog jhgada karney main lage hoo'

Saam: Geet I think tumko ghar jana chahiyee'. U need rest'..

Geet: thank Sam but I am fine.. vo bas dhoop key vajah sey chakkar aa gaya tha'..

Maan: no Geet you are not well I'll drop u home'..

Geet: again dint reply him'..

Suddenly Pinky also comes there'.

Pinky yaar tum dono kahan reh gaye pata hain main vahan bethe bathe bore hoo gayei thi'..

Pinky Noticed Yash Maan & Sam'..Hey Guys tum log yahan kya kar rehe hoo''

Yash: hum yahan dance kar reahe hain'.

Pinky: Dance very funny''.

Dev: VO actually geet Got blackout and she fainted'

Pinky: What Geet u are ok naa''. In a concerning tone..

Geet: don't worry yaar I am absolutely fine''

Pinky chal hum ghar chalet hain'..

Geet: ok lets go'

Maan: Main chod deta hun.. naa Geet tumko'..

Geet dint even listen him' she thanked Sam & Yash and said Dev chalen'..

And they leaves''

Maan: y she not even answer my questions'.. she thanked everyone except.. me'

Is she trying to avoid me but why what happened' I have to find out'.

Yash: Tum dono ke beech kuch hua hain kya'..

Maan: pata nahi yaar kya hua hain'

Sam: I think vo tumhaari kisi baat sey bauth hurt hui hain'.

Maan: Par teen din sey hum dono main kuch baath hii nahi hui'

Usdin Prem Bhai ke ghar pooja main aaney sey phele tho vo mujhsey bilkul normally baath kar rahi thi'

Par us din key baat sey vo meri taraf dekhti bhi nahi aisey behave karthi hain jaise main exist hi nahi karta'
Saam: I think u have to talk to her and soughted out every thing' issey pheley kii dair hoo jaaye'..

Yash: Give a shocked look to her'.

Saam: what happened why are you loking me like that'.

Yash: its very strange u are very changed'

Sam: How''?

In the Malhotra Menssion'.

Kaka tried to call Maan but he is not picking it up'..

Then Kaka call on khurana's Home Mrs. Khurana'

Hello' Kaka Maan hain kya

Mrs. Khurana: Nahi maan tho nahi hain aap kaun'

Ramukaka: main Ramukaka bol reha hun'.

Mrs. Khurana: aap'.

Kaka: main uska no. try kar reha hun par vo pic nahi kar reha'.

Mrs.Khurana: vo actually vo apna phone Ghar par hii chod gaya hain''. Kuch Baat hain kya '

Kaka: nahi kuch kass nahi bas Geet sey related kuch baath thi'.

Mrs. Khurana: theek hain Maan Ghar aayega tho bata dungi' vo apko phone kar lega''

Both chuck the phone''

Maan: is still lost in his thoughts'.. and went from there''

Yash: I thought u hate geet and u will take revenge for her as Maan ditched u for her'.

Sam: its not like that.. Yaar its not MK's fault'.. actually I already know that MK likes Geet but in my own ego I always avoid it' but nowI realized that MK really loves her a lot'.. and they are made for each other'

Yash: I can't believe this u are talking like this'..

Sam: ok so don't'.. and laughs..

Sam: where is MK'..

Yash: chal usko chod hum tho apna form submit kar deyn'.

Sam: Par MK kaa form'.

Yash: here it is ' chal uska bhi submit kar dete hain''

And both also proceed to submit their forms''..

Geet Pinky & Dev are on the way to Malhotra Menssion'..

Geet: Yaar tum dono Maa Paa ko kuch mat batana'

Pinky: Par yaar auncle aunty ko tho batana hi padega'

Geet: nahi bekaar hi tension le lenge dono' Pls. Mat batana''

Dev: u are right Geet'

Pinky: ok agar tum dono bpl rahe ho tho sahi hi hoga'.

Maan came back'.

Mrs.khurana: Beta tum aa gaye'..

Maan: Haan Mom'..

Mrs. Khurana: vo actually Ramukaka ka ph. Aaya tha '.vo tumsey kuch baath karna chahate they''

Maan: theek hain main unsey baat kar lunga'.. and he went up to his room''..

In Malhotra Menssion''

All of them reached home''..

Kaka: Beta tum aa gayi'

Geet: Haan kaka'.

Kaka: tum kuch thaki lag rahi hoo' are u ok.?

Geet: Haan kaka I am fine..

Pinky: Nahi kaka apko pata hain Geet'. And Dev pinch her''.

Pinky: ouch'. Kya ker reha hain pagal'..

Par tumney tho sirf Auncle aur aunty ko mana kara thana bataney k liye'

Geet: hey bagwaan kya karun main is dumbo ka'.

Kaka: Tum log kuch chupa rahe ho kya'.

Geet: haan kaka par vo hum friends k beech ka secret hain'' hain naa Dev'.

Pinky: yes yes she is right'.. Shows that she knows everything'..

Dev: Tu chup kar'..

Precap: Maan & Geet Confrontation...


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Edited by geeta.muskan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww poor Maan
but he kinda deserves it
can't wait for their confrontation
cont soon
thanks for the pm

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