I can't tell u that I LOVE U # 3 - Page 18

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Posted: 14 years ago
to hell with Mr Khurana ... Her dad hangup the phonehmmm her DAD is J of MAAN...

Originally posted by: sldeeps

i hate u...i hate u Maan

Maan: thanq very much for hating me

Geet: i want u Maan...i want u

She is looking at his lips and eyes, she is hesitating to kiss him. Maan moved forward.

Maan: Geet... i am waiting

Geet: Maan...i am sick

Maan: let me get sick along with u

Maan pressed his lips against hers'.


Waiting fot the next
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Posted: 14 years ago
me waiting... when are you gonna update
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update ...
i liked the truth revealed ...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shrutheAjay

me waiting... when are you gonna update



work under progress 🤓
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sldeeps



work under progress 🤓



How long will it take???
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -dia-



How long will it take???



i think 2 hrs
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Posted: 14 years ago


Ok ...Thank U😛

looking forward
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Posted: 14 years ago
PART - XXVIII


Maan: Geet... i am waiting

Geet: Maan...i am sick

Maan: let me get sick along with u


Maan pressed his lips against hers'. He is expressing his desire to be with her, she felt relieved that he understood her love for him. Maan is no mood to end the kiss, Geet moved away so Maan broke off the kiss reluctantly. She hugged Maan tightly indicating how much she missed his touch.


Geet: i wish to hide in ur hug till the end of my life


Maan broke off the hug, wiped her tears and kissed on her forehead.

Maan: bus Geet...no more tears...vaise rote hue tum sexy nahi lagte ho


Geet hit his shoulder and said "Maan stop teasing me" with a smile. Maan took her hands into his, he kissed her cheeks and placed trail of kisses on her neck. Geet is losing her self control at Maan's mischief. Geet moaned "Maan plz...". Her sexy voice is encouraging him, he didn't pay attention towards her pleading.


Geet: plz stop it Maan


Geet pushed him away from her and took his hands into hers.

Geet: Pari will be waiting outside...i want to thank her

*****************

Pari is anxiously waiting outside, though she knew that Maan would understand Geet's problem. She is worried whether Geet will open up before him or not. She is got a message from Maan

"want to c Geet smiling? "


Pari felt relieved and happy looking at the message and went inside the room. Maan is sitting beside Geet on the bed. She went to Geet and sat on the other side of the bed, so that Geet is between Maan and Pari. Pari hugged Geet tightly.


Geet: thanq Pari

Pari: stupid u have been crying unnecessarily instead of speaking out ur problem

Geet broke off the hug.

Pari: u speak unnecessarily without any break about silly things, but u keep quite when u have to voice out important things...u CRY BABY


Maan gave Hi5 to Pari and said "u r absolutely correct".

Geet got irritated as both of them are pulling her leg.


" i am not a CRY BABY" she tried to push both of the them away from the bed. But they didn't move and at the same included her in a group hug.


Geet: u r squeezing me...get away ...i am sick ...i need some rest


Maan and Pari are laughing and didn't move from the bed.


Geet: guyz enough of fun...plz stay away from me...u will also get sick ...plz enough of ur love and all ...stay away from me


Pari stood up from there and stood beside, Maan left her hand unwillingly and got up from the bed.

*****************

Geet got discharged from the hospital next morning. They have attended the office and got engrossed in the work. They have got busy with their work and didn't think of the Geet's marriage issue in between. They have presented their work infornt of the client. The client got satisfied and appreciated the team. The project is almost finished and they are returning to INDIA within one week. When Alex announced that they are returning to INDIA within one week and the flight tickets are also booked for them, Geet got worried and thought of discussing with Maan once.


Geet is thinking what and how to discuss with Maan. Maan came to her room to spend some time with Geet. Geet is lost in her thoughts and didn't notice Maan's presence in her room. Maan came near her and sat beside her. He took her hand into his.


Maan: Geet what are u thinking?


Geet came out of her thoughts listening to his voice.


Geet: we are returning to INDIA within one week...i won't be working anymore...i have to resign my job as i have promised my parents...and if i am not wrong my dad should have selected a guy for me buy now...what should i do now?...how should i tell him that i am not interested in marrying the guy of his choice?


Maan: did ur father tell u that he has already selected a guy for u?

Geet: No

Maan: then y r u coming to conclusions


Geet: Maan u r not aware of my father, i know about him...he is very serious about my marriage this time...i don't know y he is in a hurry to get me married...y don't u try to understand what if my guess is correct


Maan: Geet ur father loves u so much. He won't ruin ur life by getting u married to a guy whom u don't like...so just relax...all u have to do is to tell him everything openly


Geet: but i am very much scared to talk with him about the marriage...i have given him the promise


Maan: look the promise is not more important than ur life for ur father...so stop thinking negatively and talk with him...everything will be solved...trust me...y don't u call him now...yes common do it, call him now itself


Geet: Maan now itself, i am not prepared...i don't know how he would react

Maan: don't worry, just do what i say


He handed over the phone to Geet indicating her to call her father.


Geet: hi dad

Mohindar: ha Geet...bolo beta

Geet: dad voh...voh Maan...voh i am returning to INDIA within one week

Mohindar: very good...i will inform this to ur mother she feels happy

Geet: voh dad...mujhe aapse ek aur baat bolna hai...voh Maan

Mohindar: Geet ur retuning within one week then we can leisurely talk, now i am in a meeting...i will call u later...bye beta

Geet: dad ...but


Maan: what happened Geet

Geet: he hanged up the phone without listening to me...he has never given me an excuse that he is attending a meeting till date...he always attends my call however busy he might be...now a days papa is not talking openly with me Maan...y do i feel like he is ignoring me intentionally


Maan: y do u think he is giving u an excuse, he might be really busy

Geet: no Maan i am sure that he is avoiding me...but i don't know the reason y he is behaving in this way with me


Maan: we are left with only one option... we have to talk with him directly. We are going to INDIA within no time, so we have to wait till next week


Geet: Maan r u sure that dad will accept for our marriage

Maan: it might be tough to convince, but we will definitely do it...don't lose the hope...i am with u...u can trust ur honey


Geet smiled and rested her head on Maan's shoulder.

Maan: 7 long days to get everything cleared

Geet: ya


Maan gave a tight hug to Geet and kissed on her forehead. Geet is looking straight into his eyes filled with love towards him.


Maan: Geet don't look at me like that

Geet: y

Maan: if u look at me like that...i can't stop myself from making u mine completely


Geet blushed and lowered her gaze.

Geet: stop it Maan...i am leaving now


Maan stopped her by holding her hand.

Maan: Geet my gud night kiss


"gud night honey "Geet kissed on his forehead, released her hand from Maan's grip and rushed outside the room before Maan could catch her. She went to Maan's room and laid on his bed. Maan is left in Geet's room with cutie beside him. Maan took cute into his arms.


Maan: chalo ab tumse hi kaam chalata hu


He hugged cutie and slept in Geet's room. Geet is still thinking about her conversation with Mohindar.


*****************

They have completed the project and deployed the software at the client's office. They are involved in giving proper training to the staff at the Client's office about the usage of the software they have designed. Finally the day has come, when they have to return to India. Geet packed her luggage and left the house reluctantly recollecting all the mischief she and Maan has done, the surprise they have planned for Pari, how she and Pari played pranks on Maan and how Maan used to cook for her and Pari. They have reached the airport and Alex came to give them send off.


Geet's face turned pale and her face appeared sad. Maan asked her if she is fine or not. Geet didn't answer him and Pari giving the excuse of head ache. Maan sat beside Geet in the plane.


Maan: Geet as soon as we reach India we will discuss with ur father and convince him for our marriage


Geet smiled to Maan as reply. Maan took her hand into his and is lost in his thoughts planning how he should convince her father.


PRECAP: Pari maine Maan ko kho diya...ab mai tumhe bhi nahi khona chahti hu



PART - XXIX

Edited by sldeeps - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow awsome yaar ..loved it !! hope geets dad hasnt arranged for any alliance ...
short this time ??
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Posted: 14 years ago
Beautiful!!!

loved the part!!!

What's wrong with her Dad???😕


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