FF: You & I...Collide 2 Prt21 Pg132 Oct26 - Page 90

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

i was buried in my books most of the day...oh...and i managed to finish a update for my own story...but ya,,,this was gud entertainment...u know u are so so so so so RIGHT...how can ppl being so one-track minded? i mean...only Maaneet...would it make sense for Maan and Geet to leave the person who stood by them in their hardest time? just cause the person the once LOVED is back in their life...it makes no bloody scene...yup...we are in the same boat 😆 first of all...good usage of the CAPS!! 😉...but thats exactly what im talking about...usually in stories Maneet are not together for reasons that dont tie back to each other...so their union makes sense...but here, yes NT did the planning and all...but at the end of the day...as grown people...their decisions and their choices is what left them apart from each other...after all they've been through...why put them back together...especially since they've moved on...with good people who deserve happiness too...kuch bhi hojayeh..im NOT hurting Adi Kent and Sam 😳

And as for the song...i listened to it...and i really like it...the lyrics are awesome...the way he talks abt the wrong he did...and their relationship fell apart...

and i know what a maha sad OS that can be made on this...and if u write it...ohhh...it will be awesome...So Maan is going through a guilt trip because he wronged Geet in some way...and it's too late to fix their relationship now...rite ? not so much "wronged" geet...but literally what he SAID to her (i think im taking the CAPS too far now 😆) ...something from the past comes to bit him in the butt...wait...ill msg you on FB...dont want all of IF to know the story line now do i he he😉

p.s kill me but i will ask the big question...lolz...are u updating tom? not that there is any rush or demands for my side...just for moi info...cause i keep chking then...but i know u didn't post the teasers yet...so if u aren't...take all the time u need... yes and no...will update two stories...other two will have to wait...just not sure when im updating tomorrow...probably at night...my usual time...lets see if the plan sticks!! 😛

The magnamity of the revelation in this update is sinking in ... and OMG its way messier than I ever thought it would be ... 😭

I dont know how to put it in words any more ... umm phir be lemme try 😊

Thank you for loving my Naina .... the emotion behind this small sentence was way beyond words ... this shows wat Geet must've gone thru after being deceived by the one she loved so much and still loves even after all wat she did to her ... she still loves her unconditionally ... and thats why It must've been so unbearably painful to handle her pain ...

How hard it must be for Geet and Maan to relive all those painful memories again … its takes a lot to move on from a relationship that meant the world to u … and its all the more painful when u've finally succeeded in moving on and one fine day everything comes back to haunt u ….

Geet knew everything yet its so painful for her .. imagine how hard it is for Maan … my poor baby … how earth shattering it is for him to know that he was deceived by the person is loves the most in this world … who's happiness he always put above his own … am happy he has Sameera otherwise by now I guess he wud'be had a nervous breakdown … after all he is also human …

I can imagine the extent of his shock and hurt … when u mentioned that the tears in Naina's eyes dint even pinch him….. The same tears for which he wud move heaven and earth to get rid of … 😲

I wonder after experiencing such a deception at the hands of the person you loved the most so much so that u wud do anything for that person's happiness … will u be able to believe in relationships or trust anyone ever again ? that's extremely hard I guess … such things shakes the soul so much that trusting again becomes a huge huge thing

Maan never got his parents love … yet he made sure that his baby sister doesn't feel the emptiness … and when finally he fell in love … something which belonged to him only … it was snatched away from him… yet he went ahead and got married to Sameera just because his baby sister demanded a family … he did fell in love with Sameera but that wud have been a long and painful process … even after doing everything for his baby sister... she left him … left him to endure the pain of loosing a loved one once again … and then loosing his baby twice … why so much pain for him? 🤢

Naina is one twisted female 😡… WTH firstly she caused this mess and then she gave him more pain by being so rude with him and ruining everything more … just because she wanted to punish herself … wat about the additional pain she inflicted on Maan … I dunno Jazzy but I don't feel sad for her anymore … though I don't support the rape … but I don't feel bad for her … not any more … I can understand her insecurity when she wanted to separate Maan and Geet but her behavior afterwards I can digest … initially she was selfish and insecure since he just had her big brother in her life and she dint wanted to loose him … but wat about wat she did later on … she was again selfish … just to inflict pain on herself she gave more pain to her brother.. wat kind of twisted love is it …

Am so glad that Maan and Geet have Sameera and Adi .. especially when they said to their partners to hold them … gosh that was painful …

Dare any one say anything to my Maanu jaanu .. the guy had endured so much pain already … he went thru so much just because he loved his sister to death …

Chalo after all this gets settled… Maan and Geet will be at somewhat at peace … that their love for each other was pure and real .. not just superficial … so wat if they weren't meant to be … but at least they loved each other though the cracks in the hearts remain .. and it does pinch .. but they were lucky enuff to get over the pain .. and were able to find that pure love again .. that's a big thing .. isn't it

Phew!! .. one more done now 3 to go ( I just realized that I have to edit my comment on the OS too 🤢)..

Originally posted by: sindu555

The magnamity of the revelation in this update is sinking in ... and OMG its way messier than I ever thought it would be ... 😭 see...i told you from the beginning...well not just you...but everyone,..there is so much to the story...but everyone was just laying blame and shouting for Maneet 😆

I dont know how to put it in words any more ... umm phir be lemme try 😊 irshad irshad 😉

Thank you for loving my Naina .... the emotion behind this small sentence was way beyond words ... this shows wat Geet must've gone thru after being deceived by the one she loved so much and still loves even after all wat she did to her ... she still loves her unconditionally ... and thats why It must've been so unbearably painful to handle her pain ... yes...Geet was like a true parent to Naina...she loved that girl unconditionally...even after what Naina did to her...she loved her...just like any mother would..just like every mother does...😳

How hard it must be for Geet and Maan to relive all those painful memories again ' its takes a lot to move on from a relationship that meant the world to u ' and its all the more painful when u've finally succeeded in moving on and one fine day everything comes back to haunt u '. it took Maneet years to move on and become just Maan and Geet...before the became SaMaan and Adeet...but the past is like that...kahin bhi tapak padta hai...and it throws you off your game...just like it did to these players of my story 😛

Geet knew everything yet its so painful for her .. imagine how hard it is for Maan ' my poor baby ' how earth shattering it is for him to know that he was deceived by the person is loves the most in this world ' who's happiness he always put above his own ' am happy he has Sameera otherwise by now I guess he wud'be had a nervous breakdown ' after all he is also human ' omg...can i say i love you...i was surprised at how man Maan haters are out there...not that i blame them...cuz thats their view...more power to them...but im so happy at least you are on his side...he's not a perfect man...he's flawed too...and he's paid the price as well...not like he got off scott free...know what i mean

I can imagine the extent of his shock and hurt ' when u mentioned that the tears in Naina's eyes dint even pinch him'.. The same tears for which he wud move heaven and earth to get rid of ' 😲 he's become numb in a sense at everything thats happening...his way of protecting himself from breaking down at a time when Sam really needs him more than ever...but...his shell will crack...

I wonder after experiencing such a deception at the hands of the person you loved the most so much so that u wud do anything for that person's happiness ' will u be able to believe in relationships or trust anyone ever again ? that's extremely hard I guess ' such things shakes the soul so much that trusting again becomes a huge huge thing well...even though what Naina did was wrong and all...it was done...and it pushed Maan into another life...he has to take that into consideration...the man has a lot of thinking and looking back to do...he he...more emotions and demons to come out 😉

Maan never got his parents love ' yet he made sure that his baby sister doesn't feel the emptiness ' and when finally he fell in love ' something which belonged to him only ' it was snatched away from him' yet he went ahead and got married to Sameera just because his baby sister demanded a family ' he did fell in love with Sameera but that wud have been a long and painful process ' even after doing everything for his baby sister... she left him ' left him to endure the pain of loosing a loved one once again ' and then loosing his baby twice ' why so much pain for him? 🤢 i know Maan has suffered...and maybe a tad bit more for him...but i promise...he will get his happiness...they all will...after all this...itna toh banta hai...but your right...he did loose another loved on...i never looked at it quite that way...you got my mind turning with dialogues and scenes for Maan ⭐️

Naina is one twisted female 😡' WTH firstly she caused this mess and then she gave him more pain by being so rude with him and ruining everything more ' just because she wanted to punish herself ' wat about the additional pain she inflicted on Maan ' I dunno Jazzy but I don't feel sad for her anymore ' though I don't support the rape ' but I don't feel bad for her ' not any more ' I can understand her insecurity when she wanted to separate Maan and Geet but her behavior afterwards I can digest ' initially she was selfish and insecure since he just had her big brother in her life and she dint wanted to loose him ' but wat about wat she did later on ' she was again selfish ' just to inflict pain on herself she gave more pain to her brother.. wat kind of twisted love is it ' she felt that they were in pain already...so by picking at fresh wounds...she would give herself new ones...a bit out stretched...but something that happens...so i went with it...but i totally see what you're saying...

Am so glad that Maan and Geet have Sameera and Adi .. especially when they said to their partners to hold them ' gosh that was painful ' i felt like they needed their better halves (as reya says) because everything that was happening was just so much to handle 😭

Dare any one say anything to my Maanu jaanu .. the guy had endured so much pain already ' he went thru so much just because he loved his sister to death ' phir toh dont read a few of the comments...particularly Muskaan's (7thHeaven) she straight out said...errm...how about i not tell you lest you KILL her!! 😆

Chalo after all this gets settled' Maan and Geet will be at somewhat at peace ' that their love for each other was pure and real .. not just superficial ' so wat if they weren't meant to be ' but at least they loved each other though the cracks in the hearts remain .. and it does pinch .. but they were lucky enuff to get over the pain .. and were able to find that pure love again .. that's a big thing .. isn't it definitely...definitely a big thing..it says that they were strong enough to not only feel the pain and deal with it...but that they got past it and moved on to find happiness...that says a lot about a person...they didnt just give up even if they may have wanted to 😭

Phew!! .. one more done now 3 to go ( I just realized that I have to edit my comment on the OS too 🤢).. he he...i was about to PM you and start harassment but you came before i could...jaz so proud!! you're sticking to your word! *hug* 😳

Originally posted by: jnawaz

hey guys...sorry for the delay in the teaser but here it is...ENJOY!! (😉 @ reya) 😆

"How can you be so calm about this?" Maan asked, as his voice began to rise. "She changed our lives, she took so much from us we broke up because of her."

A sad grin came on her face as Geet contemplated whether or not she should say what she wanted to say. She decided that she would tell him because she didn't want to hold anything back. It had been ten years since their lives had been torn apart, and though she had moved on with her life, she knew that there were unresolved issues when it came to her and Maan. It was time to lay it all out and put the issue to rest once and for all.

"We didn't break up because of Naina," Geet began, "We broke up because of you."

JAZ

intresting teaser ...

Originally posted by: jnawaz