FF: You & I...Collide 2 Prt21 Pg132 Oct26 - Page 88

Originally posted by: acjanfeb1

painful and touchy for me jaz. Guilt cannot make u sleep, eat or to lead a normal life . It makes u crippled from mind . carrying a extra baggage on ur shoulder for 10 yrs was not so easy fot Nt . Atlast she broke ,unleashed the guilt . cannot blame anyone now... little Nt did becoz of insecurity . maan broke relation becoz what is been showed and Geet did becoz Nt made herto do .loved it jaz. moved by the update and emotions u potrayed .

i am so thankful that i havent experience that kind of guilt...any guilt has been over small things...nothing major...things that when i look back...its no big deal...but to walk around with that kind of guilt...gosh i dont know what id do 😭...i love that now you dont blame anyone...they were all victims and they all paid their price

JAZ

Originally posted by: Lip-a-Licious

that was fantastic Jaz... ⭐️

oh alright what you said makes senses... one baggage at a time 😆

i suppose Maan can suffer some more in the next update 😛😆

haila...a full 3 line comment from you behoodi! 😲 *jaz faints* 😆...Maan's suffering will only begin in next update...aage aage dekho...hota hai kya 😉

JAZ

Originally posted by: spvd

part 20
Jazzy u have really made me a masochistic person dear... lol!! why? aaisa kyun hai? 😲
thanks for the update now here goes my comment...
first Maan is such a DISAPPOINTMENT... what?! 😲
he has failed in every relationship he savored so much...
i just dunno how to what more extent i will hate him in this story...
he MARRIED Sameera even before he discussed it with Naina? he didnt discuss proposing to Geet w/ Naina...or breaking up with her for that matter...why must he discuss Sameera with Naina...know what i mean...im just saying...thats one way to look at it
how the hell could he do that?
and second like according to his conscience how the hell could he just give up on Naina when she moved out to Cal without keeping tabs on her? he kept tabs on her...he just didnt have an actual relationship with her...she was no longer his sister when she left...she had distanced herself...she did everything to make him hate her...and for the most part it worked...
i just honestly feel like strangling him with my bare hands dear...
he just for NAINA gave up on his so called love and Geet just for Naina and how could he not have all the info about her whereabouts and he get married just like that?
i absolutely hate him to no extent...wow...i think you're the only one with such hate for him...eeps...might want to steer clear of the next update 😆
and Naina oh my heart goes out to her yaar...
even now also u made me to cry...
the poor lil' gal has repented so much and did every single thing to punish herself... she did...she suffered so much
good she will never accept Sameera as her bhabhi nor to her heart so theres no way she will love her like Geet... maybe she wont love her like geet...but story abhi baki hai...you never what might lead to acceptance
truly though Naina did this to Geet only SHE loved and still loves and will love Geet more than anyone else... no arguments there
Maan failed as a brother as well as a lover... i think failed is too harsh...circumstances put him where he is...i think his downfall was that he was trying to be a good brother to Naina...it just backfired cuz she lied
if he had discussed with Naina about him marrying Sameera at least for a bit i would have considered him but now i just hate him to no extent...
so for Naina's sake for a family he will just marry any girl? Naina said she needed a family...she never said anything about that family being with Geet...not until she threw her fit and by then it was too late...there is even a flashback about that...i think...i have to chk what part 😆
and Geet she now is regretting so badly to have uttered those words to Naina years back...
Geet and Naina has the purest love for each other then and now too, all through the years... the central point of this ff is Naina...and right next to that is Geet and Naina's relationship...watch for more on them soon
liked the Geet Arjun scene...
Adi is here to take care of Geet and i wanted Adi to be there than Maan...
now too Maan's priority is Sameera and his baby, well i cant feel bad for that but this guilt should always be in him... his guilt will come...dont worry
Naina always moves me to tears yaar...
enough of her hurting herself...
not anymore she deserves happiness from Arjun and her GG by her side... i agree...she's been through enough...time for some happiness for NT
now what more shock u are planning to give?
bacchi par reham karo...
my heart wont be able to bear any more dear...
me will be reading this again then might edit more... not really a shock...just a change in perspective...which will catch you off guard
cont soon dear...
any possibility of getting the update sooner than the usual monday schedule? nope 😛
i hate u dear but still love u to the core...
now going to read the remaining 3 updates...
u and i is the first priority and i have accepted the self giving pain to myself... lmfao!! we've come a long way!! im so proud!! 👏
PS - All the Best on ur professional front dear and do share the news later... news in next update!! 😉

Originally posted by: krati5

oh god... i'll jst sy oh god... naina ws a child at time. cunning though a child... who doesn't even get d parent's love... i knw maaneet were there with her... they hd more thn ny1. both loved her first instead of other... but may be d void hv still left sumwhere. its jst may be... she was a confused little girl who acted on impulse...no going back...but you're right...both maan and geet loved naina first...

i dn't abt next update. at ds position ever1 is rg... geet is crying for naina... feeling more hurt thn for herself... maan hv so many responsibilities... sameera is also too imp... i think this s wht is called as actual circumstances... actual situation... yes! thats what i tried to show...some realism...not just fantasy...everyone has their point of view and they are right in their place...

awesome update...👏 thanks!

Originally posted by: harshdb

thanks for such a long update... which is i m was waiting for the most...one more shock???? update soon. thanks for the pm.

one more...only one left!! promise...well...maybe not promise...but most likely!! 😆

JAZ

Originally posted by: ammu5

fabuls update. nt 9yrs old ruined maaneets life with her insecurity. really feel sorry for all of them. as a child may b she was right as she was possessive of her brother. because of her all r suffering. she is being punished for her deeds.

she has been punished for what she did...her one decision changed all of their lives...though it worked out now in the present...it was a painful road for them all

JAZ

Originally posted by: anuandavi

Lovely update. Twist kya he, r u going to make Sam negative?

😲 dont say such things! never!! Sameera is one of my fav characters...if not the most fav character in this story...he he...that is NOT the twist!! 😆

JAZ

Originally posted by: mystique_girl

amazing...specially in the kind of storytelling that you do...

aww..thanks so much thats so sweet!! glad you enjoy my story telling...i have a blast doing it myself😳

JAZ

Originally posted by: ucompleteme

it was so much easier for Maan to have the holier than thou attitude when he thought Geet left him for her career. Now that the facts are opened and knowing that she knew about Naina, it all falls on his shoulders. If Naina was young and immature, he cannot claim the same. yes...very true...it was...but that is not the case...and there is more to that side of the story...wait for next part!! 😉

Please don't let the surprise be something bad happening to the baby.

Can't deal with that amongst this mess. oh God no!! that wouldnt be surprise...that was be so depressing...i think with two miscarriages already...Sam has been through enough...a happy and safe pregnancy for her now...so dont worry 😃

Congrats in advance for what you are hoping for at work. I am sure with all of our wishes you will get it. thanks...😉

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Hi thanks 4 da pm for the teaser n update! Read dem nw only! Emotional, intense n painful update! So Nt told Maan everything! Maan shiocked n hurt! Canaot believe it. Geet n Arjun talk...sweet convo! Geet is pain thinking ant da pst n Adi is der! Poor Maaneet! Maan goes to c Sam n makes her n baby priority! Maan lies to her! Fb n presnet well incorporated! Update soon! Sorry 4 late likes n comments! No IF @ wrk 😭 so can only read updates ! home n I do nt come obn IF all da tym...mayb thrice or fourth times a week! So please bear wid me! update soon. Btw all da bset wid ur news...praying 4 u! U will defn get it! let us know next wk ! So congrats in advance! 😊

hey yaar!! it was definitely shocking for Maan...he had no idea that NT could do such a thing...but now he knows...we just have to see how he deals with it😉...so stay tuned!! he he...i was almost like MAAN DIDNT LIE but then realized he did...he hid the truth...still debating if Maan will tell Sam...i mean...considering her halat and all...what say you? 😳...at least you can access IF at work...we cant even do that...its considered an "entertainment" website that we can only use for 1hr per month...nonsense!! 😡...my new to come in next update 😛

JAZ