FF: You & I...Collide 2 Prt21 Pg132 Oct26 - Page 32

Originally posted by: Myra.nelly

Maan and geet had a history together,that was a young love,put the base for another,for maan was sam hope for geet its adi, or just teached them how to love...they got separated by geets wishes and maans subborness...naina was a element to the break up too,an imp one...but mattered that both maan and geet had diferent goals and no way in between..."they could have been so good together" but faith had another turn to the story...she gave maan atleast the idea of a family with sam and naina and to geet her m ost wanted career...NT made a mistake,perhaps she is remorseful,somehow she was punished brutaly by fate...Thats when they collided again...She is his sister and wife's doc, a wife that he loves,who will make him a dad...Its a beautiful and sad love story between sam and maan...and u wrote it so good that i am enjoying reading it...its a very diferent ff and interesting! The teaser anounces complexity to the story,i love it...mistery attracts...waiting to read more,jaz cause this is awesome!

yay!! so happy you're liking this story!! 😃...its been a hit and miss this one...lol...but im glad that you understand why it is the way it is and why it cant be all maneet and stuff...what i loved the most is taht you see that this story at the end of the day isnt about Samaan or Adeet...or even Maneet...its about Maan, Geet and Naintara...three people whose lives were intertwines in the past...that joins them in the present as well...😳he he...teaser will definitely give raise to some new information and new possibilities...stay tuned!! 😉...

JAZ

Originally posted by: spvd

teaser
wow the Khuranas and the Rathods seem like share rivalry in both personal and professional fronts...

BTW dear i have know come to the terms of it...cooled down now so so much...i dont care about Maan but Geet's happiness hold more importance...finally...sigh...

rivalry will be all out in the open tomorrow...no dragging...and lol...glad you've come to terms with the track the story is taking...lol...bechara maan...saab ke kill list mein hai!! 😆

JAZ

Originally posted by: Mk.Gh

Jaz, Jaz, Jaz! I FINALLY updated my comments for this .. I'm gonna rest my hands a bit before writing my comments for HS's epilogue .. hope that's ok :)

Z

i saw!! im about to reply to it now...so excited!! he he...and yes yes...rest your hands...dont want you to get carpel tunnel syndrome or anything!! 😆

JAZ

Originally posted by: Mk.Gh

OH JAZZZ! Lookie who it is with her mile long comments yay!!! 🥳

Ok so like last time I'll post my comments for both updates in one go, happy reading lol..you took my line!! but it totally fits cuz i do get happy!! 😳

PART 14: AdEet Special <3 yup! 😉

OH EM GEE. If someone has the ability to make me love the concept of Maaneet not being together but with someone else, it's you .. my goodness Jaz .. just gotta say that after this update I am fully satisfied with your idea of wanting to take the story a different route and making Maaneet separate .. only to find better and more suitable life partners. I was a little sad upto this update but after this I have not one iota of sadness left in me that Maaneet are not a couple in this FF lol...welcome to the "dark side" as im sure readers still see ti as!! he eh...😆 ...but im glad that the update was able to show you that even though they arent together they can be/are happy with people that are better for them...and better with them (did that make sense 😕) ...

Thankyou first of all for dedicating the entire update on them .. love how you opened up about how they're much more than just good friends .. up to this point I had just thought they were really really great friends from school but wow .. as soon as she kissed him I was like .. no way hozay .. there is so much more to these two than we knew of! Awww it was wonderful to see that they have such a relationship within the hospital too and everyone seems to know of it .. honestly...at the beginning of the story...they were meant to be friends only...but when i changed the track after making Sameera Maan's perfect wife...i knew i needed to add a romance angle for Geet...why should she be left out..right? 😛...thats when i wanted to use Adi...so i had to show you all that they do have a deep running relationship like SaMaan...😳

The flashbacks .. were awesome! thank yoU!! i loved doing them!! 😳

It was sad to know that although Geet had made such a big and impactful decision for her future without Maan .. that it had still hurt her deeply and she'd been hurting for the first year ... I can imagine .. I mean they'd been together for 3 whole years as a couple .. shared so many moments .. been in love with each other ... it really gets to you if you have to break that off so suddenly and under such complicated circumstances too How you wish for things to go smoothly but sometimes they just never do. Although I would've loved to read more on Maaneet and their relationship and how it grew and perhaps have more flashbacks of them .. but I know if you did that we'd be hurting a bit more that they broke up the pain lingered longer because their break up wasnt mutual...i mean...it wasnt like ...oh we fell out of love...they loved each other so deeply...the break up hurt...because the break up was clashing of egos and dreams...its hard to let that go...so i had to show Geet dealing with that...she cant just move on like nothing happened 😳 ...i hadnt really thought about the development of Maneet...that much...cuz there are bits and pieces in the old flashbacks...your typical bf and gf i guess...lol...but there is more to their past still 😛

But destiny had other plans .. and had paired up Geet with Adi instead .. how sweet is he!? I mean how SA-WEET!? Gosh .. men like him just don't exist .. giving a girl her space and being able to understand her without her speaking so much as a word .. and not taking advantage of an emotional girl .. I was really feeling for Geet when she realized that it was supposed to be her 4th anni with Maan .. I wonder what he did all those times it was supposed to be his anniversary! isnt he!! as i was writing adi in this update...i was like...Maan ko chodo...mujeh Adi chahiyeh!! lol...i was thinking maybe brining in Armaan Malik here for Geet and me taking Adi!! 🤣 and saach mein...humari phooti kismat...aaj kaal ke ladke toh...subhanallah...tauba!

Awww the Fair and Adi totally pampering her was so sweet of him .. just knows how to treat a girl! And I just love how he knows Geet so well from the very beginning .. I mean they'd just been mere friends and by the end of that day together he knew that she'd been hurting because of a guy. To know that he was able to understand her silence kind of cements the fact that Adi and Geet are made for each other ... Maan and Geet were made for each other up until the point where they're POVs and egos clashed and they were unwilling to understand the other's situation to the extent that it affected their relationship. But Adi understood her from Day 1 .. so it just shows you that if you experience heartbreak .. it shouldn't mean forever! Love finds its way to you again someday And it was so obvious Adi liked her from the very beginning .. he's sucha cutie pie tho .. totally love him! that was my favorite line in the entire update...i think ( forget what exactly i wrote) ..but i loved when Adi said that he knows when a girls tears are from a heart break!! i was like 😲 ..how did i come up with that!! lol...but yes...from the beginning...he was ready to take her as is...broken heart...scars and everything...which is what makes his love for her so special...and geet sees that too...everyone keeps saying that will Geet love Adi like she loved Maan...im like...why not...maybe even more...right? 😳

Haha I was totally ROFLing at the whole Frat Bros thing ... esp at the "pigs" comment .. but I mean come on .. she goes with a strapless sundress to a place that's swirming with boys .. what else do you expect from guys than to drool over such a sight .. but I can see that he has a sense of humour too .. nothing like Maan who has either anger or seriousness sawaar on his head and at that point I think Geet knew too that Adi is a really special friend. yeah...adi knows his frat brothers, though harmless, can be complete pigs!! lol...and you're right...had this been Maan...oh those brothers would be nursing a few black eyes and broken noses!! ha ha 😆 ...

Ok so by the teaser I already knew that she said No .. but I was like .. this is Jaz .. and with her .. you can never completely trust her teasers .. so I'm not gonna make a huge fuss cuz Geet probably has to say something more than just a "no" and I was RIGHT see...only my seasoned readers knew to keep calm in the "storm"...lots of people were like omg...why did she say no..and all flipping out!! 🤣 ...i love seeing those responses cuz i know they arent expecting whats coming!! 😆

I guess SaMaan came as a blessing in disguise for Adi cuz after seeing them together .. it made Geet realize just how much that part of her life is incomplete .. the one with a family .. it was void and she opened up in front of Adi about it for the first time .. and just in time for him to propose too how absolutely shweet was that!? And awww omg Adi knew from their first Fair that he wanted to marry her .. that is unreal .. this truly means that they're soulmates <3 They are sooo adorable hayeee haila...did you just "hayeee" at Adeet!? 😲 ...*jaz rubs eyes*...i knew you loved them...but love to the point of "hayeee"...wow...i feel like i've accomplished something!! 😳...but yes...her past with Maan was so painful that Adi never really got the full story...and he never pushed it because he knew it hurt her...and he couldnt tolerate that...so...yes its been a while...but Geet finally opened up...Adi is the poster child for "patience is a virtue" 😆

OMG OMG OMG Jaz you are TRYING to kill Nadia&I .. omg Adi .. shirtless .. after a shower .. KILL ME ! I can just imagine how hot he'd be looking .. and his toned abs and muscles and .. ok I should stop right there .. if I feel this way I can just imagine how Geet must be feeling .. how lucky is she.. she always gets way too hot guys who are always toned and FIT .. she is so damn lucky aahhh. LOL she was totally lost in his physique and he was completely oblivious .. how innocent is he <3 And the whole glasses part was just awww omg .. I know how she feels .. sometimes when people take off their glasses .. it's as if they're a totally different person .. it seems as if you know them more without their glasses on .. I've felt that way before too .. and I've been told the same since I wear glasses ' that I look different with them off.. but not like the way Adi does where you can look into his soul and stuff and ok I'll shutup now ...maybe not KILL you and nadia...but...make swoon and possibly faint...for sure...that was the intention!! 😛...but ya...me too...i wear glasses and contacts...some like w/ glasses...some without...as long as i can see where im going...i dont care what im wearing!! ha ha...but omg...if only guys like Adi existed...perfect in every sense!! even physically!! he eh...😉

Anyways that scene was HAWWWT .. I was blushing profusely omg <3 OMG they're like already acting like hubby-wifey with the whole tie scene .. haha and the comments they're passing each other .. ahh perfect couple much!? Love it! you were blushing from a simple tie scene!? tauba!! abhi se yeh haal hai...aage maine kuch kiya toh kya hoga tera? 😉

Anyways I just feel really happy that Geet has been able to move and and find such a great man who I'm sure will keep her so happy .. not that Maan wouldn't have kept her happy .. I'm sure Maan would have loved her just as much .. but that one tidbit where they couldn't back down from their promises to themselves just put a halt to everything in their relationship .. well I guess it all happened for the better! yes!! i believe that...joh bhi hota hai...aache ke liyeh hi hota hai!! its all planned...destiny and all that 😳

I can't wait to see how Adi really proposes' but I'm sure he's really happy inside .. awww <3 you know...everyone wants to see that...but...i never really planned to include that in the story...it was going to be a quick mention in the epilogue...but...i might have to reconsider 😕

That was one amaaazing update! Loved everything from the proposal, to the flashbacks .. to everything. AdEet are too adorable and awesome :D thank you ji!! 😃

PART 15: SaMaan special itna haq toh banta hai SaMaan ka...😛

Aww well I knew you were going to do this.. and I really wanted you to write up an entire update just on these two so that all our queries are done away with and we get to know how SaMaan's relationship grew from just business to love. how could i not...i wanted people to see that SaMaan didnt just come out of the blue...they were Sameera and Maan first before SaMaan happened 😳

Ok ' the fact that he hated Geet for leaving behind Naina and less hurt that she left him kind of just says it all. That he put Naina on such a high pedestal that she came before his relationship with Geet is something I both admire and dislike at the same time. I admire it because he really takes his relationship with Naina really seriously .. he is a perfect big brother .. he really takes care of her as if he were her father, mother, and brother all in one. Some really protective and someone who you could always depend on .. I guess that eventually turned into a problem because he spoilt Naina and made Naina really obsessive over the hold she had over him .. it made her believe that whatever she asked from him .. he would give her ' even if that meant he would have to get rid of Geet. And that's where I dislike it. I mean yes you love your sister to death but it comes to the point where you give her much more importance than someone who is going to become your life partner. I understand he's grown up to become more protective of Naina because of course his own parents were never there to do their job. I guess it has a major psychological aspect to it too and since this is not psychology class I'll stop my report right there. LMAO lol...that was one of the main points about this update...besides SaMaan relationship...i wanted to give Maan's side of the story to the readers...not that they had to accept it blindly...but at least understand why Maan was so hurt that it was an all or nothing situation...of course he as pig headed...but hey...not everyone is perfect like Adi!! 😛

Anyways, just gotta say that I am glad you showed Maan's mentality and his views on what Naina meant to him and why he put her above all else .. and that was the root cause of the problem! But that doesn't mean he should hate Geet for it .. and blame her for why his life had messed up. For this I think Naina needs to seriously open up about what she did or else he'd always hold Geet responsible for a lot of the reasons why Naina was always in her room, depressed, angry .. and was taking a long time to accept Sameera when she came into the picture. She shouldn't hide that fact from Maan anymore. dont worry luv...just a few more updates and Maan will be all too aware of his sisters kartutoon! (that word reminds me of Pindi Queen telling off NT at her launch party!! 😆 )...also the fallout between NT and Maan will be shown as well 😉

I like how slowly SaMaan's relationship grew. And Maan stayed true to his character .. he started to really fall for Sam when she showed signs of attachment and care for Naina. He saw that they bonded and bonded well. Although Geet had also had a nice relationship with Naina .. more so that Naina trusted Geet enough to tell her everything. I guess where Sam differed was that she did all those things BUT she gave Maan the surety that she'd always put Naina before anything ' even her studies unlike Geet. I guess some people are just different and he liked this difference in Sam which Geet lacked. Doesn't make Geet any less worthy of being Maan's wife .. but as said .. some people are just different (and I hope I got that right .. because if that wasn't the reason .. well then .. that's just embarassing ) 🤣...one thing i love is when my readers over analyze and show me a few things about my story which i hadnt intended but that makes perfect sense!! this is one of those!! keep it up!! im learning about the many levels of my story from yoU!! *jaz pulls out paper and pen* 👏

Wow 3 years Sam waited patiently for Maan to try and accept their relationship as more than just a deal. I feel sorry for her .. I really do. I mean the girl's been through enough already.. and I'm glad Maan took her in even if at first he did it for Naina's sake. At least it gave Sam a sense of security and would take care of her parents too in the process .. I'm sure for that she was all the more willing to wait for the day Maan realized his love for her :) .. I grew to respect Sam when she had her emotional breakdown after her father's death and the morning after she told Maan that she'd been waiting for that moment .. girl had patience and the term "sabar ka phal meetha hota hai" really came true for her! Sam's priority...like Geet's...had been her parents...just in different ways...she was happy being a friend to Maan because that is what made her able to fulfill her dreams and promises for her parents...she's the kind of person who would have waited longer if need be...lucky for her...it only took Maan 3yrs!! 😆

Coming to the all those painful times she had to suffer a miscarriage .. uff that would be extremely heart-wrenching, heart-breaking for any woman :( .. my heart goes out for all those women who so desperately want to have children and struggle and some of them never get to have the joy of giving birth while it's really sickening that some are so easily able to bear children and abort without a second thought (I'm pro-life all the way .. ofcourse that's just my opinion) .. and after all those excruciatingly painful experiences of having a miscarriage I really REALLY hope Sam's pregnancy this time around goes successfully and she gives birth .. I mean both Maan and her have been trying for so long .. and are desperately wanting to take their relationship one step further with children .. I really hope they succeed this time around. Too much torture can really break a person .. I don't think Sam would be able to handle the heartbreak this time around .. even Maan knows that. And if she's under Geet's care I'm sure she'll be fine :) .. it'll make Geet feel happy too I'm sure of it. im a bit of both i guess...pro life and pro choice...abortion isnt something you can take lightly and just get cuz you forgot to use a condom (and by you i dont mean YOU! but girls in general 😆) ...i believe there are certain circumstances when the choice should be the womans...but i totally see where you're coming from!! 😃...only time will tell if with Geet's help Sam's dreams come true of having Maan's child!!

Ok Arjun Rathod .. wow .. who is this dude he keeps calling .. was it his brother? Gosh I hope this scumbag rots in jail for the rest of his life! But .. wow .. Maan has something to do with this family!? This I gotta see! you guessed it...its his brother!! he he...more on this aspect tomorrow! i can promise you...you wont see any of it coming 😈

Again, amazing update Jaz .. loved how both updates really helped establish the two couples and their relationships.. loved reading how these two evolved and how they moved on in life and love :) ' yay!!

Can't wait to see what locha Mr. Maan Singh Khurana has with the Sleezebag Rathod's! things arent always how they seem 😉

Love ya! me too me too me too!! 🤗

Z

*PS: I'm THIS close to getting carpel tunnel * 🤣 ..its funny..i just saw this now...yet i mentioned in your other comment b4 seeing this!! 😆

PPS: I was supposed to have like a trillion emoticons within the comments .. but since I wrote this on Word .. half of my emoticons are not appearing .. so as bland as the comments look. . there's supposed to be emoticons placed within them! lol...challo...koi gaal nahin...they never come up on word...i know from experience...used to piss me off! 😆